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Love In The Ice [15b]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Love in the Ice
Pairing: YunJae/JaeHo
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Non-AU, mild angst, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be married here.

Summary: A script for a new mini-series is left in Yunho’s apartment by his manager, and as he reads it, he becomes more and more intrigued. Unbeknownst to him, one of the leads has already been cast, and the contracts signed. When he too is cast in the project after expressing interest in the part, he gets the shock of his life when he arrives for the script reading to be faced with a person from his past. Someone that he has spent years trying to pretend never existed. How will they be able to get through filming this without killing each other? Or worse…

AN1: Do you remember the time...when we fell in love?

AN2: Oh and if you’re a new reader who has never read ICE, I really think you should because I will make a few references to it without actually spelling it out because the assumption is that everyone has read ICE and are familiar with the plot…

LITI15b

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PS. Did I say Wow!!!!!???? I mean whooooaaaaaahhhhhh! Wow!!!!

/hard sobbing/

orz broken!Jae is the most painful thing that ever happen.. There's a lot of pain, sorrow and misery.. I can't explain the feelings I have for this chapter.. Finally he shared some things that should be discussed by both of them.. Speaking up his issues in the relationship and everything, maybe, will help to redeem the relationship they have somehow lost.. I fcking love how you brought the issues in their relationship and hopefully they'll manage to save each other...

thanks for the wonderful update... really, your writing is so so so amazing.. i can't even....

Unghghghghghgh
I remember when there were chapters that made me a happy emoshinki. This is a bitter emoshinki.

broken jae break my heart on so many levels :( * sobbing * thanks for these beautiful updates mrs.nicki ♥

I wanna cry with Jae. I hope Yunjae could get back together.

I love that you are writing Jae as a very complicated man. The history of his life makes this Jaejoong seem so real and plausible. It's been gut-wrenching to read (I can only imagine how difficult it was to write)but it is truly some of your best work. Thanks for giving LITI-Jae a voice on paper and sharing it with us<3

Wow, I'm speechless.

Jaejoong...Jaejoong..how he must have suffered...how much he's still suffering. I'm just...oh Jaejoong T_T

I don't know what to say. I am totally shaken. And it hurts. A lot.
Your analysis is so tough that I almost feel scratches on my brains.
Jaejoong seems to be completely broken here. Is there any hope for him? Is it possible that this crisis put him back on his feet as a strong man? Could he change this much?

this is actually good... they NEED this talk. they should've talked a long time ago but circumstances were a bit... *sighs*

jaejoong is right though... he is not and will never be a woman and people should stop, really stop, treating him differently... but i guess they are too mesmerized by his face and features and just... act on impulse? but that shouldn't be. i really feel bad for jaejoong... :(

Lack of conversation have played a big role here and I believe it to be true in reality as well. The way Jaejoong has been portrayed has always been taken for granted and you presented and highlighted in this chapter very well. Getting those compliments as pretty, girly, is very different if one thinks from male perspective. Another reason why I'm reluctant to ship RL pair as it makes me feel tiny guilt sometimes and am not big fan of smut in that case, story and wording are main food for me.

Hope YJ and rest of members can talk this properly to sort everything out. Im feeling sorry for both YH and JJ.

Edited at 2016-03-20 10:23 pm (UTC)