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Drabble: Swimming
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Drabble: Swimming
Pairing: YunJae, guest-starring HoMin from The Trophy Wife ;-)
Rating: G
Length: Drabble... Nicki sized OTL
Genre: AU, mild angst, fluff, crossover, an AU of Sleeping Beauty OTL
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be married here :P

AN1: You know how I normally write the opposite of what I’m feeling so that it’s cathartic which is why there’s usually a lot of fluff? And then there are times when I succumb and write whatever mess is in my head? This is one of those times… It’s SB!AU and half way through I lost the plot completely...sigh...

AN2: You must read Promises first because this follows on from that.




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Women let me live please, but damn I really needed this yunjae is soothing to the soul. I really loved the premise of this and this my favorite AUverse always love some babyjoongie.

Little Joongie can make even the coldest person like Changmin crack.
It's interesting how Changmin just jumps into the pool when he is pregnant.

I really miss both these verse.

It's not a mess at all. You gathered here so much love... The feeling is almost overwhelming. Feels so good.
Thank you!

“You didn’t see his face when he pulled him out of the pool. He got to Joongie before I did, and he looked like he’d just lost his will to live. I was hitting him to get him to react…the emptiness in his eyes…Yunho…it was terrifying.”

“He had every right to be terrified.”

“You don’t understand,” Changmin shakes his head. “And I’m not explaining it properly,” the teenager gestures in frustration with a hand, stabbing at the air. “No one should be that attached to another person. It’s not normal. It’s not good.”


/falls into the deep pit of feels/ ok thanks bye. ~_~

i don't consider this a mess. ^^

though it did get my heart beating a bit because of how the scenario unfolded... ^^ pregnant!changmin playing babysitter for baby joongie is just so precious. :)

that moment when jaejoong's young mind 'realized' that yunnie wasn't coming back and then he just jumped into the pool... that reminded me of the similar scene you wrote in your Years series. ^^ similar scenarios tho different outcomes... well.. almost different. the jaejoong in that fic didn't end up in a hospital bed.

teenage!yunho's reaction broke my heart. and it also reminded me of SB --- the scene where jaejoong had not shown up to his own wedding and the car he'd driven ended up in the han river.

clearly, their love for each other is shown in this... regardless of how young they both were.

now homin. didn't really expect min to be that emotional... but being pregnant, i should've. all those hormones and his trauma at witnessing what had happened to yunho and jaejoong in the pool and then his yunho's words... i'd be bawling and hitting yunho too, like he did.

i think all of us are out of it... more than a bit. more so because of what today (july 21st) is. :( i hope your husband will be able to make you feel better. :)

thanks for sharing this.

Y__Y I miss SB so much!!!! thanks for the update!! ♥♥♥♥
sends lots of love and hugs!

So sweet <3 lovely yunjae and sb gosh lovelove, tnx for updating!
Hope u'll feel better soon

Aweeee so very sweett!! Even i am that shocked when Joongie jumps like that into the water..

I loved little jaejoong and his yunnie..

I think some TLC (tender loving care) from your hubby should cure what ever worries you have, Take care and hope all went well eventually. ^_^

PS - everyone adores little Joongie...and there is no way anyone can avoid it.

I was in the edge of my break down cause Yunho did enlist. But then you and your SB AU came. So I think it will be good for me to hold on for awhile. Thank you

It looks like Jaejoong can't swim in SB! AU verse either ^^;

I loved how close Changmin is to Jaejoong in this (TW Min is one of my favorite characters too, so that makes his cameos even nicer ^^)

Yunho is so stoic and just a really, really interesting young man. I love getting to see him as a teenager. He already acts like an adult though and I just love him. I like how you've somehow managed to still bring in a threat of the darkness that the original SB Yunho had in the beginning. It's not that SB AU Yunho is that way, just that you can see how he would be without Jaejoong to turn to.

Jaejoong is adorable. And his heart is so big. That he would actually jump in the water, even though he was afraid, and all to go after Yunho was just really powerful.

I love this story. I love Sleeping Beauty, and getting to see an AU that has Yunho and Jaejoong together from the beginning is just the coolest thing ever. Thank you for writing this, even when you're feeling wrong.

I hope that today's been better for you.


Oh, I love your writing so much! It always moves me. Just wanted to tell you that. Love, love, love!

Young jaejoongie is so cute ;;;

Ahh, thank you so much for writing this, I really love your writing! And I miss SB so much so thank you for this again ;A;

I sincerely hope you feel better <3 Remember it's most likely just temporary, you will get through whatever you're going through soon so I hope you feel better and that your hubby can cheer you up a little more <3

Oh man how I missed baby joongie and his very protective yunnie. Thanks for writing and sharing I love it 💕💕

Edited at 2015-07-22 09:01 am (UTC)