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Sleeping Beauty [5/20]
Title: Sleeping Beauty (5/?)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG13 (for now)
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, WAFF
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.

AN: Wordy Nicki is wordy...

Chapter 5Collapse )

TT.TT why is it that I didn't receive a notification of the updated by LJ TT.TT even if I'm tracking you and this fic!!! (Okey that sounded kind of stalkish xD) but it's the second time. I didn't receive for chapter tree either... T.T okey I'm going to stop whining and start reading it yaaaay

Love the mama bear Jaejoong and the-go-with-the-flow-and-be-all-touchy- Yunho

what a long update. I am not complaining though!!! this chapter is so much fun to read most especially since you left us with that kiss in the last chapter. Waaaaah!!! Jaejoong, I love how you slowly fix Jung and also how you try to straighten his reputation. Can you get any cuter?

I just hope that the people around Yunho will see that he is not really cold hearted and there's a reason why he became like that. His wife is definitely not a saint!

Should I still say update soon? cause you are definitely updating more than what we expect. good job and thanks!

Long chapter is long... wordy Nicki is wordy... Story of my life tbh. I can only be concise at work it seems. Everywhere else i'm long-winded as heck. Jaejoong is very protective ;-) So is Yunho. Yunho very much so actually.

His wife is ugh. Just ugh. I wrote out where Jae finds out about what she did and was bawling my eyes out yesterday.

Lol please don't say update soon. If I haven't updated in over a week, that's fine but it really bugs me when people tell me to update soon when I update pretty fast already ;________;

Seriously, you are the only person that makes me write a review in english, for God's sake.

This chapter... Oh, God, this chapter is by far my favorite. The first one was great but this? Dear godness, it is so cute I could die in happiness. And Jae, ¡Jae! You are doing such an amazing job with your story, honestly. The way you are handling Yunho is superb, by the way. I love the pair-- no, I love how you write about them.

Don't worry, keep writing at your pace and in my opinion, this is one of the best YunJae + baby fics I've read.

I'm very flattered and it's a good thing since I won't be able to understand anything but English anyway o_O

Awww hehe i'm pleased you like this. I love writing Jae and i'm happy you like the way i'm writing Yunho \O/ I guess i'm writing this story from the reader's POV. I'm writing what I want to read lol.

Thank you soooooo much for your lovely words omg. I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy right now *____*




you win

this must be my punishment for the baby spam yesterday. /crawls into a corner and decays happily/


P.S. THANK YOU FOR BEING AWESOME AND UPDATING SO QUICKLY! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Joongie is soooo cute! Add baby Jiyool and grumpy bear Yunho and the story is complete. Maybe with sunshine Jae in his life Yunho will revert back to being the nice boy that he was. :) Loving this story very much!

Lol. Jae is super cute. He's so much fun to write that I find myself squeeing sometimes OTL I really think i'm weird. Happy you love this ;-)

i want to worship you for this beautiful piece of yunjae goodness..your story stirs my heart the way romantic novels did way back in high school(oh god!now i feel old) ~thank you for updating so soon..:)

Yikes lol. Please don't worship me :3 I'm just a writer. I'm pleased my fic seems to resonate in you though. I have to admit i'm REALLY not the romantic sort so i'll have to take your word for it re the romance novels lol. Hehehe and you're welcome ;-)

Yunho mind filled with jaejoong, it's kind a therapy for yunho to forget his dead wife
leaving office in 12.30 pm with the baby girl sick as the reason.. ahh ~~ excuse..excuse Jung !! hehe

wahh .. Jaejoong .. so proud of you :'D

thanks for super fast update .. again ^^

Jaejoong will chase away the demons. And yes, he was definitely making excuses lol! And no problem ;-) I want to know how this story turns out as much as everyone reading it I think.

yes in a way it is your typical yunjae and baby fic,
but what i really love about it is how different YH is.
YH is always this nice, kind, outgoing, possessive,
affectionate, and overall great guy that gets along with everyone
and can do no wrong. that may very well be the case here too, but
he is hurt and has been abused in the past which doesn't
really happen in a so called happy yunjae family fic.
or often times JJ is the one that has been hurt...anyhoo
this is what i really like about this story :D
i also liked the fact that JJ flipped out on that lady xD

Edited at 2012-09-05 05:10 am (UTC)

Ah thank you for telling me why you think it's different. Someone else mentioned that I turned the YunJae cliche upside down or something. I'm really liking writing this a lot lol. I wish I could write faster. Well, I wanted to flip out at the lady so Jae definitely would've felt it more :O

I love this chapter.
I love the whirlwind that is Kim Jaejoong and the way he is spinning Yunho's world in a different direction.

Jaejoong's honesty, innocence and inner strength is like a force of nature that worms it's way through to your heart.

I love how Jaejoong's parents think and feel about this whole situation. I love how both of them are not judgmental towards the situation and Yunho.
But I think I love most is Jaejoong's father.
He seems to have a caring, loving and warm character. He also seems to be a fair person.

It feels like Jaejoong's character and strength comes from both his parents.

It's interesting that Jaejoong parents met Yunho before and that his father knows Yunho's parents.
Yunho must have met Jaejoong before this.
Perhaps even when Jaejoong was a baby.

I cannot wait when Jaejoong brings both Yunho and JiYool home to his family. It's going to be an interesting event.

I'm really happy you love this. Jae is such a genuine person and I think that's part of his charm. He's so guileless and happy to think the best of everyone unless proven otherwise (as that woman was ugh).

I'm so happy you picked up on that about his parents!!! Because truly, Jae is the way he is because of his parents.

I have absolutely no clue at all how it's going to pan out with the Kims meeting the Jungs. I tend to shy away from huge family gatherings myself so i'm going to have to dig deep to figure this one out. Please anticipate! \O/

Hi, I love u so much. It's too cute mother hen jaejoongie! :D

Awwwww *_____* More like mama bear hehehe but Jae is adorable. Can you imagine him flailing his arms and scolding Yunho? Lol! Poor guy has no clue what he's gotten himself into.

spotto~ Ive somehow caught up, will read this one in the sub :) (if it's safe reading that there o_o)

LOL you have perfect timing. Nana ended up near the bottom of the second page of comments in the last chapter but you're at the top of this one! And yes, it's perfectly safe... Though it depends what you mean by safe? LOL. No smut :P

Why are you doing this to me, Nicki? You should not have told me that this fic is updated while I am at work because everything else just blurs in the background and I get sooooo into this I am trying hard not to squeeeee at every other sentence that I read, what are you trying to do to me? This is both torture and bliss and if I am to die reading, I want to die reading this! But this is not complete yet, so please, kill me softly? XD I have never squealed this much over something for the past years since SKKS and now, this is making me keeeeel and reeal and squeee and ... aaaaaaargh! Mentally of course because I am at the office and I need to be held while reading this.

And you seem to know my YunJae weaknesses, OMG, what are you? Jaejung in hairclips is just so cuuuuuuuute and him acting all so wifey and motherly over Yunho and Jiyool is just >//////////< *squeeeeeee* <33333 Nagging is a no no for me but the way he nags over Yunho like they are an old married couple, oh gawd. And what else? You have to kill my remaining neurons with the feeding sceeeeeeene! OMG! And this is not just ANY normal feeding scene, this is sharing a bite and feeding scene. My heart cannot handle this anymore, but please, that does not mean I do not want to read this anymore and I am not complaining either about you being wordy because a part of me wants to jump to the next paragraph and another part of me wants it to go on and on and on because I do not want the chapter to end. Domestic YunJae is soooo much my weakness, and you damn well killed me in this chapter~

This is such as fatal chapter for me, really, I have to take breaks reading this or else I would have a breakdown and I have no one to hold me in real life because I am even biting my inner cheeks to maintain my poker face while deep inside I am throwing shoes and rolling over my workdesk over the awesomeness of this and please I am sorry if I am not making sense because I just type whatever comes to mind. I have told you my thoughts are sooooo scattered.

/takes a deep breath

Why is your message marked as spam? IDGI... I don't understand LJ... I'm only here to post fic OTL

Lol I didn't tell you it got updated :P You saw it on tumblr and that's not my fault! I pretty much just update in three places; Detox, Hug and Tumblr in that order lol. What's SKKS? Is that the Micky drama? I'm writing so much because I want to know their story. It's driving me crazy lol. I'm happy that you seem to into the story though. It's lovely to know others love what I love.

I'm really surprised at how many people like the hair clips things hahaha. I can just imagine Jae doing that IRL. We know he likes hair clips :P I'm enjoying writing everyone in this fic tbh. And that feeding scene was inspired by my husband and the previous night XD He was driving and I was feeding him fish and chips which is waaaaaaaay messier than kimbap OTL I kept having to say "OPEN WIDE!" lmaooooo. However it's also a natural thing with my extended family. I'd walk past and if my aunts are eating and I wanted something i'd just open my mouth and they'd hand feed me off their plate ;-)

LOL you give good imagery. I'm laughing at the mental vision of you throwing shoes and rolling around all over your workdesk. It's hilarious :P I've been known to sit UNDER my desk because too many feels hahaha. That's ok ;-) I appreciate you taking the time to write this comment even though stupid LJ classified it as spam! *shakes fist* I hope you enjoy the rest of the story ;-)

I just started reading this new series of your and this is pure sarang with ai and more <33333
we sarang thizz fic so much because well, it's different from the other YJ+baby fics. (((((((:
Mostly are mpreg (not that im complaining though, i read mpreg too. Keke) But most of them arent really nicely written. And oh btw, I dunno why but Yunho reminds me of Christian Grey (Fifty Shades of Grey). I DA KNOOOW WAE. hahaha. :D
and unnie, in your case, being wordy isnt bad. :DD

I dunno whether to laugh or cry anymore at the 50 Shades reference. I think i've had at least one in almost every chapter and this one in particular had two!

I'm pleased to love this story! And thank you for appreciating my wordiness lol XD

There can never be enough YunJae with a baby and I absolutely love your wordiness!!! :D Their shopping trip is so cuuuute and I love Yunho playing with everyone, Jaejoong being totally oblivious about everything xD

I love Jaejoong's parents and how they don't believe a word said about him even though it's their papers that have been reporting his case... How they just let him be.

Idk, this story is just so perfect!!! *-* I also love the bit where Jaejoong blurts out how much he loves Yunho's smell xDD Not to mention how he get pissed at the lady at the baby store... I think Jaejoong's father has got something right, maybe he will really look after him...

Yunho was being naughty and I like that part of him tbh. But I think he has quite a few more things to work through before he can be considered even remotely normal... Jaejoong is hilarious to write lol.

After nine children, I think parents tend to take the "they'll learn" approach heh.

Hahahaha I wanna bury my nose in Jung's neck too tbh... I love male smells mmm...

Do you know how excited i was to see you updated? XD
Ive stayed up doing an all nighter for school, and i happen to stumble upon livejournal during my break and see that youve updated again! Im stayin up extra late just to finish it too~! >.<
i love all the yunjae moments that happen~~ each hapter gets better and better! :D
I hope there isnt any typos(im using my phone and am very sleepy~) in my comment~
anyways, update soon!

Awww i'm happy about that. I know how you feel when I used to follow fic updates waaaaaaaaaaaay back when I had time to read fic and it was like eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. And i'd be grumpy when I had stuff to do and couldn't read the update immediately lol.

I don't mind typos :-) I know what it's like to type from a phone. I've been replying to comments on my laptop but I think i'd catch up more if I did it on my phone lol.

Next chap is up :-)