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Sleeping Beauty [5/20]
Title: Sleeping Beauty (5/?)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG13 (for now)
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, WAFF
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.

AN: Wordy Nicki is wordy...

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Ohmygosh, your Jaejoong is just so~~~ *insert keysmash* amazing. I was sitting here alone in my apartment giggling through the whole scene of him ordering Yunho around. And then him going all mama bear in the baby store, and, just... yeah. Awesome. XD

Really, really loving this story so far. All the characters are so fully fleshed out and intriguing. I can't wait to find out Yunho's full back story as well as see where this will all go for them. ^^

Lol... Jaejoong is so fun to write... except when he decides he wants the fic to go one way and I want the fic to go another way and then I wanna cry because he always wins :-/

I'm really happy you love this story and it's just chap 5! I hope you're still around and reading despite my inability to respond to comments in a timely manner :-/ Please forgive me!

love this chapter OMG!
mama bear jae ftw!
it's hard to come by a yunjae fanfic wherein yunho is the scarred one. this fic is definitely a breath of fresh air ^^
really really loving your fic.

long chapter is always love!!!

You just commented on the laters chapter so I guess I can say... scars..... ;__________;

And lol your comment about the long chapter :P This chapter was 6,482 words and chapter 11 that I just posted is 15,427 words. I really need to reign in my wordiness because this is getting ridiculous! So pleased you're still loving this though!

Thank you so much for your comments and the fact that you keep commenting even though I haven't been able to reply in a timely manner.

i want moreeeee!!! ;A;

ffffffuuu dont lemme waiting ;; omgsun..

i love domestic yunjae e_e

lemme cryes over my non-romance real life
i want jj as my wife

not husband.. just bcoz lol Dx

Lol... don't cry over your life. And yes, Jae would make a far better wife than husband I think hahahaha.

Thank you for always commenting even though I suck at replying in a timely manner :3

"…she smells so good I can almosteat her. She smells like you…"

Omg how can Yunho missed that!?!? He must have been too mesmerized by the bossy Jaejoong. XD
I really love to see the really Kim Jaejoong with sunflower hairclip. It must be super ADORABLE *squeaks*

The scene in the baby shop is unexpectedly expected (confusing? LoL). The maternal instincts is so Jaejoong-like. I guess it imprints in his nature yet radiates to warm people around him. And yunho's gesture at Jaejoong's back is so spontaneous. Cute~ how he is being protective. His warmth is getting started to re-ignite once again though not through his words or facial expression. I'm sure those will begin to appear little by little.

Fighting with the writing! I'm eagerly waiting here to read the next chapter ^^

Hahahaha... It's actually really hard to keep up with Jae and his rambling. If you're not used to it, you'll miss a lot :P You actually need to concentrate when he starts off on his bullet train :P

I think Yunho had a blue flower hairclip IRL once (unless it was a PS)... Jae always has hairclips so just pretend it's bright yellow :O

Yunho lol your bias is showing :PPP I think you're one of those who still comments despite my lack of replies so thank you so much for sticking with me and with this fic!

LOL. "she smells like you" and "she smells so good feel like eating her" I angry jae! someone has gotta stand up for yunpa too. am glad jae is the one. <3 keeo going yo! XDDD

I love Jae's slips... hahahaha :P And yes, Yunho does need a protector. No matter what he thinks, he needs someone to fight for him and Jaejoong most certainly will fight for him.

I'm going, i'm going! :PPP

yay..an update...^^
finally..yunho's walls are breaking down slowly by jaejoong's behaviour...
cant wait to see "love" blossoms between those 2...
very interesting storyline..cant wait for more...^^
waiting for your next update...
hope that yunho will start to become more "human" soon..^^

This was so good and I am blown away from its greatness :D

hey nicki.. i am so in love with this fic, i don' t know what i'll do when you decide to conclude it. possibly write another awesome plot like this ? ^_^

the way you are gently drawing on the dark side in the midst of fluff; suspect that when we finaly get to the part, things are going to get ugly..

That explains why she smells so good I can almost eat her.--> ahem/.. jae's filter broke. AGAIN..

won't even go into how many times i reread and coo-ed over jae going all protective in the supermarket..

and jae's father.. seems like he's already given his son over. poor yunho. seems like he's going to be meeting the inlaws soon..!

"jae's filter broke."
Omg, I love that sentence! So true~ xD

Omg, I can just see Jaejoong with the yellow hair clips. He's just a cutey like that. haha~

But isn't he a bit overreacting concerning the baby products. I know it's better to use them, but the baby isn't going to die because Yunho used his own shampoo on her. xDD

Oh btw, you never combine the surname and "shi" (or however it's written). You can put the first name and "shi" together though, or the full name and "shi".^^ Like Jaejoong-shi or Kim Jaejoong-shi, but never Kim-shi (haha, Kimchi! xD).

Oh, and I have one question. When the store manager(?) addressed one of them as "Jung-shi" did he refer to Yunho because he looked at him over Jae's head or did he refer to Jae, because he thought they were married? I just ask because it's not common in Korea for the wife to take the name of her husband. It just happens because most of the surnames are Kim and Park, so they are likely to marry a Kim or Park. LOL

PS: I absolutely adore baby fics (and mpreg, most of the times). Can't get enough of them. And even though there are a lot of them out there doesn't mean they are as well written as yours is! ;)

Keep up the good work, BB! <3

God Bless U for those long chapters *cry from happiness*
It actually feels as if reading a proper book with an intriguing, funny yet overwhelming story that touches Ur heart in the most unexpected moments~! <3 I truly got attached to this story and I hope to read more of it in the future~!
Thank U so much for working so hard on this story and please don't overwork~! If U feel U need a short break from writing just do so don't worry about us. There are authors that make us wait half a year if not longer for next update so more or less we are used to waiting for updates. What is more important is that the writing truly is fun for U and not an boring obligation~^^ Can't wait for the next update~! *excited* <3

PS: I love it when JJ is bossy & affectionate towards Yunho and when Yunho is overprotective not only of his daughter kekekeke~

-pounces on chapter-

=D This smile put a huge freaking smile on my face. Jiyool and Jaejoong are absolutely to adorable for words! I am *loving* the domestic bliss of this chapter. I adored how Jae just naturally took to bossing Yunho around but then quickly became shy and nervous that he overstepped his bounds! I just wanted to pinch his cheeks. And when Jaejoong put Jiyool's clips in his hair I was like 'that is definitely something the real Jae would do!'

I loved how Jae stood up for Yunho. Gosh, aside from this story, it really irritates me how in real life the public can be so stupid and brainwashed. I admit I pick up my share of biases from the media, but it irritates me to no end that the public spews forth drivel and media speculation like its facts and they have the right to pass judgement. Jae, I would have been right there with you defending Yunho! Rawr!

lol in any case, I am loving how this story is progressing. I am amused as how well Jae's parents are taking this. Guess being the favorite really let's you get away with things, eh? ;D I can't wait to figure out the mystery behind Yunho's ex-wife and the beginning of Jae's path to becoming 'Mrs. Jung' XD Can't wait for the next installment! Thanks for your hard work (and the glory that is long chapters!)

Jaejoong you adorable pumpkin with the sunflower pin and I guess everyone would feel being overrun by a truck having a handful of Jaejoong but I guess they are the total pairing and the complement each other well I guess only Jaejae can handle Yunho in a way and totally ignoring background and intimidating glare cause Jaejoong can just be as intimidating although it still looks hot and sexy if he's angry puhihi^^
And Jae really is an angel defending Yunho like that guess he already likes Yunho and the ones he likes the ones he'll treasure the most so Yunho seems to be special already ne?
Guess JAe comes from a special background having his parents being so so understanding woah I really love his parents although his dad seems like a bigshot he doesn't seem cold at all and I guess having a son like Jaejoong he can't do anything but love his sunshine hehe^^ and he likes Yunho too that's a plus ...
Jaejoong is like being sent on a mission and he'll succeed for sure hihi^^
Poor JiYool although she's suffering but she's being loved so much already and she'll get better soon especially when being taken care of Jaejoong she won't lack anything right?

It's really refreshing to see a "powerful" character like Yunho not (or at least not outwardly) give a toss about gossip and public perception. Clearly his cold facade is there to protect him from the horrible accusations (which clearly still pierce through the armour he's built), but he doesn't act as though he needs to completely distance himself from Jae in public in order to affect an indifference or detachment as others seem to expect from him, and that's definitely showing progress.

Loving Joongie's polite but "idgaf" attitude as well; he has his priorities - who he needs to take care of, who matters - and he doesn't let scrutiny detract from those things either. He's just what the Jung duo need. :)

Keep up the great work darling~ (Love that you're wordy, it's a good trait when it produces things like this.)

OMG!!! Yes Jae! Go and save Yunnie from the eyes of those vicious women... ^______^

And yes...Joongie can take care of Yunnie ^__^

Going to read the 6th at home...

♥ I've already told you how much I love this fic, but I mean it. Yours is one of the two fics I've ever read that incorporates the baby into the fic well (where the baby becomes another character and isn't just another plot device that exists just for the sake of existing) and yours goes a lot into detail about the baby where I can actually understand Ji Yool and find her adorable even though I'm usually not one to like babies easily irl haha.

Jaejoong's protective instincts of Yunho at the stores was so much love, and I loved how you included Jaejoong's parents' reactions to the rumors/news about the two going around. Jaejoong's parents are so sane and the family so believable that I can understand how Jaejoong grew up to become the person he is in this story.

♥♥ Cannot express how much I love this story :D