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Sleeping Beauty [6/20]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Sleeping Beauty (6/?)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG13 (for now)
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, WAFF
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.


AN: I'm addicted to my own story...how does this even work?



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Thank you. I love this story.

How can anyone tell you to update soon when you have been updating in a totally crazy speed o___o I guess they just meant it meaning they are eager to read more, cause I am too, but honestly everytime you update I'm like OMG ALREADY cause you're so freaking fast, gurrllll

Anyways, to the fic *-* Which was completely amazing because of how little Jaejoong cried which was really sad but quite adorable at the same time :3 And also it means he cares a lot about what Yunho thinks :3 Also, the way he rambles to his parents, who just take everything well and basically gave these two, meaning YunJae, their blessing before anything even happened LOL xD Also, calling Yunho and Jiyool Jaejoong's "little family" *-* SO CUUUUUTEE OMG I love his parents xD Also, Jaejoong slept in his parents bed when he was like 18 or what???? This guy, seriously, idek anymore xD

While, Yunho is still haunted and stuff D: And said really a horrible thing to Jaejoong and should apologise!!!!! D: But he only said that because he uncontrollably associates Jaejoong with his wife which on the other hand is a bad thing but on the other hand means he sees him... in that kind of light ;D And despite all he's still HOT when he's angry 8) And the part where he just HAD to laugh at Jaejoong was so sweet omg *-* because Jaejoong is really penetrating his emotionless exterior^^

And I had to go wikipedia kangaroos and pouches n' stuff... Because of Jaejoong's comments, you know... LOL

This chapter was great! I love the talk Jaejoong had with his parents. I was even squealing over how cute he was at one point during it. And the Kim parents. They just come across as so perfect. I love them.

I understand about being addicted to your own story. My current writing project is based on an awesome dream my friend had, and I just love it so much. I simply find every story I write in that universe to be so much fun to write! I so love a couple of the fictional characters too. lol Plus, with the amazing Kim clan you're writing, it's not hard to imagine you getting addicted to them.

Wow~ what a fast update! I swear i just got done with catching up with all your updates~! >.<
Theres so many emotions in this chapter its like a roller coaster~
i hope everything gets patched up between the two~
I dont think ive said this yet, but i love your characterization of jaejoong!
it really blends in with his real personality~

it's good that YH managed to eavesdrop on Jae's conversation..love his parents by the way and I think you're super lucky to have grandparents like that....I'm kinda annoyed that YH didn't even bother to apologize tho since he knows for certain that he was in the wrong....going to the bathroom to sort his thots is not a good enough excuse....he's a grown man for goodness sake...he needs to admit when he's at fault and not "wait till he feels like it"...anyways, hope that jae gives him a hard time about it and not forgive him too easily...he needs to learn that altho he's had a bad past, doesn't give him the right to be mean to others that have been nothing but loving towards him and his daughter....take your time with the update...this story is definately worth the wait=)

whoa! another update! we love you very much! <3<3<3 thanks for the fast update, but don't put pressure on yourself.. we just hope that your another update won't be as long as a few months away when we already forget about this story. we understand that you have your own life to live, but we're really excited to read your story until it finishes..lucky, you are as excited like us!^^ thanks again for your hard work!

Why is Jae so lovable in this? I think that the word you used to describe Jae is correct; he IS a tornado. And I adore his parents, they're the type of parents every single teen wishes for. Don't worry about the updating, I'm sure most of your readers will stick around. This is amazing, btw, have I told you that? THIS FIC IS SO GOOD

Lol Jae is so naïve and playful that even if he means well there's going to be misunderstandings between him and Yunho, especially because Yunnie clearly (and justifiably) has trust issues.

Even so, Jung was in the wrong with his hasty assumptions and needs to apologise promptly so that Jaejoong can get back to fixing him. :3

Love (and you deserve all the love you're getting) how prolific you're being with this. :)

Off to read the (zomg it's already up, you're amazing woman!) 7th chapter~

this chapter was a BIG mixed bag.. the outburst over jae's supposed whoring around certainly came as a surprise. seems yunho's issues are deeper rooted than i first thought..

on the other hand, his ramblings are pure ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥..it's completely amazing how he can go off in a tangent rambling to his own parents..and as parents of a 19 year old, they are surprisingly supportive.. they do come off as two detectives wanting jae to stumble and unravel the mystery XD

btw, i've forgotten to mention this the last time.. but the scene when yunho kisses jiyool who is tucked in jae's hoodies, who is in turn held in yunho's arms still makes me smile. your visualization is absolute win..

i'm in love with this fic too bb.. but take it easy. no need to strain yourself. and all the best for the paper.

your husband is jjang to actually beta the fic.. my ex-bf used to take to his heels at the very mention of yaoi XD

Awwww....Yunnie. You're so cruel.
Poor JaeJoongie....

Kakakkakka..
Aigooo...Jae talking to his parents was amusing..
He's so carefree...kekekke...

Whoa..already in the 7th chapter? Yayyyy! ^__^
Going there right now ^_^

AWW poor joongie!!! But im sure yunho only said those things cause of his history wth his ex wife. bet i bet joongie will be there to get yunho past those scars!!!
And ooohhh I think i caught some jealousy from yunho when he thought Jae had been with other ppl~
Agian i loved the chapter!!!

poor yunho...
what a stupid wife..
she had the most wanted man alive but still she chose those shit!
thank god she dead!!
jae be strong yunho love u too!i know!hihihihi

"Find out if I’ve even ever had a boyfriend."
-lol. jae said nothing about a girlfriend.

"she’s got this habit of sticking her pointing and index fingers into her mouth to suck"
-i think you meant the middle finger and index finger. the pointing and index is the same finger.
i hope i didn't offend you by pointing that out. :(

jaejoong is so carefree and innocent. the first person he falls for and yunho's like that. i hope jae doesn't give up on him. jae is so cute in many ways.

is it just me or does it feel like yunho's ex-wife married yunho by accident. his ex-wife wanted a one night stand with yunho and got him drunk, but she accidentally got pregnant and they had to marry. then she and her parents exploited yunho and that's the reason why yunho wants revenge. i hope to know yunho's past soon.

if what he said to jae and heard from jae was guilty enough, walking out from the bathroom and seeing that jae cried himself to sleep must of been worse.

Ugh, just loving the YunJae development. ;A; I like how Yunho's not quick to turn into a sort of...hm, saint of sorts immediately. I like how he's still retaining the signs of someone who's been hurt and traumatized, someone who's dealt with a lot of pain. There's still so much for him to repair, and it'll be pretty difficult, I can imagine. :( Poor Jaejoong too for getting insulted like that, especially after all he's done for both Yunho and Jiyool, but I'm happy that although he was hurt, he was also understanding of Yunho's current condition. Also, I'm totally loving the interaction between Jaejoong and his parents. <3

Also...



This chapter was just awesome. :3

*pouts*

The gif didn't work, so I'll just post this one then as a replacement of sorts. XD