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Sleeping Beauty [10b/20]
YJ04
beeswaxing
Title: Sleeping Beauty (10b/?)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG13-R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, WAFF, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.


AN: And yes the rating just went up... :3



Chapter 10a

Chapter 10bCollapse )


KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...!!!!!


... (take a deep breath)



KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...!!!!!

please help to call the ambulance while I try not to die from over nose-bleeding

I love Jae's mother. She is so funny. I do agree Karma is a bitch . I guess Yun's cute little girl paid back for her daddy.I don't see anything wrong with the semi-smut.It was nice and tasteful. Good job and thank you,

I LOVE YOU!! I REALLY DO!!! and i just wana kidnap yunho and keep him all to myself. Oh and not to forget jiyool too!! LOL

I will comment when I am coherent.
The SMUT scene has left me with a blank state of mind LOL.

I'm back to write my comment.

I love Jaejoong's runaway mouth and mind.
His need to think aloud is so amusing.

They are so fated.
Even if the journey was a long one with lots of twist and turns, fate gave Jaejoong everything that he wanted when he was two.
It seems no matter what Jaejoong was meant to return to Yunho and complete him.

It's funny how his parents didn't tell him the significance of the ring earlier. Perhaps his mother never expected that a promise would be kept after Yunho got married.

I guess that's why no matter what Jaejoong feels "home" when he is with Yunho.

Jaejoong doesn't seem to have changed much as a child and even as he grows into adult. He is still precocious. And he stills gets what he wants.^^

I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Edited at 2012-09-20 03:39 pm (UTC)

Little Joongie was so adorable ^__^. I love the fact that they met before, and are already married by Joongie demands hahaha AWWWWWZ ^___^.

The smut *drooling* I'm glad Yunho didn't retreat and let his terrible memories stop him. I'm sure there will be more problems or whatever but love conquers all, and hell who can stop Joongie?!

This is so sweet and hot at the same time. Jae is so so precious here....is no brainer why every one loves him. Yunho is damn lucky to have him and he better not push Jae away....otherwise I will take him away for myself....(as if I can).

perfect! everything on this chapter is pure love..thank you for making me giddy now everybody here thinks i'm crazy because i'm smiling like a fool alone, in public..weeee~ ❤



ODG, YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE CONTINUITY STUFF LIKE THIS. THE WHOLE "WEDDING" IN THE PAST AND THE "WEDDING" IN THE FUTURE...ODG! ASDKJASKDJAKJDAS. I PROMISE TO READ THIS FIC PROPERLY WHEN I HAVE THE TIME. ^^

I'm really enjoying it so far~ :3

OHMYGODSUN baby joongie is like the cutest thing ever xDD it's kind of sad though to get a glimpse of Yunho before his wife got to him and how sweet he was. Luckily fate and big Jaejoong will save him ♥ And the smut was... well, i'd call it a lovescene because it was so tender and gorgeous. Don't doubt your own writing abilities! ♥

(But literally the sounds I made reading the flashback scene were not human)

*flails*

So much love omg so much love *dies*

i love jae's umma...
and the hot and sweet smut..kyaaaa

Oh my gosh my feelings they are seriously over flowing.The way you write its awesome.You did a very good job with this chapter as well....

OMG! yunjae's married already! me love it! although it's not official yet.. i can imagine jae's feeling when he knows he peed on yunho! totally embarassing! now that they have become lovers, i hope yunho will open up his secrets to jae, so that he and jiyool can be completely free from that evil woman's shadow.. i totally hate her! btw, love jae's mom! she's a great mother! thank you for this update! love you for it! ^^

Wow, so wasn't expecting that first thing this morning, but it was HOT! Jae's mama and sister were very funny, laughing at little Jae's memories, but also seeming to marry him off, even though he himself married Yunho when he was no more than a toddler! He did get his wish though, Yunho was able to get him a daughter. I am absolutely in love with this story, it is moving along awesomely!