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Sleeping Beauty [10b/20]
YJ04
beeswaxing
Title: Sleeping Beauty (10b/?)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG13-R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, WAFF, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.


AN: And yes the rating just went up... :3



Chapter 10a

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WOW they are progressing so fast. I guess it helps that they actually have a shared past, regardless of how short their encounter together was. I'm liking the little revelations made here and there, seeing this updated on detox totally delighted me. their feelings here are written so realistically. My favourite part of this chapter was the way Jae hinted subtly that he'd seen the pseudo love confession on the fridge board; it was disarming and yet at the same time intelligent. And i like how yunho actually discovers that jae has seen the message he cleaned off. Oh, there are a lot of aspects of this story that i love. Even though they are progressing a bit fast, somehow the progression all feels natural. (:

My god this killed! OMG this is breath taking chapter full of emotions! I absolutely love love love this chapter and how it was a beautifully planned hot smex!

So much feels. .____.
I actually have a lot I want to say...but my feelings are overwhelming my ability to speak. THAT...is how good this is....rendering me all speechless.

So lovely.... No you didn't, that was awesome :D
And Peanut butter pumpkin patch??? That is so sweet and romantic.

Omg that is serious smex lol i died from blood loss ackkkk >_< that is so hot lol awww my innocence kyahahah anywei love love love the story and this chappie is so long so i'm happy and on cloud 9 hahaha i like what you did with part A its so sweet and funny especially joongie's mother haha that ahjumma cracks me up all the time and awww baby joongie and hi school yunnie's story is so kawaaii squeek ^_^... U r so spoiling us with this story i feel so yunjae bloated lmao <3 TC always, gonna wait patiently for the next part..

thx for the update...n extra long..... really really love it....

HNNNGGG OMG THEY'RE MARRIED. OMG OMG AND BLOWJOB OMG OMG jae you eager hahaha omg okay that was kinda off a bit but nice ending! I do hope for kinda more romantic do-over though. But it's nice. Urgh. I wonder what will happen the day after. Pls no awkwardness! Thanks so much for the update, nikki! ♥

Nicki (yunnlecorn here):

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Nothing else because I'm gonna reply to your email in a while.

omo....
finally u update!!yay!!
the last part make me fangirling!!hahahha..
promise? promise!kyaaaaaaaa.....
yunho have let his guard down!!
jae just seduce him more!!u are his wife illegally!!!hahahaha

OMG. ur so cute n funny XDDD. jus hope that others can noe the truth n accept yunho jus like how jae accepted him.

awwwww!!! omg thats was sooooo sweet. love it!

failed smut? It was cute and hot as well. More ^^

Omo. Just. That was. Yes. Yes. Yes.

*incoherent*

I can't find words to describe how wonderful this entire chapter was. Just complete love, my heart is hurting in a good way now. Thank you~! <3

unnie!!!!!i finally finished reading.damn i was in the clouds for many hours.i was like sneaking in the class, reading bits by bits. french class is hard. j'taime.:)
the best!i just love this story!

goodness! the details xDDD

And the overflowing shweetness! :DD
Why. I really LOVE IT so much!! ^_^
All is YUNJAE AND YOU Doing!! xDDD

BUT I love this so much. From the 16 years ago 'forgotten but found back love' and the current love. So kids does know that muchhhhh~. eh? :D
Being a talkative toddler proven to not be wrong at all. :DD Aweee so adorable the two! ^_^