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Sleeping Beauty [10b/20]
Title: Sleeping Beauty (10b/?)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG13-R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, WAFF, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.

AN: And yes the rating just went up... :3

Chapter 10a

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Baby Jaejoong was really confident kid, I liked how he convinced Yunho to marry him!

And their paths just crossed each other after sixteen years again! It's so touching and beautiful! And Jaejoong's family is just priceless!

The first ring-scene in the kitchen, when Yunho recognized his grandmother's ring and asked Jae why didn't he wear it on his finger and he even put it on it's rightful place was my favourite part ... but the other one in the hot tub was also really enjoyable!

... actually first when Jae called his sister for advice what to wear in the hot tub I thought he will speak in the bedroom and Yunho will accidentally hear the whole conversation through the baby monitor... XD

Thank you for this nice long chapter, it was perfect, I really liked it! [heart]

This fic is so amazing...no wait...you´re even more amazing for writing such an amazing fic!!!<3 Can´t wait for more
Greetings from Argentina!! :D

Assdfhkuedccbneghd kyaaaaaaaaaaaa OMG OMG FINALLY kyaaaaaaaaaaaa gosh, I'm so happy
This fic is awesome !!! And the ring story and pee too amazing!??
Keep going girl !!!
Thank you for the update!!!!!! :DDD

.....i did not expect this at all!!gah~~~/flails

i'm glad,finally yun is letting jae in,giving him a chance to get close to him.

thanks for the update!^^

ooowh... yeahh.... o>///<o this is just too good!! I don't mind really if you want to put umm.. real smut in the next chapter. And this is not a request ,mind you.

-hugs chapters to chest- You're back! I hope your working trip didn't fuzz you out (well clearly not since we get 2 amazingly long chapters!) and I hope you get to rest well.

Yay for Jiyool! I don't know if you read my previous comment, but I am really glad Jiyool is 'back'. The cuddles part and omg when Jae left her in the creche and then came back for her and she was giving him to accusing eyes but still cuddles him *dies*. It was just so incredibly sweet and I wanted to hug her myself. And the little bit about male voices - I feel like it was so *obvious* this entire time but I just didn't see it. I wanted to smack my forehead and go "duh! Why didn't I realize that sooner?"

Urg. YunJae. Since I read 9+10 in one go I went from wanting to shake Yunho to wanting to hug YunJae. It's taking time (or is it? -waggles eyebrows-) but I'm glad they are slowly getting together. And oh before I forget - the part with Jiyool playing with the condoms, pooping in the tub and attacking Jae's nipples absolutely made me crack up.

And the idea of 3 year old Jae proposing (-cough- forcefully arranging) a marriage with teenage!Yunho is so sickeningly sweet I just want to -sigh- and get them to sign a marriage contract already. It's pretty clear fate wants them together. OMG and the bit about Jae peeing on Yunho xD He's marking his territory

The smut was great, you did very well making it a realistic first time! =D

I'll look forward to more updates. Seriously, thank you for all your hard work!

O<G! Jaejoong saw the part of the ntoes that Yunho tried to rub off!!! He's truly an observant person. Me likey very much. Woah! Things sure are moving fast but I like how Yunho is not trying to run away from his feelings or trying to chase Jaejoong away anymore. I really like how decisive Jaejoong is. Growing up in a happy and open minded family truly helps to mold him into a positive and daring person. Can't wait to see how things go from here.

OMFG~! The fluff & tenderness is so overwhelming It brought a goofy smile on my face~! *melts* I was not here for a while and U already updated so many chapters *mouth hits the floor* U are so busy, yet U menage to amaze me every single time with how fas U update and how lovely long Ur updates are~! (T_T) We all are so blessed with having U as a writer of YoonJae FF.
Thank U sooooo much for all the hard work and for making Yunho & Jaejoong so lovable in Ur story~! <33333 I hope one day they will become a real family in real life too... they deserve it~^^

lol. jae called their marriage illegal. *cracking up*

jae and yunho had an indirect kiss to end the wedding ceremony too. yunho tasted the ring pop. that's so cute.

there's gonna be a next time! that was so cute of jae to ask for a promise.

yunho is accepting things that are happening. i guess what jae wishes hard for will happen. at least jae knows what happened between them now.

God knows how much I love fated things. My things are full of it XD

I don't think the smut as a fail at all. I found it good, and Jaejoong lol he was super cute XDDD
It was really tender, and Yunho didn't rush things, so I loved it.
I'm basically loving the pace of the whole story anyway.

yunjae intimate moments..yeay~~~

it was nice ^^

too many feels- *runs awai*

don't be sorry bb. that was so lovely and aww jaejae at the end is so :3
thanks for sharing this <3

I'm just falling in love with this story more and more ^___^