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Sleeping Beauty [15/20]
Title: Sleeping Beauty (15/20)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.

AN: Spent the entire day in Court… Wrote this chapter in between all the waiting and hanging around and all that jazz so I don’t know about the quality of this, but I’m going away for a few days as I have friends who are arriving from overseas and I need to be a good host and so I figure I should post otherwise there won’t be an update till the middle of next week…

Chapter 15Collapse )

Why?!!!! Why did you do this to me......(T_T)


The irony of that thought however, is completely lost on him as he utters those fateful words that will start a chain of events that will cause him more pain than he can ever imagine. A pain far worse than the entirety of the last decade put together. goosebumps to the highest level. does this mean more suffering for yunho? sorry, masochists much

from being scarred and broken, yunho will surely be shattered thinking that his wife met the accident because of what yunho said and didn't say to jaejoong.

jae, im just hoping you're safe wherever you are. you love yunho too much to let him suffer because of your lost. why am i contradicting my previous comments?

anyways, thank you for the update ^^

this got to be the worst cliffhanger!!! why do you left us hanging on that scene!
I think I'll never got a good sleep thinking of what will happen to jae and Yun...
You better update soon but you said you might update it next week...sigh..

the only reason why i think jaejoong is ok it's because there are 20 chapters in this fic according to you, but if something happens to him i'll just go and cry my heart out TTTT-TTT
even though i do think yunho kinda deserves it >->;
feeling so desperate here T-T
and no update until next week??? -pouting like hell-
please please please keep up the good work, i'm loving your fic , even if you take a while to update i know it will be worth it ^^



i knew it! somethings bound to happen related to water when you mentioned about the incident at the pool but i don't think jaejoong died...nooo!!! it cannot be. this is a yunjae story and will end a yunjae story. I think Jiyool deserves her happy ending. T__T

But gah! what a cliffhanger. Initially, I think Yunho deserves the pain of thinking that he lost Jaejoong cause mehn, what he said about Ji Yool only being his hurts...A LOT... cause Jaejoong cared for Ji Yool much, much more than Sun Ye did which is quite obvious with how Ji Yool was traumatized with women's voices. Also, imo, jaejoong gave more to the relationship than Yunho but yes, we can justify it that if you love someone, you do not measure what you do for a person.

I agree with what others are saying about Yunho, that he should go see a therapist...but is it possible that his fears will be removed once he sees that video and he's confident enough that Ji Yool won't be taken away from him by the chois?

And gah! the thought of having a Yunjae honeymoon baby made my toes curl. It's just so full of fluff and adoration and love that I'm in cloud 9 right now.

Thanks for the update. <3

WHYYYYYYYYY??????????????? why are you doing this to me??? T^T

Oh my Goshhh. Why did you do this to me? T^T
I know Jaejoong won't die but still Yunho's mentality must be shaking to hell!
Nevertheless, I feel like this will do good to their relationship. I am not be able to leave long comment cuz I'm still shocked...damn!

And I have to wait till next week OTL

jae gonna be alright jae gonna be alright jae gonna be alright!!!!!
he fine he fine he fine!!
no mpreg?come on!!!
yunho just go seek some help!!u really need it!!don't ever think about your pride thingy!!it not really worth it!!!trust me...
author-shii i'll be waiting!!just take ur time!!

I honestly did not expect this story would go in this direction. However, as soon as you put "the wrong set of keys" and "fighting on the wedding day" I knew Jae was not making it to his wedding ceremony. Haaaa, so excited though, I was wondering how Jae would learn about the custody battle and the sister giving it away was a nice touch. Yunho needed to learn that Jae will eventually always learn the truth. I also really liked how you added that last part with Jiyool calling out for her Daddy and Mama, at least, I am assuming that was supposed to be Jiyool, I suppose I'll find out later. If it was Jiyool I liked it because it directly connected to Yunho's crippling "she's mine not yours" remark. Jiyool's already called Jae mama, I think that was proof enough of parental recognition. Also, I like mpreg so not much is going to make me stop reading this story.

Sorry for the ridiculously long comment. I await next week's update. The wait is always worth it. :D

Edited at 2012-10-18 07:32 am (UTC)

huwaaaaa unniiiiee~~~ TOT
whats happen with jaejoong??? Dx

what?? woman!how could you do this!! the first chapters i read of SB; i never thought we were going down this route T__T

im glad we came to know the real meaning behind the title here..

i vwill hold my breath and wait patiently for the next chapter ::sharpens sword:: ^_~

i actually like mpreg. XDD but i dun understand the part where he say eats her grandchildren? But jaejae TT.TT...he didnt die rit?!!