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Sleeping Beauty [20b/20]
Title: Sleeping Beauty (20b/20)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.

AN1: This is the end folks… You can find the drabbles and oneshots for this ‘verse here

AN2: Unbeta-ed and I haven’t re-read it because if I do, it will delay posting even more than it already has because I really don’t want to let it go so yeah. Please be kind in relation to mistakes.

Chapter 20bCollapse )

It's finally over, the fic and the drama in the story line. I'm glad that they finally were able to move on from that dark past into better things, into love and babiees, lots of them <3 I was one of your readers who actually felt the real direction of this fic since the beginning. I could feel from the first chapters that this was going to be a story with a "heavy" and even dark theme. I mean, Yunho's past and the ghosts that we was carrying are something that we all carry, in different levels of course, and that's what makes us human.. that's what made your fic so appealing to me, it's humanity with all it's ups and downs, it's happy and dark moments. Thank you for your amazing story and even more amazing characters, also fell in love with them! I was hooked from the first chapter until the end <3

la di la di la... look forward to more drabbles about jiyool

ok you did it and this was EPIC! muah muah gives u yunjaejiyool banner

by the way i got the fic saved in docx n epub in case u want it to send to ppl

Edited at 2012-11-20 05:00 am (UTC)

I love you this is perfect thank you so much for the fast updates and the amazing story. I'm eternally grateful!





oh my the ending really great...thank god you don't continue this until 25 chapter because i don't have a mood read more drama
could you make another drabble for this cute family ^^

*claps manseehhh .. finally..
i love how Jaejoong way protect his love
in the same place .. supermarket
i was so worried the choi's will hurt Jaejoong body
finally the sleeping "yunho" beauty wake up and forgive his late evil wife
sleeping beauty is awesome.. thank youuuu .. <3<3

Ahh the forgiving in the end is truly the end to all their suffering an sadness. I'd say that the Chois deserve that ending but it's hard to say really when they could have suffered a bit more. Their actions were quite dumb -.-;. Couldn't help but facepalm when they decided to kidnap Jaejoong even after Jaejoong warned them that he has everything about their daughter's wrongdoings. I'm pretty sure they have peas for brains filled with only thoughts of money.
The fact that the bystanders at the supermarket helped Jaejoong when he was attacked was definitely a heartwarming moment. In New York they'd probably just watch and record the whole thing to put on the internet when they get home OTL. Glad that Jaejoong received a good reputation.
When Yunho appeared and abandoned his car on the road to get to Jaejoong it was like a scene from a movie ^^. Him carrying Jaejoongie bridal style really added to the dramatic quality of the scene hahaha. Jaejoongie refusing to let go was super cute~ It must have been so difficult for Yunho to concentrate with Jaejoong sitting on his lap while he drove hahaha.
Going to look forward to those YunJae+babies drabbles/one-shots you have swimming around with your muse (: As well as your other fics ^^. So happy to see that you won't be giving up on this verse. It is definitely one of my favorites in the fandom~

Until next time Nicki unnie~♥

This is probably going to be long. (I have this bad(?) habit of giving blanket comments...) I'm supposed to be studying for I/O psych exam!!
I absolutely loved this story!!! I try very hard not to read on going stories just cause the wait between chapters usually kills me- read: chapter 16-
I most certainly do not regret following this fic through even if it did make me a little crazy checking for updates.
I generally love cold Yunho characterisation along with precious innocent Jae throw a baby into the mix and I'm a total goner. I enjoyed that while it was fluffy it was also pretty angst riddled and dramatic.
I tend to gravitate to stories with elements of both- so, I thoroughly enjoyed this! While reading this and especially once they Chois came more prominently into the storyline I was actually expecting a kidnapping thread.
I am glad that you did away with that- too much drama!
The fluff was adorable and my favourite fluff moment (I think it was chapter 8?) is probably,
Are you broken?”
“Only if you’re buying.”
“What if I am?”
“Then I’m definitely broken. I’m in pieces all over the floor. You need to assemble me back together again.
(You can probably tell, I really loved this story)
The ending was amazing! The tone of it was just perfect with Yunho being able to finally heal and move one with his life with Jae and Jiyool and their family.
Yunho's healing was slow but it made it realistic that after suffering through all that it would take time to let go. I adored Jae (It's not hard to adore Jae). He is just light personified, I feel.
While reading, I could actually picture Jae behaving exactly how you described. So cute!I

I could go on forever but I'll stop here :P If you didn't already know, this story was AMAZING!!!! :D

Edited at 2012-11-20 05:08 am (UTC)

OMG!!!! nice ending...nice chapter..nice story T_T thanks for writing this ^_^ 'til the next fic ^^

im just happy that they found peace,love and everything fell into place.
this is one of the great stories i've read.:) thank you.:)

And so it ends! In a way I'm glad that the Chois died. They're just too greedy. They would've done more harm to the Jungs if they have lived. And their daughter was EVIL. Good thing Jaejoong wasn't hurt by the near-kidnapping. Thanks to all the people who helped him!

Your story puts a smile on my face and made me cry sometimes. But I'm happy to be with you through it's ups and downs. Thanks for writing this.

I stayed up late to finish reading this!
And let me just say....
god~ this fic was so amazing!
Im gonna miss the little high i would get whenever i get a notification on my lj inbox that you updated~ :I lol
I cant wait to read your future stories though~! :D

wave the hankerchief ... so its goodbye then for Sleeping Beauty. Sad but sweet ending. indeed they deserve to get that but dead well ... too much. But jiyoolie will grow with no worries because of the Chois death. and i do hope that your fluff muse will still posses you so there will be lots of fluffy shoots in the future ^^

Oh CONGRATULATION. You did a wonderful job with this epic fic. This is one of my all time favorite fan fiction of all. You really put me thought to hell and Haven with this story. I am still very incoherence to leave more structured comment but I just want thank you to introduce this great story of yours to me and others.

This is one story I'll be reading over and over again. It's my favorite from you so far.

I hope you'll write more stories, drabbles from this au. It has the most beautiful and loving Yunjae family.

Thank you Nicki.