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Sleeping Beauty [20b/20]
Title: Sleeping Beauty (20b/20)
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Jaejoong just wants somewhere to call home again. Living by himself is really not as great as his sisters made it out to be and he yearns to be around people again. He misses the hustle and bustle and even the crying babies that make up his parents’ household but he’s too proud and stubborn to return. He is nineteen after all and fully capable of living his own life away from his ridiculously large family. Enter a tiny little girl who captures Jaejoong’s heart in an instant and he finds himself with a family…of sorts. And for a sheltered, very well-loved boy, complicated doesn’t even begin to describe his life from the moment the tearful baby crawls into his lap looking for comfort.

AN1: This is the end folks… You can find the drabbles and oneshots for this ‘verse here

AN2: Unbeta-ed and I haven’t re-read it because if I do, it will delay posting even more than it already has because I really don’t want to let it go so yeah. Please be kind in relation to mistakes.

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hands down one of the best yunjae fic that i've read.
looking forward to your oneshots/drabbles within this universe. *coughYunhoInSpecsWithMinnieBallcough*

It's finished already. T__T
Will surely miss this......

no need to be a YunJae shipper to fall in love with this fic.
such a very good writer and a very good story i ever read (fanfic).
thank you so much and i always anticipating your new story.
really, feel like crying. this is the end. forgive and forget..




*sobs bc its over*
negl... the Choi's deserved so much worse than that... e_e i dunno what but just worse... its like they didnt know when to give up
im happy you did do away with that kidnapping part... after the dvd contents i dont think i couldve stomached it

aaaah, so late, but spot anyway. :))

I'm glad you chose to end the fic the way you did. Had you included what would've been a very dramatic kidnapping event, I feel like that could have made things over the top. Like you said, I agree that would have been too much drama, especially after everything that had already happened so far. There's a fine line between being dramatic, and just being overdramatic, and I'm glad you made the right choice by omitting that plotline. I think you made a good choice with the Chois too.

Another thing I really liked about this story was while it mostly focused around love and forgiveness, it still had this certain realism to it. Like Sunye for example, you didn't make her some tortured soul that was abused by her parents - she was really just some fucked up girl, which rings true in reality. There are just some very fucked up people, who do the things they do out of some twisted pleasure. And then you have Jaejoong on the other hand, who served as a good contrast to Sunye. Both beautiful on the outside, but very different people on the inside. I liked how you used Jaejoong to serve as the complete opposite to Sunye, and how he'd eventually serve as the major factor in Yunho's sort of "rise" or return to living life as it should be lived - filled with happiness & surrounded by people who love you.

YAY!! Happy ever after!! and oh wow, you AN..sooo long...LOL

Though Jaejoong was a driving force behind the entire fic, he came into his own strength in the last few chapters. Really like the transition on how he goes from being the family's adored child to being a man who is in control.

And I'm glad you decided to do away with the kidnapping plot- there is a thing like too much drama for a story that started off so fluffy.

The message about forgiveness and letting go through the presence of Jaejoong's unconditional love was never felt more than the last tumultous chapters.

And you had planned to make this Jaeho/Yunjae?! Wow. I was honestly surprised, because throughout the fic, Jae was shown to be the physically weaker. Would have been very very interesting to see how you handled the switching.

Goes without saying I truly adored the fic;even when it took the angst route. Would look back upon this as one of my very favorites in the fandom.

Thank you so much for sharing.!

//hugs & cookies// Truly truly hope the comment doesn't end up as spam again ^_^

I will miss this story but like yunjae, I am looking forward to a new fic..hahahaha



i love you! your yunjae is so wonderful..i think you are a great writer..i love your yunjae so much!❤😍👍

just perfect... ^^
this is the end and i'm still looking forward for more... i hope you enjoyed writing this... i'll miss the bratty and witty jaejoong.=))
thank you for a wonderful written story...

ohh its finally end T__T , i will miss to wait for the updates everyday ..
this fic is soooo awesome , i loved everthing about it .. it has alot of emotions and feeling that i really feel with every word .. i love JJ character sooo much he is sooo protictive and lovely , has a every warm personality .. i love his love for both yunho and jiyool ..
i love yunho character soo much , he is really has agreat heart to contain all this in his past , and to forgive sun ye in the end , and i really his fatherly side ..
and of course i love my jiyoolie sooo much , she is sooo cute and lovely , and i have to really thank you about jiyoolie per especially cause i adore babies ...
i really really hope that you will not lrt them go , i really want to read about them three more and more ..
thanks for your awesome and perfect fic .. until the next fic ^_^

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! I loved every word of it! :)

Wow I wanna say I will miss this fic so much but I'll save it up as you guarantee the drabble or whatever you may give us ^^

I'm curious about Song Jihyo. Have you planned that it was her at the very beginning or you just got mused by Jackal? LoL

Laughing out loud, tearing out to smiling widely, Sleeping Beauty has given to me. Hate to the core, love to the brim to warm and fuzzy, Sleeping Beauty has triggered out. I don't know when I would fine this kind of fiction again and as of yet this one is one of my favorites.

I have learnt many things from each one of the characters. They reflects people in real life and things that could literally happen all around you in real life.

Lastly, I wanna thank you Nikki for writing this great fic. It was my pleasure reading your piece, not only this one but others also. I'm looking forward to read your next verse or the already existing ones. ^^

Take care and be happy with your family ♥

It's over. Sighs after everything that happened I really love the fact that jae's so mature and so cool. I'm amazed at gow you built their characters especially how jae changed from being a teen that likes kids to someone who can protect a family with his love. Yuho was all kinds of amazing. <3 I really like it that u can see a weaker si'de of yunho because he's a normal human being. No walls between them and just love and strength. Yunjae were so hot arguing with the Chois. ;A; i'll miss them three. Off to read your shots for this verse!