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Ice [2]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: I’ve got some bad news and less bad news… Main bad news is that my husband’s grandfather had a heart attack so my camping trip has been canned, which means I’m not leaving civilisation. The lesser bad news is that we’re gonna go stay with the grandparents instead and they don’t have internet. However, I’m not sure when we’re going and I’m sure I can find an internet cafe somewhere since they live in a tourist town. But yeah… please keep his grandfather in your thoughts ;; It wasn’t a major heart attack and it happened yesterday and we only got told today so clearly it wasn’t that bad but still… :-/

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 



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wowwww its getting more and moreee intresting. love the scene where yun and jae flirting with each other via email.
thanks for writing this :)

The complete change in dynamic between Yunho's life/occupation and Jaejoong's is really sad to see. Their careers have simply molded the way both of them look at life and they differ so greatly that it makes them complement each other perfectly!

When I first saw the fic summary, I figured it would be Yunho running into Jaejoong randomly and boom, love at first sight or something. But the whole online dating thing? WONDERFUL IDEA. I love that your fics tend to address some sort of issue that makes some people uncomfortable thinking/talking about (slept so long: being possessed, sleeping beauty: sadism and abuse, trophy wives: well...trophy wives, jejuko: gender-bending), especially with online dating in this fic. It makes your fics an interesting read, especially because they're executed so well.

Yunho is so awkward it's adorable!!! I'm such a fan of the YunJae beginning<333 And even though you don't like email/chat fics, you managed to pull it off well regardless. Nice job!

Idk what comment I should leave after reading this chapter. I can feel various emotion in it, from sad because of what happen to Jaejoong until giggling because of Yunho's cute messages to Jaejoong. You've done a great job <3

such a precious setting

Really enjoying this so far! Coach kim, i know what you must be up to XD
I approve!

Hwaiting!

ohw~ jae's parents are awesome ^_^
i **almost** cry in that part


and even though you don't like the online thingy~...you really did well on the chatting part >.< (it made me all giddy ^^)
it almost made me think if you're 'kinda' into online flirting too (lol)

Jae seems so sad, it breaks my heart! You write it so well, and I am SO excited for the rest of your story!

damn! Jae got one hella of parents!!!!! wish i have his parents tough i'm content w/ my parents now~ hehee love the fic

Kim Jaejoong is Hero Jaejoong ,, a Rockstar
and he's coach kim's son?!!
jae's parents are so funny signed jae up for online dating and they talked abt if jae were a top/bottom in dinningroom LOL
seems like coach kim wanted yunho to be jae's BF XD

I really hope that you're reading my comments, phearphs i think you're not understand me very well, bcz i really understand eng, but to write and speak im a suck hahahahha so, im really lovin this fic, you write in a way that makes us just want to read more, and im thinking to read the others fi, that you wrote :3 thanks for the hard work *-*

I do read my comments ;-) I just don't have time to respond generally. Thank you for taking the time to tell me you liked this though! I really appreciate it! And I understand you well enough. I'm glad you're enjoying my fic! Do drop me comments when you feel like it. I almost never reply but I guarantee I read them!

aawww they're so cute alreadyy! X)
love the way you wrote JJ's family. <3

Jae have sweet and cool parents! And I love how Yunho is was younger than Jae. I can imagine Yunho's cuteness XD

He nudges his son’s chin up from his shoulder, and he sees the young boy who
used to laugh happily when he manages a triple axle. That little boy is sad now, at
his lowest, but under the smeared makeup and behind the circle lenses, he can see
that boy again.

aww jaejae :"( i wanna see him skate figure :3

As he is about to close the laptop, a little disgusted with himself for ruining this so
early even though deep down he is unsurprised since he seems very good at
naturally ruining things anyway, the familiar chime sends him scrambling.

so cute seeing them chatting, yunho with his awkward but adorable response with jae being forward ;D

I like the way their relationship is starting. Both shy, in need of love, but scared like hell because both have had problematic love affairs.
Maybe my mind is kinky, but:
1 - Mr. Kim is Yunho's coach?
2 - Both Yunho and Jaejoong need a stable (let's say) relationship and Mr. Kim could watch over it.
Am I wrong? I'll go to the next chapter to see.
Lucky me. When I discovered your Journal the fic was already completed.
In fact, I found on Twitter the reference about "Love in the ice", entered there and you sent me here. So, I will diligently read the beginning before "making love in the ice"... kekeke!
Love your fic. It's very good.

Edited at 2013-10-16 11:07 pm (UTC)

That line about top or bottom... at the dinner table with mom and dad.
*cringes*
Love those e-mails. :)

Oh oh, YunJae online dating yesss, I like *_* Short comments but I will leave one on every chapter... hope it's not too much spam lol