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Ice [3]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Spent most of the morning in hospital OTL It’s fucking windy here… like over 100kph (60+mph) and a cyclist got blown by a strong gust of wind into me and I ended up with a lacerated scalp and mild concussion last night. OH couldn’t wake me up this morning so I ended up in hospital. I’m fine btw. I think I was just tired or something. I really don’t remember… I wrote pretty much all of this while in hospital so be kind cos I think there's a lot of mistakes but I have a headache and don't want to re-read :(

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 



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can't wait until yunjae meet each other ! Jae's parents amazing couple xD love it ! Thank you for update ^^

Cant wait for them to meet up.. Sigh...

Great chapter. Hope you are feeling better x

I'm glad you're:

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Now (oh JunGod forgive me for what I'm about to say) just get some rest and don't write.

PD. KJFHGAJDFAKJFHDGKAJGF YUYA HAHAHAHAHAHA ftw

Fate really plays them well. And poor Mr. Kim disappointed that Yunho was taken…if on he knew lol
Now I'm sp curious how the perfume smells like. I had better check it out later.

Oh and get well soon my beeswaxing! Take a well rest. The readers can wait ^^

You have no idea how much I enjoy reading this fic, it's just sooo gooood

Ooooh you updated again! I'm so happy!
I noticed just now that all chapters have different banner-images! And they look all so nice although my favourite is this one!

I really like the conversations between them and how the parents realized that secretly both of them thought of Yunho as the ideal match for their son! It's so funny how the circumstances played with them and they couldn't meet yet personally despite the parents hope... and also those little details like the dinner Jae remembered his mother cooked and the perfume Yunho recognized make the whole thing even more exciting - as if they're unintentionally chasing the other, finding traces of the other's existence without knowing the meaning of those signs...

I remember last time you mentioned you didn't like email/chat fics which I completely understand because I also don't really like them but it made me remember of a Gazette-fanfiction I read long time ago... It was somewhat similar with them getting to know each other via e-mail and chatting and later when they both moved to Tokyo and met accidentally they didn't realize who the other was till the end of the story.

Anyway Yunho's rebirth what everybody noticed in the team and how they started to pester him for some information was so amusing! And the huge difference between Jae at home and Hero Jaejoong on a business meeting was so interesting. I like how he seems to be so perfect at playing arrogant star in order to the management take him seriously ... and to protect himself in the music industry but still it's so sad that he can't be himself only at home (and with Yunho chatting online).
I'm so curious how will they first meet and also whether this first meeting with Yunho will be when his father introduces him and the hockey team to each other or something else...



[Music]: The Moon that Embraces the Sun OST - Tears of the Sun

Why are they all so cuteeeeeeee!! :D
So loving the team! And Coach Kim is sooo cute too! I can't wait till when YunJae met. They are relatively a few 'distance' away. So close but they dun know just yet. And Missha? Wows! :D

Omgggggg I love this!!!!! Appa and umma kim!, you guys are the best! The sexual innuendos are making me giggle lmao epic!

THE IMAGE OF YUNHO YELLING OPPAAAAAAAAA TO JAEJOONG! I CANNOT....LOL!
sexy men and their sexy cars are so assfjakahahak!!!
seriously loving this new fic if yours.

hope your ok now ^^

my my my.. okay..i'm not too surprised about food affiliated with changmin. but it doesn't mean it's not amusing. i get in good laugh just because of that matter. lol

i thought the Kim coach actually with the team intended to match-making yunjae together. but no, both parties didn't even know that yunjae got themselves hooked up to each other. such a fate u played with, huh? ;D

love it~ it's ok..not rushing things is the best way to get the tension builds up XD and well, yunho's suffering from it already. lol

GOOD JOB UNNIE~! XDD

This is fabulous. Anxiously following; this fic is the most fun I've had in ages.

Loved the shower scene in the first chapter (a pantheon of naked Kpop stars! – what's not to like?)

Yunho's comeback on ice and Changmin's chagrin...Yunho on Jae's bed inhaling his fragrance...

I am really anticipating their meeting! And you are delaying it so artfully.

Ah yes, completely hooked.

I'm glad to know that you are okay.
You must have scared your hubbie big time.
I hope you make it up to him.

Thank you for the daily update.
I was happy this morning when I saw this update.

Yunho is really like a kid.
Happy, spirited and full of life when he is happy in love.
I'm not surprise that he performed a perfect 10 during practice.

So I was right about Coach wanting to set Yunho and Jaejoong up.
Well, you never know when fate will land a helping hand and give Coach his wish.

I think your choice of making Yoochun do what he did is perfect.
It suits his character so perfectly.
I would expect him to do that.

Changmin like usual. As long as food is involved...nothing except fire will make him leave it ^__^

It's really fated that the room Yunho sleeps in and the first room he picks to text Jaejoong is Jaejoong's own room.

I love their conversation.
The way you weaved the Missha perfume into the fic was brilliant.
Now Yunho will have a hard on every time he smells it.
I wonder what will his reaction be when he meets Jaejoong and Jaejoong is using Missha ^^


I cannot wait to read their online conversation. ^^b


Edited at 2013-01-10 02:26 pm (UTC)

okay,i decided to read this fic and it is so awesome!!!
i love the plot and i love how u make jae older than yunho, i like old jae instead of old yun...

thank you for this great writing so far and will be waiting patiently for more...:))))

Although they are a match made in heaven, it looks like heaven likes to play them around for a while...😁