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Ice [3]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: Spent most of the morning in hospital OTL It’s fucking windy here… like over 100kph (60+mph) and a cyclist got blown by a strong gust of wind into me and I ended up with a lacerated scalp and mild concussion last night. OH couldn’t wake me up this morning so I ended up in hospital. I’m fine btw. I think I was just tired or something. I really don’t remember… I wrote pretty much all of this while in hospital so be kind cos I think there's a lot of mistakes but I have a headache and don't want to re-read :(

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 

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kyaaaa hahahahaas. omg. are u feeling better?

Wahahah coincidences must be playing with fate kyahaha yunjae is soo loved changmin is soo funny not even budging at the dining table lol and accckk your in the hospital?! Awww hopefully not cause brain damage or anything >_< anywei huggles be safe always

You wrote this with an effing concussion?! sorry to say this, but I hope you'll run over more frequently then ;)
jk ofcourse!!!
I hope your headache is better by now. *Sends you virtual fruit basket*
I'm really getting into this fic ^^I can't wait to see how Jae will react to the real Yunho ;)
but I didn't fully grasp the ending: does Yunho already realise that Jae is the coach's son? Or is he still oblivious? I'm sorry for being confused...
Btw, I can tell you're just as excited as I am about Jaejoong's new album. Tomorrow is the MV teaser!!!!

you'll *get* run over..
sorry, I tend to forget verbs...

OMG, They need to meet like NAO~ ;A; I already frigging love this.

Read it this afternoon and anjdhdkfhdkjgh this is so good ;o;♥
Don't play innocent, you're completely cockblocking!!! XDDD Maybe it's too early but why are you teasing us (and them) like this? I was like "omg gnjfdgj they're going to meet tonight!!! :ooooo"
But yeah you're right (it's never too early for YunJae to get together /shot) it would end too soon otherwise.
The last scene made me squeal and giggle and spazz so much, you killed me! haha
Thank you for updating so fast ♥
Please take care of yourself though!

hahaha cant imagine talking to someone you dont know in reality and snuggling into his bed and getting a hard on at the same time lol, awkward yunhooo thanks for updating! (:

omg omg its getting even more interesting haha but i sadly assume that they wont meet soon irl ><
but its still so nerve wracking haha

Yunho lying in Jaejoong's bed without knowing it's his... This is brilliant :'D And the daddy will get what he wanted in the end too :D

"Yo U-Know! Let's try some plays, bitch" OMFG THAT GOT ME /forever cannot unhear that in O jung ban hap song /

This update is so good hfsgdtehd the sexual tension is building up oh fuck
/rinses water

aaaaaaaaah... coach did not know that they already met on online date? =DD

well.. that's fate.
love this chapter~~

omo....when will they meet???

LOL XD I love how they are oblivious that the ones Jae and Yun are talking to are each other hahah gawd this is too cute. And yes it cock blocking but it's okay since I love every party of this story even the cock blocking :p

hahahaha, im loving this!!!
well, i dont know what to say, just want to let u know that im loving this fic!! ^^

Wow~ what a fun chapter! XD
Gosh i was hoping that yunjae would be able to meet up soon, but doesnt look like thats happening soon~ >.<
Im gonna read the rest tomorrow after some sleep. ~.~

hahaaa, but stilll noooo, how could you make Yunho leave? XD

love this story. forgot to say, I like the idea of Jaejoong being a good skater. I can totally imagine Yunho treating him like a newb on ice and then finding out that he's actually quite a pro even if rusty.

Is it too much to hope for Jaejoong as a top here, especially given their personalities? XD Even if not, please have them occasionally switch! lmao, sorry for being pushy ^^ *innocent*

Again, love how close the team is and with their coach too. Can't believe Yunho and Jaejoong have never met--nor Changmin and Jaejoong. hmmm, intriguing possibilities :D