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Ice [3]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Spent most of the morning in hospital OTL It’s fucking windy here… like over 100kph (60+mph) and a cyclist got blown by a strong gust of wind into me and I ended up with a lacerated scalp and mild concussion last night. OH couldn’t wake me up this morning so I ended up in hospital. I’m fine btw. I think I was just tired or something. I really don’t remember… I wrote pretty much all of this while in hospital so be kind cos I think there's a lot of mistakes but I have a headache and don't want to re-read :(

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 



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ROFLMAO! i love yunnie's teammates and jae2's parents!!!! *nuff said!

Omigawd! Yunho loves Yuya Matsushita? I love Yuya Matsushita too. Haha. We have something in common. We shud be the ones dating online lol.

Lol. Everything is going to their heads. Good luck with that guys.

I hope that they never meet in between either until when they decide to. They might think that they're falling for each other and breaking their online partner's heart. Still surprised that they have a connection with each other but haven't met at all yet.

I feel sad that jae has to act like hero that way. It was all because of the entertainment industry. One side I want him to still be singing but people see his true side and the other one wants him to figure skate. Either one he's still damn irresistible.

It's interesting to see how the effects of their relationship manifest so obviously with Yunho, while with Jaejoong, he's forced to keep everything behind his mask. It's a contrast that shows how different their situations are. While they're both public figures, their lives are very much different. The only thing that links them together is their internet relationship, and...



UGH. THINGS ARE JUST GOING SO WELL FOR THEM. T~T EVEN THOUGH THEY HAVEN'T MET FACE TO FACE YET, EVERYTHING'S JUST OFF THE CHARTS AMAZING. ASDJKSADJASKDJASD. THEY'RE PERFECT, I SWEAR, PERFECT.



...then you had team interaction again too. GUH. I love all your numerous characters. You're so good at handling them.


THE HOCKEY TEAM!! I love their banter so much! Yoochun is just very blunt and sexual, I absolutely love the grease! The progression of the story is so lovely and it always makes me come back for more.

The little things that the Kim's have done for the A team is so amazing, it's like they raised six sons while their only son was away. And Jaejoong is slowly finding himself again after all those years as a public figure; Coach Kim had it right when he said that Yunho would be a great match for Jaejoong for these reasons. Plus the pair is just so aesthetically pleasing<3333

It's so cute how the two manage to turn each other on just through messages. Their attraction is BURSTING all over the place :P

lol ^_^ their convo is going deep down the abyss of eroticism
(amd i like it!) >///<

ohmaygawd..i'm enjoying this way too much and way to early >.<

LOL this chapter is so funny! The interactions with the boys are great. I had to laugh at Changmin not budging from his seat in favor of his food :D while the others were attaching Yunho to get his phone. Too funny. And Yunjae are cute as usual. Poor Jae not liking his "Hero" mask and wanting to talk to Yunho. Very cute.

i am dying omfg sgjbajhgsabghjsa
I SHOULD HAVE READ THIS A LONG TIME AGO.

CRIES

Thanks god i have some charpters to read hahahha oh sorry for my poor comments, i'll try to get it better but i'm typing from my cell phone and i am without any translator here, please understand. In first place, i hope you got better, and you wrote while were in the hospital, youre so increible hahah tks. Im just lovin this bcz is just so sweet, o God, this yunho is just so so ... I want bite him hahaha jaejoong ir really different from hero jaejoong write? He was really needing a break of activities on fact. And i just lmfao with this hungry changmin, i loved it! I promisse beter comments when i read this on computer okay?

wow! XD
just missing each other!
cant wait till they actually meet!
must keep reading! :D

The team is so much fun, torturing Yunho! And lol-ing at beeswax!

Only Changmin is still in his seat, eating, completely unperturbed.
He wants to know about Yunho’s new love of course, but he also loves Mrs Kim’s
cooking, and since he only gets that once a week, only a fire would move him from
his seat.

ROFL i can so imagine him do that in real life XD

i wonder how jae's parents would react when they know yunho's heart is actually for jae? :O

First things first: I was right about papa Kim. He was involved in this online date (or smth).

I like the way things go: easy, fluffy enough to gain trust.
And omma Kim is trully epic: “You wanted him with Yunho. There is no way in hell that man bottoms for anyone.”
Hahahahaha!

I wonder what Younho will say when he will know that the room he was in is really Jae's room... and fragrance...

Hahaha! Somehow yunho reminds me of a... faithful female highschool student. His world is all about love and roses. XD

I FREAKING LOVE THIS FIC OMFG 8D
Jaejoong is totally a bottom hehe
And sporty Yunho with a future in the business world? WHO CAN RESIST THAT??? And they're both so cute and adorable together and I can't stop flailing cause of all the "coincidences" and OMG. On to the next chapter!!! :D