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Ice [4b]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: You REALLY need to be playing this song for this part. REALLY REALLY REALLY. Play it from when Jaejoong gets home… http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAa9GX6db8g Don’t blame me if you miss this, because I actually had to change my underwear imagining this scene, especially Jaejoong’s voice dear god… OTL

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 



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that's a mindblowing update...hahahaha..
thanks for this..<33333

Oh, sheesh! that was one hot phone call. O.O Not to mention the song! I thank you for recommending that song. It was really, really sensual. I shivered. Why the heck am I single?! T.T

oh the team knows!changmin and hangeng are awesome!
omg sexgod..they are sexgods..yunho's inspiration will be overflowing the oji eagles will be stomped.

Oh my goodness!! That Phone sex was soooo accckk *currently brain dead >_<

OH MY GOD :Q_______________________________
Extra long chapter with a super hot ending, I love you ♥
And with the song dklsfjkdjgkjkhj /off to change my underwear as well.
I'm not a fan of phone sex in fics but dear god when it's written like this I say HELL YES!
Now we can be sure they're gonna have a great match tomorrow \o/

The meeting between Jaejoong and Yunho's teamates was awkward though lol
But I'm happy they did the connection between Hero Jaejoong and Kim Jaejoong from the dating site. Are they going to tell Yunho?
I wish Jaejoong would tell him, because I wonder how he'll react. Just like I wonder how Jaejoong will react when he'll know Yunho is in his dad's team.

So Jaejoong knows Seunghyun too, ouch I smell troubles...
His industry is totally fucked up, it's terrible.

Thanks for the awesome extra long update ^^
Have a nice weekend~

Wow. Just amazing. I love this story :D

ABSOLUTELY MIND-BLOWING SONG CHOICE AND POWERFUL WORDS TO DRAW YOUR AUDIENCE IN!!!
I SUUUUUUUUUUPER APPROVE OF THE SEXINESS HERE!! OMASFASL;FASL;FKAS;

i sound really pevertic but i can't wait wen they lit starts doing it.

Fuck. Phone sex scene kills me

oh god, that was so wrong! hot smut already XD i wished i was there T.T

Wow! That wassssss sooo hot!

i wanted to leave a comment, but i think i'll seat on icecubes and change underwear now.

Goshhh the smut came so soon >< not that I complain lol
And it wasn't even chat sex but phone sex!!! YunJae did move so fast right now.
the squad knew whom Yunho is dating. Thanks to Changmin's photographic memory and Geng's wits. It makes the story develops even more interestingly.

Also I'm thinking…due to Jaejoong's orgasm scream, his dad probably happened to hear it somehow? LoL

Omg I thought unsaid they were going too fast. Hehe changmin is one smart kid