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Ice [4b]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: You REALLY need to be playing this song for this part. REALLY REALLY REALLY. Play it from when Jaejoong gets home… http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAa9GX6db8g Don’t blame me if you miss this, because I actually had to change my underwear imagining this scene, especially Jaejoong’s voice dear god… OTL

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 



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Fate has a wicked sense of humor.
Seunghyun hurt a person whom Jaejoong cares about.
What will his reaction be when he learns he hurt Yunho too?
Somehow I think this is not be the last time we will see of Seunghyun.
I hope this time Han Geng gets to rearrange his face.
If it's Jaejoong, even better.


If only Jaejoong came home earlier, they would have met.
However, now it has become interesting as the team knows who is Yunho's mystery person.
I wonder will they tell him or tease him while dropping hints.
But will Yunho be smart enough to figure it out.

Shim Changmin is scary. I would never want to be on his bad side as you don't know what he will think off or remember.

I cannot help wonder if Jaejoong will watch the match and that will let him know who is Jung Yunho.
What will Jaejoong do once he knows?

Someone should put a warning: Do not read this chapter, followed by watching Kim Jaejoong's MINE teaser.
I immediately had a mental shutdown.
Too much hot smut and one hot bad ass rocker image of Kim Jaejoong made all my blood head south.
I think there was marginal blood flowing in my brain to keep me breathing.
It's a miracle I didn't nosebleed to death.

Ooooh the baby pictures! And the torture-like family dinner with Yunho's sister! She such a spoiled brat! ... But it's so amusing how the parents can't really do anything about her attitude but blackmailing her in the hope it will affect her behaviour positively! : D

And it seems she's a fan of Hero Jaejoong - or why else was she that desperate? : D

I guess the first meeting between the team (except Yunho) and Jae went slightly awkwardly... okay I know Jae was irritated by the previous events so the situation was very unfortunate but I really hope they get along just fine in the future. Especially because the boys already figured out who is the mysterious Kim Jaejoong Yunho is dating and I really don't want them trying to convince Yunho to break up with him or something!

And the hot ending... I can't find proper words, I really enjoyed phone sex concept! : D

my fucking internet deleted the comment -_-
anyway,
this was fucking hot!! and I lovr jaejoongs and yunhos character here! but i also sensesome upcoming drama? u-ooh

*groans* I just fucking loved that~ *-* :Q____

I enjoyed sleeping beauty and jaejuko so much! This story is ranking up into my favorites.

lNkhbgajhBGhdb WAT WAT WAT WAT IS THIS JDGSDGHB /screams and pulls hair and throws self down the stairs/

TOO HOT TOO MUCH TOO KSBGJHSBGJABSH I CAN'T I JUST CAN'T

for a fic that's supposed to be about ice, it's...surprisingly heated. ;) omg that was so lame i don't even think it can be considered a joke

yunho seems to be the character that falls fast and hard and with everything that he is. i'm getting the typical aquarius vibe from jae so that will be interesting to see in development. :3

ALSO, I KNEW THERE WOULD BE JAEHO. switching is the best way to go n_n

kgnKSBGJASDGHBJDGBAJHBGD THIS IS TOO MUCH FOR MY LITTLE BUNNEH BRAIN TO HANDLE ALONG SIDE JAE'S TEASER AND I JUST CAN'T WITH LIFE ANYMORE I THINK I'M GOING TO GO FIND A DARK CAVE AND DRAG MY DS WITH ME TO DETACH MYSEFL FROM ALL OF THIS DHSBGJHSBAGHDBi /curls up in a ball and wails/

OMG *__* that was....HOT. So damn sexy and hot. Uhnnn I hope they meet soon!

Wait so does everyone know that they're in a relationship now?? Omg what's gonna happen?? I hope things don't get awkward? >.< they're moving so fast! Aww but they're so cute and they totally are perfect for each other! Can't wait for the next chapter :-)

oh yeah.oji eagles didn't know what was coming to them indeed.lol!XD

Oh God!
Why I must read this fic? It's torturing with all the teasing xD
LoL yunjae pls stop teasing each other! XDxD my heart can't take it xD
Hopefully there won't be too surprised when both of them meet .__.

changmin is sure smart. =DD

want more yunjae~~

changmin i love you!!u are the first ever to find out about jae is dating yunho!!hahaha..i smell something bad about that Seunghyun guy!!

yunho is really falling in love with jae.
i know jae really likes yunho too.. but does he love him as yet too..

and team already figure it out too...

thanks for posting

Hotness overloads. Brain damaged. I cannot leave a proper comment. I'm not sorry. x)

woooooow this is soooooooooo hoooooot
iam feel soooo hot now after reading this chapter

iam sorry i have been a seilent reader for along time
but your fics are soooooooo awesome <3
i adore it really <3

yunjae are soooooooo hot for their own good

i can't wait for your updates
thanks for your great works :))

omg bb do you want me to die from a heart attack or something?!
I really liked the fact that you wrote it from both perspectives.
Most of the time people write it where YH is doing the fucking
my favorite line was when JJ said YH could cum all over him
even his face >////<~ It was sooooooo good!
i know what you mean about changing the underwear lol =p
it was even more awkward for me because im in my dorm
and my roommate is directly across from me orz