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Ice [4b]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: You REALLY need to be playing this song for this part. REALLY REALLY REALLY. Play it from when Jaejoong gets home… http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAa9GX6db8g Don’t blame me if you miss this, because I actually had to change my underwear imagining this scene, especially Jaejoong’s voice dear god… OTL

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 



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wow~
the phone smex was reallly H O T!
>///<

and yunho saying i love you at the end was endearing too

EFF! I started reading this because people friends in yunjaerulesdaworld have been talking about this and sorry didn't comment on the first chapter but I just had to go to another chater after the first and then again...I couldn't stop reading it~ but I jus have to comment on this one! This seriously is the SEXiest phone sex I've read! This made me *thinks about the word my friend often use to joke around with us* gushing~

This is really good~

I might not comment in the chapters following but in chapter 14 surely^^

so, it's the same Seunghyun I guess..
and the phone sex.. you just killed me really
and Yunho's declaration of love is awww

Holyshighsjdhga this feels like my first time


reading fic


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I don't know how to make sense right now.
But this was perfect :3

Comment in the cell phome is really a sucks aish hahaha besides o couldnt heard the song that you posted, sad life ): weell i said i will comment in a way more .. hm i dont know how use this word in eng, so just read this like u always do hahaja btw thanks for reply me >< however, seunghyun is a fucking bastard! And I hope that joongie and yunnie hit him until he needs help to breath! U.U and jessica friend of jae? Sorry i cant acept this, jaessica isnt real, and never had been hahahah but OH MY LORD, SEX BY CELL PHONE, gosh i never read this before haha and i have to say that if it wasnt so perfect writting like you did, i would be traumatizated, really. I am fainting here, just imagine with both meet eachoder and make love, i will really have an attach ! But for me, the part that i screamed I DONT BELIEVE, was when yunnie said "i love you" it was so sincere #cry Unnie ~~~~ this is just one of the mosts perfect fics that i've read . Really i am loving it. And i dont no how my friend live without foreing fic, eng fics are the bests u.u chuuuuuuu

woah! its like the smut came out of nowhere! loved it! ^///^

ahhh its 1 in the morning here... must sleep... i'll continue reading later! <3

So Seunghyun and Jae have some kind of a connection too...
and man, that phone sex is hot and beautiful.

“Oh fuck, this is not good.”
why is it not good? :O

shoot that was really hot. /dies
aww yunho falls so hard, huh? :")

God! I can see it all!
Those guys are so funny...
I find quite interesting how they found a lot of similarities eventhough they seem to be essentially different personalities.

Now, after regaining my breath and cooling down my heart beats, the essential point: the phone sex. It's quite an experience, I must give you that. It's not only my imagination, but your talent mainly. I'VE FUCKING SAW IT ALL! And I felt all the sex tension.

Now it's time to go farther...

Everything, I-- :Q___

I follow what you sais to listen the song whie reading that part..i could imgine that jae is the one who sings it...
I like all the story you write Nd hoping for more yunjae...more power!!

FUCK FUCK FUUUUUUUCKKKKKKKKKK!!! DAT FUCKING SEX CALL JUST BLOW MY MIND AND BODY AWAY!!!!! AND THE SONG FITS SO PERFECTLY WITH THE SMEXY MOOD! i never hear it before but one thing are sure, I'm gonna put it on my sexy-time playlist!
Shit shit shit shit! I just need to calm the FUCKING down!
OK OK... So, Changmin and Hangeng just realized the guy who are dating with Yunho are Hero Jaejoong. GOSH that brat is so smart LOL (sorry I'm so hyper after reading dat sexy part)
And yeah, I think I'm gonna hate (more if it's possible) Seunghyun... I have a bad feeling about him e.é