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Ice [5]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: Alright so I was actually gonna skip the day after thing and jump ahead in time… but then I decided not to lol! And my MIL is the editor of a paper and she will cry at my attempt at an article lmao. And also, uh, PLEASE REMEMBER MY JOURNAL IS 18+… Proceed at your own risk lmao!!! Also, barely made the LJ cut off because crazy word count OTL

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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OH. MY. GOD. I just died.

Oh my gosh I cant believe you gave Jaejoong one of...those piercings lmao. This chapter was so enjoyable to read~ I really get a kick out of reading about the other members of Yunho's team spaz about the couple xD I can't wait for the chapter where they finally meet~

i have never seen those pictures of JJ before so i was a little confused at first orz. I'm surprised that Seunghyun didn't continue to be a douchebag and try to press charges to the fullest. tbqh I am going to be doing fucking cartwheels when they finally meet each other. I really like how they can just lose their titles and be themselves with each other. the pictures made me really giddy except that apadravya picture it made me squirm >//< I am always floored by people who get their privates pierced...I mean that has to be extremely painful right? and won't it hurt to pee?! orz ;; anyways hopefully JJ doesn't get in trouble for anything else lol

*inhales exhales*
Gahhh. It's so hot *___*
My virgin eyes can't take it lmao lmao xD
Hope they won't be too violent when they know each other real identity :'(

Thx for writing!!! :3

Im all caught up!!! XD
I really love how their relationship continues to get stronger everyday!
Thy are just sooo adorable together! I really want them to meet soon~ >.<
Though i dread the day when they find out about each other~! D:
Cant wait for the next chapter!

Lol I had to reply cos you were so enthusiastic about being caught up and I'm here grinning and going... Next chapter has been up for hours :P

goddamn what did you do to me?
aaaaaahhhhhh! the mortality rate is increasing!

Ok wow! That's pretty hot and I may as well say it, my favorite chapter so far ^^

OMG! what did i juz saw?!!!! i'll be damn if it's true on jae2. *dies*

I like how you put them at different places but shows that they are doing the same thing together. They are currently a phone and screen apart. And like a chain of sequence, the nudging of the teammates connects them together.

Lol. Yunho has photographic memory but doesn't give a crap about remembering what hero looks like. Do you how happy I was when yunho said he cares more about Kim jaejoong than hero jaejoong!?

The airport scene was hilarious. I almost choked on my food. Im still in a fit of fangirly giggles. XD. It's so mushy mushy and sometimes I just hate it but this whole entire chapter of gushy mushiness I love it.

Jaw drop at his last piercing. What are we gonna do with you jae?

what can i say about this chapter ? hemmm EPIC !!
*mouth dropping*

*continue reading*

My reaction when reading this chapter was like this --> DDDD: because of Yunho's innocence (or should I say he's too blind to notice the similarity between Hero and the one he's currently dating?). Is he really having Photographic memory? Hmmm ...

The piercing is uhmm ... W.O.W!!!!!!

OH MY GOD! I just the shock reading this and the image... just Oh My!... hahahaha... (my own fault to open this at the office.... *embarrassed )

I love your story (and you too) nevertheless.... ^_____^

how do you keep up with 6 plus 1 characters in just 1 setting...
wow~...and you can still let them talk and do things randomly at the same time too >.< (your soo~ good!) ^_^

and "apadravya" just killed it!
IT killed them all~ >.