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Ice [5]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: Alright so I was actually gonna skip the day after thing and jump ahead in time… but then I decided not to lol! And my MIL is the editor of a paper and she will cry at my attempt at an article lmao. And also, uh, PLEASE REMEMBER MY JOURNAL IS 18+… Proceed at your own risk lmao!!! Also, barely made the LJ cut off because crazy word count OTL

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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Ah I was laughing SO hard at the airport lounge scene! You are amazing! I love your writing and it was so realistic. Yunho's in his own little world talking to Jae, and everyone else watching their conversation live! Just wow.

my eyes are currently gawking at apadravya (ohhhh, isn't it hurting?)

Not god, Yunho…Jae…
I love this line keke

and I love all the images. Images make everyone happy~

I'M IN COMPUTER UNNIE~~ i didnt ask you if i can call you this way, so sorry, i won't do it more.
But, now im gonna comment like you deserve ÇKAJOÇIJÇKLAJSD but i have to say that i'm lazy enough to don't open the translator so if you dind't undersand just pass by it okay? LKAJÇODJSAKJAÕIJADS yes my loughs are crazy, so don't mind KJÇPJKJKDA
I have to say that Yunho is really a speaker hm? He tells about everything not just to his friends but to his family too, and i think that it so awesome! For me its like an impossible thing, I’m shy to ask if i can go out to my parents, so i was really "ow so sweet yunnie" when I saw how he talk with his teammates and family :3
Sometimes i do forget that this yunjae have 6 years of difference ! Jaejoong is just too cute smiling reading yunho emails, and is just so romantic, and uncommon for person in that age, i just loved it!
Today I told to my friend about phone sex, and she though it was strange, and i said "oh please, i read one that was just a PERFECT WRITING and it was not such a strange thing, it was exotic but... but OMFG IT'S YUNJAE, IS REAL" KJAJOIJDAL so poor my friend who is lazy to read in english, she don't know about how your fic is so exciting, so i'll just be happy for myself, bye. JDALJIOAIJADÇOJDA i really NEED to say this, i'm afraid to read your other fics GODS ITS DAMN WORSE THIS? i don't know if i can stand ! KLÇMDPOKDA~PKA well, let me comment about the teammates of Yunho, oh God they're so funny, and i love them! and like always Voldemin looks like a hyung and not a dongsaeng /yes. YUNHO, I THINK YOU'LL FREAK OUT WHEN DISCOVER THAT HERO CRAZY-ROCKSTAR-FUCKING-PERCT-WHO-MAKES-ME-FAINT- JAEJOONG IS YOUR JAE , yes ÇIKJDÇOILSJKDADA I'M IMAGINE WHEN THEY MEET EACHOTHER ON THE BED /OR PIANO, YOU'LL KILL ME IF YOU DESCRIBE THIS/ AND I'LL NOT COMMENT ABOUT THIS PIERCING, I'M TRYING TO NOT THINK ABOUT THIS IMAGE, ABOUT THE PAIN ON PUTTING THIS, AND LIVE WITH THIS THING IN YOU ... GOD DAMN EREASE THIS IMAGE FROM MY HEAD, IT DIDN'T WORK TO ME ÇLADSKPLDKA~POKADPLÇKA chuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ~~ oh i forgot to say this literally > YOU ARE AMEZING .

O.O wow! I did not expect a picture to be there. I was about to google the word up myself when I just scrolled down a bit and saw the tip of a photo and then there it is!!! Thanks now I don't have to look it up myself to find out. By the way, legally I'm not a fetus but omg!!!!! Yeah I'm screaming right now. I 've read about this types of piercings before and I was fine with it but actually seeing one is a shock lol.

Anyway, I love how they're getting to know each other more and more and my excitement for them meeting also grows along with it.

Thank you so much for this fic! I'm reading it late.

P.s. how do fans how many piercings Jae allegedly has now? From photos?

Changmin and Han Geng are just fast to catch on the identity of Yunho's boyfriend! I love Jae's character here. So devious >D

Yoochun, the perpetual grease monkey of the team, starts moaning and running
his hands down his body as he utters breathily, “I really wanna touch myself.”

*smack the grease monkey's head*

Yunho purses his lips as he waits, his pout pronounced indeed, as he sucks in his
cheeks and makes kissy faces to no one in particular.

Oh my gosh that would be a really precious sight, so cute xD

Grinning unrepentantly, Jaejoong kisses the phone again. This time, a simple peck.
“There! Your chaste kiss.”
As he listens to Yunho laughing and sending his own chaste kiss back, he hears
the beep of an incoming call.

i can't help to feel giddy seeing their interaction. it's like seeeing a couple of teenagers so in love :3

i hope when jae realizes those signs, it wouldn't be too late >_

It seems both Jaejoong and Yunho have an unpleasant (at least) acquaintance: Seunghyun. Grrrr....
I'm happy Jaejoong broke his finger. I wonder why Seunghyun dropped the charges...
Priceless! Their "conversation" after the match... lskfdjb ovalejrbg...
I had to open the window. So hoooot! Think I'm going crazy. And it's just the beginning...

The song references, so.. I flung my phone on the bed a few times cause it's too x,D

I didn't know what the last piercing was but I'm not a fetus either, omg

Um...I didn't expect the picture lmao but I'm not complaining XD

I spend a FUCKING hour trying to put a FUCKING image here and this FUCKING shit don't let me do it and all my hype an dizzy and sexy mood just fade away e.é so, I'm just gonna skip my comment here cuz I AM SO FUCKING ANGRY AT THIS FUCKIN SMARTPHONE THAT NOT HAD NOTHING TO SMART 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

Ok, not an hour but I'm angry as hell, sorry 😢