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Ice [7]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating:NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Why did I cry…………… (sung in tune)

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 



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You leave me hungry for some more at the end of every chapter!xD
In all honesty, I want more than 10 chapters, BUT it's enterely your choice, you already know in your head the development of the story, so ^^

I don't have any new Jae icons... it's so frustrating!

Anyway I really enjoyed the update - as always!
My favourite part evidently was the meet and greet scene with Jihye! It was really entertaining how they talked, how Jihye behaved like always - how Jae already knew her from Yunho's complaints! I almost expected Jae will write Yunho's name on the picture without making sure he wasn't wrong with his assumptions... : D
But the message talked for itself! For a smart girl like her I'm sure she already had some suspicion when she read it... but the song in the encore was more than enough help to put two and two together! So for me it looks like Jae's trying to prepare Yunho with small hints before he confesses his real identity...

The boys appearing at the Kim's home to watch the broadcasting together was funny! And how they deliberately didn't invite Yunho was even better! Anyway I was relieved when made the promise between one another that they won't meddle in Yunho's love life again... ^^

I wonder whether Yunho watched it or not ... but because he knew his sister was there and he's aware of her infatuation with Jae he probably watched (if not Jihye will surely show him at least that last song on YouTube, because it's part of the message on the photo : D).
So if he saw the performance he probably has now a suspicion and the present from Jihye will just confirm it.

I can't wait for the next chapter! [heart]


[Music]: Boyfriend - I Yah

kdsfhagsjzghjkg this fic is the best! ;A; So maany feels right now <3 I LOVE THIS SONG SO MUCH BTW(Connect The Dots - Spill Canvas)

Ungh ungh ungh yunho is so hot in the yawang cuts http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vTNlDKsz0YQ&feature=youtube_gdata_player

His voice sounds very tinny though.

Angry yunho on the ice rink... Enjoy...

When all of this happens where the hell are you yunho!! My heart, I actually teared up at the end of this chapter!

because of you updated fast she thought you plagiarised? i wonder how people's brain is working? this fic is so original and outstanding. if you plagiarised this, the news must be already spread.

does jihye know about his brother and jae relationship??
why she gasp of shock???
please she must have realize about it after the message jae wrote for yunho!!! you gonna write till ch 10? i'm ok with that!!

Omg how can i say how much i really really love this chapter?! acckk seriously every chapter is getting better and better <3 i love how i picture in my mind jae's performance haha >_< and then jae got to see and meet yunho's sister awww anywei thnxsomuch for updating everyday wer so blessed btw accckk someone thought you u plagirized this story?? Seriously?! Lmao >_< TC always and bring us happiness lol <3

Seriously i lost count how many time you make me cry since Sleeping Beauty...

This is so beautiful. Really hope Yunho watch that performance. Jihye will help them, right?

For those who doubt your cossitency in updating your story, they maybe someone new. Just ignore them!!!! You never fail me since Sleeping Beauty...

the concert sounds so awesome!! T^T i love how JJ lay himself bare for the world to see! and gah yunho where are yoouuuhhhh

oh my god~
despite lack of yunjaeness I TOTALLY LOVE this chapter..


You did good... don't bother about other people...
Btw This chapter is awesome .... adding jihye on our yunjae side...
That would be interesting.....

Oh my God this was so....so....I dont even have the right words right now. I feel for both of our boys, neither trusts the world very well anymore. I think that they really need each other now more than ever, it'll be good for them to have someone to rely on in their own chaotic world, where everyone wants a piece of Hero Jaejoong or some of U-Know Yunho's status and wealth. As to the only 10 chapters, well, you are the boss, and you are really well at writing and wrapping things up, but I am getting into thus one like I have done with your others.
Lastly as to the idiot that PMed you and accused you of plagiarism, well they just need to be hit upside the head. I don't know why they would ask such a thing, but you are just one hell of a writer that can churn out these chapters so fast. Thanks again for such a wonderful story, and I can't wait for the next update!!

I find it amusing that both Jaejoong and Yunho never thought that their other is in Seoul or living in the same area.

Why do I feel like Hero Jaejoong is such a diva because that's the amour that Jaejoong puts on to protect himself especially his heart?

Yunho's anger and frustration makes him a devil that even Junsu doesn't recognize him. Seems like Jaejoong's dark side is rubbing onto him ^^

I love how protective Yunho is over Jaejoong. It's like his heart is already set on keeping and making Jaejoong his no matter what.

Jaejoong is such a tease.
First, he sends a written message to Yunho through Jihye.
Then he serenades Yunho which he assumes Jihye would make the connection. I wonder why is he so certain.
Finally, when he emails that picture of him together with Jihye and Yunho sees it... ^^

I find it so cute and sweet that they team comes over to watch Jaejoong. It feels like they have accepted him into their brotherhood.

I wonder why does Jihye gasp. Yunho never dropped any hints about Jaejoong to her.

I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
What interesting twist will you write?
Will they finally meet now?

10 chapters? At the rate you are writing this, I doubt you can complete the fic with 3 more chapters.
You probably will have to do a sequel part with another 10 chapters.
If you end it at 10 chapters with lots of loose ends, I will definitely kill you. The suspense to have a perfect ending will kill me.

Why do I feel like Yunho and Jaejoong have switch roles when I compare this fic with Sleeping Beauty?
In Sleeping Beauty, Jaejoong was the innocent, spark of life and straight arrow character. In Ice, that is Yunho.
In Sleeping Baeuty, Yunho has a heart of ice because of his bitch of a wife and his totally useless parents. In Ice, Jaejoong has the heart of ice because of his career choice?