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Ice [9b]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: See you on the other side of the weekend (though not till Tuesday because it’s a long weekend here OTL)

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin 



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yayayyyyy!!!!! finally both of them meet up~~
i love it~

OH MY GAWD.

This chapter just made me go all shsjhfkhdskjvgbfjdfbgsdhbkeyboardsmashingmess

The part where yunho watch Jae's performance had me in tears. And their meeting is so cute!!! and then jae hugging him and being a koala at the end is just kdshfgfh


but how could youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, how could you stop there! XDDD

have a fun weekend!

Omg. Incredible. Just wow. The ending is just a pure tease. Can't wait for next week and good luck on handling the convention.

oh my hot, oh my hot oh my HOT~~~!!!!! this fic is awesome~~ and i would be very happy if you not cockblocking us.. ahahahaha :)) but its okay dear take your time~~ ^^

Now that was adorable and cute and sexy and... so YunJae. xD
OMGSun, can't wait to see will happen next! If u know what I mean...*wringle eyebrows*

Gonna go to work first. But I wanna read naoooooooooo~ *sobs* ;A;

...

"“We have a new house to christen.”
“We do?”
“It has five bedrooms…”
"

...

There's not much to do at work right now, so while I was standing behind the counter waiting for customers I was thinking about this fic and how it might proceed...
And I kinda made up a dialogue in my head and at one point they talked about the new house and how they had a lot of bedrooms to christen... xDDD


Well done! :) <3

What am I even supposed to say to this? ;____;



They just...ugh. OTL The build up was so totally worth it for them to finally get to this point, you know? The transition from just being people on the internet to actually BEING together was just amazing. They fit together perfectly, they got along wonderfully, they just are perfect, end of story. D:

...and lol, playing a trick on Jaejoong's parents? Adorable. XD I'm sure any person would be ecstatic to have Jung Yunho coming home as a potential (though, we all know in Jaejoong's case this is gonna be the real deal XD) son-in-law. :3

Anyway, so much flawlessness from you as always. I am blinded. XD


I cannot say this enough, i really really love your writing. The thrill, suspense, anticipation, the whole tumult of emotions that comes with reading your writing, i don't think you can imagine.

Yay! Have been excited about them connecting the dots. Finally!

JAE KOALA IS VERY RELEVANT



Edited at 2013-01-18 09:40 am (UTC)

oh dear.. poor the Kim parents... Jae... *shakehead*

i missed a few updates!gah~~
but it's fine..i'm glad i'm not too late.looks like they've met each other!yay~
i just love where this is going at the moment.keke~

you are reallly fast! holy shit! i opned up my lj to find two chapters already from you!! GOD! your absolutly amzing, buh sucha cockblock! i wanted to read smut! i hope you do write soe in the next chapter!
i really loved this chapter, espicially the ending! in a way i could imagin the kim parents! haha. i really love this fic and i am so glad that i found it!

KYAAAAAA, they are sooo cute together. I really like the way you depicted their characters. And next is the christening of Yunho's house? O____O Something tells me I'll need an extra pair of panties for your next update;)
And good luck with the convention!


Edited at 2013-01-18 11:40 am (UTC)

Oh my goodness lol jae is sooo bad hahaha yunjae is so cute sweet beautiful together that i wish it was in real life haha >_< awesome double chapter that i'm so full of yunjae cupcakes and now morbid obesse awww how you spoil me and the others ^_^ love it see yah in tuesday tc always and have a nice weekend yeow <3

Gosh, I love Jae in this LOL. He's so evil and flirtatious - his personality is a perfect balance of all his best traits :P And Yunho is so adorable, which makes sense because in real life, he has so much aegyo that he could probably get mistaken for the maknae at times.
Anyway~ I really enjoyed this chapter (and it was two parts too! long chapters ftw :P) ^^ Jae's trickiness is really endearing~