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Ice [11b]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: Just picture that gif in your head as you read this… and then some OTL

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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wooohoooo~~ gotta love your fast update~ ^^
that scene in the bathroom is so hot *A* never regret a smut hahaha~

Omergod lol steam is rising to my head so hot and smexy acckkk cannot utter more words asdfghjklllkkklssdbd >_< love

OMG yunjae's zigzag dots!!!!! that was fucking intense!!!! i can't imagine how they go all the way after getting green light medically. i guess they'll be more than horny jack rabbits. LOLS and i'm glad it happened after their heart to heart talk. it means something more than just a fucking sex.

and now that yunjae mention about that same flight to the game and going separately, i wonder how it goes when they try pretending not to know each other. some eagle eye fans might find it suspicious considering jae2 suddenly spotted on yunnie's game. LOLS. it will be a hay day mayday for yunjae fans. LOLS

Edited at 2013-01-22 06:12 pm (UTC)

How on earth can you write this with a straight face?
Especially in a boardroom.
Whenever I read any chapter of this fic, I need to tell myself to breathe and take time out before my brain can function again.

It gets worst when there is smut talk or smut action going on.

I'm going to need to learn from you how to do a poker face.

Good luck with all the packing and unpacking.
It is now close to 1 1/2 years since I move house and I still have things packed in boxes.
I haven't found the right bookcase and etc to place my things.

You must have had a really boring and long meeting if you can finish two chapters and one that is so smutty. ^^

By the way, where was the big bold words of warning for this chapter ;)
It's a good thing I'm reading this at home.

The last sentence of their conversation is scaring me.
Please do not give me a heart attack like you did with Sleeping Beauty.
Even after re-reading the fic, I still burst out crying at the thought of a dead Jaejoong.

Another happy-pill!! I really can't believe my luck today. First snowday (I live in Canada...) and then this chapter is out. ~~ Couldn't get any better, I say.~ ^^

I have to admit I didn't expect something like this! But I'm not disappointed at all, I really enjoyed the chapter with all the tears, smiles and sensuality.

I'm very curious about the game and if they will be able to go together and how will Jae attend without causing any commotion!

And of course I can't wait something about the infamous Changmin×Jihye interaction what Yunho mentioned, because she will be also there, right?

[Music]: 동방신기 - Humanoids

Gosh my beeswaxing I adore your excuse of writing smut LoL yea Yunho would definitely bot stand a chance!!!

I like your chapter of revelation too. It makes the story even more realistic. Also your fictions are always full of surprise and this one is the same. As much as I had been thinking about all the reasons that have made the disgusting Seunghyun, this disease thingies had never popped up in my imagination.

I salute you for writing this in the board meeting, was it uncomfortable being worried about someone looking at your computer screen? I mean I sometimes am embarrassed when reading smut in public. I'm afraid that someone might be able to spy my Galaxy Note screen LoL

Oh. My. God. That was damn hot jkxshqhswqhduewswha
...and sweet too :3
Thanks for the update

You make me so jealous of their love orz its the most beautiful thing ever. I am really glad that you placed a real world situation into this fic. STD's hardly ever get talked about in fanfics although they are very much real. I'm not saying that I am happy to see Yunho suffer I'm just saying that I'm glad its realistic :) I liked the part when Jaejoong said he would love to ride Yunho in the airport lol. That was an instant nosebleed for me xD

Shit. That was hot!
I seriously wasnt expecting that~! XD
Great chapter! Cant wait for the next update!

Oh goodness! Some smut is present which is fine because you are right, how would Yunho be able to handle Jae naked with that necklace on? I'm glad this part is a little less heavy than the last one, we were able to enjoy Yunjae's passion. Hehehehe, but I'm glad Jae is going to the game. I can only imagine how well he's going to play knowing Jae is there, well fingers crossed that nothing bad happens. I hope nothing does because I feel like they both have already gone through so much individually and together it'll be happy times. Jae is adorable here saying that he'll fight for Yunho. Gah, the romantic side of Jae but hopefully he does open up to Yunho about his previous substance abuse problems and how people used him. Loved it! :D

YOU WROTE SMUT I CRY ugh they're so cute..... T____T ♥
why is your smut so well-written omfg
AND YOU WROTE IT AT WORK? OMG..... I admire you ; v; you're so cool~
ugh you're so nice to us, I hope you get everything prepared soon for moving! we can wait ; v; ♥ don't stress out too much though! ;~~;

Edited at 2013-01-22 08:45 pm (UTC)

OMG @_@ this was soooooo damn hooooooooot
really this is soooo beautiful
i really love their relatioship sooo much
i love how deal with each other :))


can't wait for your update

Well wasn't that hot LOL *fans self* and they haven't even 'connected the dots' all the way yet xD You are amazing, seriously. How you write so much so amazingly is completely beyond me~ <3