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Ice [11b]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: Just picture that gif in your head as you read this… and then some OTL

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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Yay I've finally been able to read this part \o/ (quickly before going to bed ;_;)
That was hot, damn :Q_____
And gosh their love makes my heart flutter...
But I kinda felt sad for Yunho because Jaejoong can't be seen with him for now. Even thought I think it's for the best too, it's still sad.

u writing this while u in the conference??
*high five*

n yet u still manage to write it....smexyly...(is there a word for that)..hehehehhee

please update..please..i'm begging you..please

I love this story. I can't wait, it has such a good pace I thought they've been dating for years but then I was like wait its been less then a month. You are my favorite author ;) love your stories.

you wrote this while in the meeting?oh wow~/impressed

that seunghyun..i think mrs jung should know abut him...i can't wait till the day she finds out..

Writing this chapter while you were in boardroom is just awesome lol
Poor Yunho for still feeling insecure because of his past relationship with Seunghyun. But, that's a risk he has to face if he's dating with a rockstar with his crazy fanatic fans. I suddenly remember about what had happened to GACKT's wife though :P

“No one has ever tried to protect me before. I don’t doubt that you can somehow.”
- jae's parents tried to protect them but they couldn't. they don't have the power to do so. so jae was protecting his parents instead. it's nice to know that they can comfort and protect each other.

i agree with jae on sicking yunho's mom on seunghyun. i can't wait to see what she does! >:D

the smut scene was close to connecting the dots was the closest that us readers can get from you. such a long wait that was satisfying. :) it's rock star hero jaejoong. of course he'll lead the path for his own story.

that was really hot and then they became lovey dovey again alskjdb yunjae <3

You're damn good! I think I've never read a romantic smut-but-not-smut. It's a very special feeling I had reading their bed scene. I liked it a lot.

I didn't comment on the first part because I didn't understand why did you bring in the story that sexual desease. But it was necessary for part two. You didn't want yet a pure smut scene (which was good for the story to go smooth) and the only thing to prevent it was this desease. I suppose the result of the future analyses will be negative, so everything will be alright.

Interesting also they willing to protect each other. Both have been left behind, considered an embarassement. None of them felt protected until then and this feeling, added to their love, gives them strenght and a new understanding of their feelings.
I like this too.

huge smile.
a fuck!ng huge smile.

How can you write this while working (and keep a straight face)? :O *impressed

I've always thought lawyers are busy, busy people actually.

Omg what are YOU, YUNHO AND JAEJOONG doing to me, I can't;;