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Ice [12]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered (if there's interest)
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1:  I actually wrote most of this chapter (over 3,000 words) before I even started ch11. And really, I was REALLY tempted to skip ch11 and instead have this as ch11 but I had way too much planned for ch11 (NOT the smut lmao) that I really couldn’t. But then I sat on it for too long, and was unhappy with what I’d originally written so I had to rewrite and yeah… Writer’s block from hell ;____;

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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OMG OMG OMG.. when I said "brb" on my 1st comment in this chapter,, i didn't really mean it..
bcs now I just finished this chapter for more than 45 mins.. yeahh I read this chapter two times.. XD

I love this.. this is a crazy and unpredictable chapter..
seriously..?? they made out on the plane.. kyaaaaaa..

How I love Yunho's teammates,, esp Changmin and Kangin now.. =)
and I love Coach Kim too.. gaaaahh... he's a cool father.. omg omg..

u just made my day.. thank u.. ^^

I will give you a comment when I had my brains back.
I need to wipe off the big huge smile on my face and have my poker face.

Sorry I know that I took a long time to reply.
Going through ICE withdrawal since you didn't update for so long. *pouts*

This chapter Jaejoong really behaves like a diva to the public and a brat to Yunho.
I love how the moment he gets near to Yunho, he acts all child like and curls up to him and refuses to move away from him.

Even if it's only texing with Yunho, there is such a change in Jaejoong's personality and aura.

I love Yunho's take charge manner. He does it politely but firmly. The opposite of Jaejoong. ^^

Edited at 2013-01-30 05:26 pm (UTC)

omaigad! been waiting for this update since forever! i love you,,,,
kekeke :P *bow


Jaejoong and Yunho are just so presh with each other... I feel kind of bad for Yunho because getting used to Hero Jaejoong will undoubtedly be a journey all its own, and there will be mistakes made. I just hope they both are willing to work through everything. Yunho definitely has the right idea, but Jaejoong is still having second thoughts...

;; I am so in love with this fic it hurts. (Don't) Stahp Nicki, (don't) staaaaahp. ;AAAAAA;

I'm suppose to depart to another town that takes 2 hours to drive and I have decided to postpone for half an hour because I just have to read your fic first. Thanks so much for the update. It's public holiday here in Malaysia and my vacation has just turned very good indeed. ;-)

oh my god~~~~
i'm cant stop grinning!
Oh my god!
jj on yunho's lap as hero. i'm grinning like a fool

flowery apron, god. just kill me!

omom omo omo, cant expressing my felling
the whole team would protect yunjae

thank you very much *still feel giddy*

yay!!!! happy monday for me... OMG you putting pictures is like the icing on my favorite cake!!!! here's some loving **** LOVELOVELOVELOVE**** kekeke...

Yunnie protect Jae well.. and i love their photo sharing moments coz it's really cute....

jae didnt last very long before he ran back to yunho arms..lol

so much for keeping it a secret.

thanks for posting

that was amazing!!!im sooo loving jeajoong personal~~~.also yunho!!they're sooo cute and sweettt.thx for updating!!!!

ahahahahahaaaaaa,,, I love jae's wrath very much >_

I love the moment when Jae cuddle and fall asleep with Yunnie in his seat. Sweet. worth all the waiting.

another lovely chapter of ice <3 both of them are sooo sexy!! thanks for the pic add authornim kkk hockey ice team as bodyguard no one can beat them right? Kkk
Thank you :-*

oo.. i love this chapter so much..
but what about the game~~ lolss

knew jaejae will not be able to stay away from yunho during the entire plane trip :)

love how solid yunho's team is. how they are willing to protect their captain and his love.

sending all my love to you and to this update ^^

holy shit! YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHERE YOU GOT THAT PIC OF THE UPPER BODY IN THE GREEN SWIMSHORTS!! holy six packs!! is doesn't look like yunho no moobs .. is that jae in hawaii??!!

the team's panic at seeing jae on the airport is hilarious.. epecially combined with what happens next..

and you have no idea how hard I'm laughing & cheering when pissed!jae makes everyone pee in their pants & then cuddles up on yunho's lap like a kitten. it's one of those crazy epic scenes like the one in your last work- when innocent-harmless!jae fucking tattoos his name on yunho's chest..

and he's literally making out with his damned father on board!! ...and one who is grininng madly like a closet fanboy himself..
We’re all about to head into the various lavatories on this plane if you don’t get them to stop right now ASDFSGSFDHGDHHJ

for all their 'trying to hide it from public' won't the fanaccounts/fancame go out already?

and being escroted out of the airport by a bunch of jocks,tucked under yunho's arm /forevr jealous/