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Ice [12]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered (if there's interest)
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1:  I actually wrote most of this chapter (over 3,000 words) before I even started ch11. And really, I was REALLY tempted to skip ch11 and instead have this as ch11 but I had way too much planned for ch11 (NOT the smut lmao) that I really couldn’t. But then I sat on it for too long, and was unhappy with what I’d originally written so I had to rewrite and yeah… Writer’s block from hell ;____;

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 



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oh my god.

so in love with all the character on this fic.
from yunho to kangin to their parents..


and this chapter is just soo sweet.. i can't stopped talking about this fic on twitter. lol

Wow I have to admit this is the most enjoyable chapter so far. I'm had so much fun reading it while trying my best to muffle my laughter preventing it to explode in amidst of stern office LoL
I'm quite love this Jaejoong who is a hybrid between Kim Jaejoong and Hero Jaejoong. He is just annoyingly adorable. Yunho also is so good being understanding.

Thank you so much for updating this despites lacking of actual internet.

Update yeeeeeeeeeey ^o^
Love is in the air ahaha truly they're in the airplane !!! Bitchy Hero and at the sane time cuddling with Yunho , agh so magic so amazing
Sbs having an ice team as bodyguards how hot can it be??
Girl I'm. Drooling and spazzing with u rn
Keep Going bb and thankes for upadating cant wait for more ice little blood? And YunJae ahaha I love this

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Man, for someone who has a writer's block, this was pretty good! I love the security detail Kangin came up with. It shows how literally and metaphorically, Yunho and his team/people/family can protect Jae from anything and everything.



JUST A TOTAL COMBINATION OF LIKE EVERYTHING I LOVE IN HERE. ;A; Some character development of sorts seen in Jaejoong balancing his rockstar attitude and his new attitude around Yunho, the flirting, (UGH, OMG, THE FLIRTING AND I SHALL GET BACK TO HOW MUCH THIS KILLS ME), and as usual, your super, duper, supercalifragalisticexpialidocious (lol I don't think I spelled this right...) AWESOME ENSEMBLE CAST. ;A; ;A; ;A;



Possibly my favorite chapter? IDK. IT WAS JUST TOO AWESOME. XDDDD UGH, AND CAN I JUST SAY, ABSDKJASKDJAKSDJASD. I LOVE THE YUNJAE CUDDLING, AND JUST, THE YUNJAE INTERACTIONS IN THIS CHAPTER. IT KILLS ME, IT KILLS ME. ;A; CAN JAEJOONG JUST BE GLUED TO YUNHO FOREVER? YOU WRITE THEM TOO WONDERFULLY, IT KILLS MY OVARIES.



As always, you are so awesome. :3


This is my first time commenting. LOL. I don't even know why even said that xD I'm being weird again.....I really do like Jaejoong's character, it's original. I'm so happy you update and I hope your his and grandparents are doing fine. Is it bad that I want to see Yunho injured on the rink so Jae can go all Hero!Jae protective on him? Oh yes, Seunghyun deserved to suffered wrath of Mrs. Jung and Hero combined. Again. Thank you(:

omg those two agsgdhhgkhlj they sure cannot take their hands off each other. making out in the airplane? really? but i love it XD

bless you for updating and thank you so much :))) love love love this fic

Edited at 2013-01-28 08:56 am (UTC)

OMO!!! Eventhough you said that you had a writer's block, I still think this is pretty damn amazing! The characters are beginning to develop so much depth. And I love the texting with the pictures:) really funny.
Gosh, no internet!? That's harsch. I kinda act like Hero if our internet is down O___O

I'M GOING TO BE FOREVER ALONE.
Spare my suffering juseyoooooooooooooooooo.


It's getting better n better!! Thanks 4 ur hard work.. U update do fast too..

Yeey! Now they are out in the open and more free (I hope) than ever!
Love the hockey team in this chap! :))

gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ yunjae hawtness fluff on the plane. i would kill to have those evidence in my hands. plus yunnie's team mates are damn stupid cool and i envy jae2 for that. but clearly yunjae have a lot more issues to talk and work out with. poor yunjae. but i guess they will prevail. coz i know, while they are more perverts eyeing for jae2's ass and may be envy yunnie for having him, there will be more yunjae-shippers to come who will protect them.

thank you for the update. you made my day.

Awesome awesome update!!!! I love the crazy linking of dots however zigzag it may be..lolll....although the scene in the aeroplane was kinda illogical to me still it's enjoyable n sweet.

I love how protective yunho is over jae. N really meeting the rockstar side of jae is very intimidating.

Can't wait for d next update n thanks for this^^