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Ice [12]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered (if there's interest)
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1:  I actually wrote most of this chapter (over 3,000 words) before I even started ch11. And really, I was REALLY tempted to skip ch11 and instead have this as ch11 but I had way too much planned for ch11 (NOT the smut lmao) that I really couldn’t. But then I sat on it for too long, and was unhappy with what I’d originally written so I had to rewrite and yeah… Writer’s block from hell ;____;

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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rockstar JJ just earned a new larger family^^

this is epic..jae n his misdemeanour..i really don't know one word for his bad bhaviour..but i love feisty n foul mouthed jae cos yunho is way too polite..we need colours like jae more n more..

thx god for 3g s i was in a jungle last week too but happy for intermittent 3g that keeps me connected to civilisation n yj n jj...update soon!!!!!!!

thank you thank you thank you for this beautiful chapter <3

lovely. i can imagine the shocked face of yun's teammates. the phone pic converse at the lounge also daebak!!!!

I feel like Jaejoong is going to kick someone's ass soon for hurting Yunho ME GUSTA

awww...finally jae lose to yunho!!jae u should tell those fucking fan tat u are dating the mist hot jock eva!!!...love it when jae go and sat at yun lap!so cute *imagine*.....

I LOVE this chapter

Thank god they're finally together AND in public! So I'm happy!^^

*sends some love*
So where do those other 20 teammates suddenly come from? ö_ö

i think i like this chapter the most, so far.though there is not one chapter that i don't like.haha~
seriously,diva jae is just loved!♥

you know whattt i love their team work! *sobs* and how they seem to love each other so much and understands each other without having the need to say it~ *A*

and yeah, figure JJ won't be able to resist YH for long.
I really wish they'll speak about JJ's rockgod persona and that snapping out. YH don't deserve that~


I cant wait to read what the fans will think~ though im hoping thy wont see them with the mas of hockey players around them~~ :D
I just absolutely love how protective they are of each other!
and jae snuggling onto yunho during the flight~ was just absolute love! >.<
Cant wait for the next chapter!

yesss!!! an update!!! ^_^
oh my gosh, I laughed so many times throughout this chapter xD
Even though your chapters are rather long, they never feel long enough. because the story is so awesome, I just want to keep reading forever. yeah i should probably get a life :P
awesome update!

i pity jaejoong...
although he acts up...he is very insecure...who would tolerate hero!thefaçade!!!
but yunho never showed otherwise...their relationship was too fast and it takes more time to trust thanto love^^

And I am truly so very greatful for your 3G connection on your phone!! This chapter was really sweet in my opinion, we see Jaejoong working through all his defenses and Yunho quietly in the back supporting him. I really enjoyed it, and I think it's funny that the hockey team are acting as Jae's bodyguard's.

I laughed so hard with your hinting at Jae's apron.... When I saw it for the first time he looked so wonderfully gay. ~ <3 I really like where this story is going. It's not going too fast or too slow - a perfect pace for me. And of course the problem with Hero Jaejoong will start to surface and I feel that the story might turn even more epic. If that's possible. I love that they are so protective of each other all the time, and you portray their relationship so well. ~ Lots and lots of love for you.~~~ <3<3