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Ice [12]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered (if there's interest)
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1:  I actually wrote most of this chapter (over 3,000 words) before I even started ch11. And really, I was REALLY tempted to skip ch11 and instead have this as ch11 but I had way too much planned for ch11 (NOT the smut lmao) that I really couldn’t. But then I sat on it for too long, and was unhappy with what I’d originally written so I had to rewrite and yeah… Writer’s block from hell ;____;

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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This chapter was so good!
I didn't expect Jaejoong to change his mind and go to Yunho like that. It's great :)
Their little conversation in the aiport lounge made me laugh. Do I need to tell how much I liked how shocked Yunho's teammates were? XD And even more when Jaejoong went to the business class and let himself fall on Yunho's lap lol The whole scene in the plane was awesome. Especialy when Jaejoong was dozing off on Yunho, I found it so sweet I almost melt on my chair ♥
And the team protecting Jae is totally awesome! I wonder how JJ's fans will react though.
Thanks for that chapter! ^^
It cheered me so much to read it. I started it very depressed, and I ended it with a smile, so thank you :)

Hi I'm usually a silent reader but I just have to tell you how much I love this story and you are awesome. I check for update all the time, atleast 10 times a day

LMAO Jae in this fic is just so hilarious. I love how he just doesn't seem to care on the outside but he's really sweet on the inside <3 They really do make a perfect couple~ Now if only the fans could be a little less rabid lol

I loooove this fic so much. <3
Jaejoong being all bitchy to random people, and Yunho just letting it slide. <3
They are so fucking adorable! Even with all the sexy dot connecting, I still think they're adorable. <3
And LOL at Changmin and Yoochun and that other teammate Jae bitched on. :)))
I just cannot wait to find out what's gonna happen neeeext.
I hope they can connect the dots soon
And get back at Seunghyun. (Buf I love TOP irl tho D: )

Thank you for the awesome updaaaate! :)
And Yunjae got lucky there was no turbulence. :)) or else Jae would have the ride of his life on Yunho's lap. ☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆

OMG...I kind of love this chapter....seeing Jae with his rock star personality and then a cuddling horny boyfriend to Yunho. And the team's faces when they found out is so priceless. This makes me smiley...😁

this was fun... though jaejoong really is some kind of special... that or yunho's patience knows no bounds to love hero jaejoong diva extraordinaire. jaejoong is sweet and kind and wonderful but damn that hero... exhausting and rude and spoiled. i know i jnow he's a persona... still... still a fun read though :)

absolutely loving this fic - and yay for 3G! <3 can't wait for more XD

I loved it! It was so much fun to read! It was like watching a movie with all the feistiness that's Hero and Yunho's teammates' reactions after they find out that Hero was in the airport. And Changmin's reaction to seeing Hero on Yunho's lap hahahaha SO much fun!!!! xD

I'm so, so, so happy that you're a slave to your muse! I wouldn't have it any other way! The pace of the plot is perfect, and I love that the chapters are so lengthy! This is by far my favorite chapter, and I adore all of your chapters! I adore your story! Period! (I know that this is my second comment, but I always read your chapters more than once!)

Nice....nice....I wanted to read this twice. I love this fic. Would you consider putting it in a pdf? I really want to put it on my Kindle so I can read it whenever I feel like it. I like it because there is a lot of interaction between all the characters. I love fics with a lot of dialogue. You have the right balance of dialogue/action and feelings.I hope it goes on for a long time, I feel there is so much more that can happen. Looking forward to the next update.

uh i smiled so much my face hurts

hahaha... it's great! love how freaking in shock and awe yunho's teams are XD
god... if yunjae can be found snuggle up eavh other in plane...i want a snap of it XD

yah... you stop at the right moment!!!
it feels like blood rushing to my face.. can't hold my breath until the last word..

yes yunho... i had a good feeling about this too... \o/


oh my god floral apron
kissing on the plane
yunjae protected
and and hokey teams also

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa ♥♥♥♥