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Ice [12]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered (if there's interest)
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1:  I actually wrote most of this chapter (over 3,000 words) before I even started ch11. And really, I was REALLY tempted to skip ch11 and instead have this as ch11 but I had way too much planned for ch11 (NOT the smut lmao) that I really couldn’t. But then I sat on it for too long, and was unhappy with what I’d originally written so I had to rewrite and yeah… Writer’s block from hell ;____;

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 

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Reading this chapter was fun. I just enjoyed it and feel sp ready to vernier against be crowd with them. Haha. But yeah, keep it up. I anxiously away your updates. You are amazing. I do hope they come out. We need more of that these days in real life IMO. :D

ooooh... daebak! jaejoong is just daebak! hahahaha....

That mustve been the longest 20+mins of jaes life just ignoring yunho like that
I keep trying and trying to picture jae acting like that, all haughty and such and I can't ;;

I love the cuddling YunJae in the plane XD I found it cute when Jae slept on Yunho's lap.
Now ... The real problem will come. How they can handle the issue about them dating?

Wow! I mean WOW! >.<

Every thing is going crazy (lmao) and I love it! ^_____^

Yunho is so understanding, and Jae... he is so bipolar! LOL from pissed off to smiling and lovey-dovey in a milliseconds. Yunho knows how to handle him though. ;)

man. what has rock star hero jaejoong done to you. he has instilled his naughtiness into you and writing his story.

“You look better in it than she did anyway.”
- lol. yunho's mom shouldn't hear that. i wonder what the consequences will be.

the second picture of yunho was frinkin delicious. lucky friend of sister's.

"Jaejoong moving without protest into the seat next to Yunho, all sleepy doe eyes and confused pout when Yunho wakes him as the plane prepares to start its descent. The team and Coach Kim cannot stop staring at the couple, unused to seeing the singer in such an unguarded moment. All his defences are down as he tries to curl into Yunho’s side, across the wide arm rests, and then huffing sulkily when he cannot quite manage it. The sleepy smile that breaks across his face when Yunho leans over to whisper into his ear is absolutely breathtaking, and they all wonder what it is their captain had just said to the ball-busting idol."
- if i was there and saw rock star jaejoong like that, i would start crying. from knowing what he's been through and seeing how this is the first time anyone has seen RSH like that, it shows what hardships he's been through. it hurts seeing how he can't be himself but this rock star persona.

i think sports people like them are the best bodyguards in my opinion. XD

sorry for didn't comment the last charpter (i really need to know how write this word but i'm too lazy for this) anyway, i can't promise you that this will be THE comment because i'm in "writer's block" right now, and everything i wrote in those time, gets really sucks.
But i'll start comment the 'smut" but What can i say? okay, that was awesome! But i never know what to comment about smut, or it is icreible or it is sucks, and its obvious it was amezing u.u and girl, I cant believe that you wrote the smut in the work ! omg you are awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, i bet anyone could imagine that you were writing a yunjae smut! LSAJOSAKSDKDALJKADJMSDA this charpter was too awesome, i loved the HERO FUCKING JAEJOONG ~OH I DIDN'T TELL YOU HOW SOUNDS DAMN PERFECT HERO JAEJOONG SAYING "FUCKING" ~~ FUCKING CARE TO ANYONE OPINION AND JUST SITTING IN YUNHO'S LAP AND KISSING HIM OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ~~ just imagine this like a real yunjae scene ? i think i could faint watching this! JKASIÇOKDSÇOISJKDA this charpther was increible, but i spend all day to read, today was a sucks because i really did nothing. Not homework, not reading sucks books, not writing anything, nothing. But the most interesting thing today was read ice. I L.O.V.E <3

I love you, rockstar Hero Jaejoong, potty mouth and all :P

“So how’s this? I know I said I’d be more than happy to ride you in the airport
lounge. Close enough?”

jae's mouth doesn't have a freaking filter, does it? *face palm*

He pulls the older man gently against him, coaxingly,
aware that the rockstar is holding himself stiffly, probably once again feeling
remorse at snapping at him, but Yunho really has no problem with it. They need to
talk about this and soon, because he knows that twice in a day is only just the

that was really mature and sweet of yunho. jae is so so so lucky to have him as his bf :")

Wow! How funny those two are! And so in love...
I like the way the team is protecting Jae like he's the jewel of the Royal Crown.
And I like how you described a childish Jae and a protective Yun. They look so good together.
But papa Kim is a piece of art, isn't he?

i'm like half way through this and i just feel like telling you that this has me completely hooked (or has had since chapter 4..)
i've been wanting to read a sport ver yunjae for a while and this just came to me. and waahh i love it.

Woahhh, I would have loved to be in that flight... what even *0*