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Ice [13]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Jaejoongieeeeeeeee… Ugh. I’m having trouble writing because all I see in my head is Jaejoong and nobody else. Well, ok with Yunho but I can’t write a story with just them. Ok maybe I can but not this story. Ahhhhhhh and if there are any ice hockey enthusiasts reading this, please forgive me OTL And I threw away like over 2,000 words because I was seriously unhappy with it. I’m still not quite happy but if I sit on this any longer, you’ll be waiting another week for an update and I really can’t have that, can I? ;-)

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin and the pretty edit of Jaejoong that you'll find here was done by valicehoney ;-)  



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OMG!!!
International PDA Broadcast!!!!!
XD

i still like chapter 12 even though i felt it was a bit fillerish, i guess there has to be a transition chapter to the big reveal, and OMG the big reveal is BIG!

i'm still trying to figure out why yunho was so upset with jae. .. now i'm worried about kenta's safety from the rabid fans.. so was yunho upset that jae outed them, or upset that jae didnt think yunho was capable of handling this by himself...

gotta reread this chapter, cannot reallyimagine the bus scene, too many windows and limbs involved..

Thank you for the update! First off. I have to ask where the heck do you get all this pics?! Really aside from Joongie giving me nosebleeds right now ur story is making me have more. Hihihi. I love this story! Jae and Yunho are both extreme as far as their public persona on this story that it keeps me on my toes. I wonder how they would handle themselves now that the public knows. And I want to see what kangin and Jae would do to Seunghyun this time. Not to mention this Imamura Kenta when the game is done. And by the way I just have to say. Now you have to feed Minnie on the next chapter since he just injured his ankle. Hihihi hi. Thanks again.

Another great chapter. Can't wait for what happens next.

Seriously i'm not surprise if Kenta get some threats from Jae's fan. No one messes with Jae's love.

As sexy as angry Yunho is, you have to admit that this is another level of their r/ship. Not only did Jae not run away but he actually manages to calm Yunho down.

PS. love how Jae interacted with the team. Another facet & support from Yunho's surrounding that Jae needed.

OMG!!!!!
LOVE THE GAME PART..
AND THE PART WHERE YUNHO IS ANGRY!!!!!!!!!!
LOLSS..
NEED MORE~~

Also it would be cute to see Yunho getting jelouse over Minnie the ball. Opposes wrong story I mean Changmin since he is injured Jae will cook for him right? Hihihi. I like the part with kangin. Hihihi.

Angry Yunho and angry Jaejoong is hot :B
I do hope Changmin and yoochun is okay )):!!

Sweet mother of all that's holy!

If this were any hotter, I think my iPad would explode....

Gah overprotective Jae! It was beyond cute and I'm glad to see that he's making friends with Yunho's teammates because even he needs some regular companionship. Hahahaha, the Jaemin moments made me laugh because they truly are soulfighters! Although I feel like Changmin should have been able to dish more back to Jaejoong despite how cold Jae can be. Oh gosh, I personally cannot wait to see the death of that horrid Seunghyun I can only imagine how much hell he's going to get.

Yunho finally has some insecurities about the relationship! I mean despite the fact that both of them do, Yunho is always trying to reassure Jae and it's nice to see the opposite happen this time. Although, in an actual hockey game I'm not sure how Jae's little "stunt" would actually go despite his massive star power. But I'm glad that they're relationship is now all out in the open, no more hiding and just enjoying themselves although I don't know how with all the stalkers and fans.

Poor Changmin though! He seems like he got hurt pretty bad and with a possible ankle injury he could be out for awhile and Yoochun's concussion is no joke. That could be a career ending thing. I'm glad that team got their just desserts though. I'm sure Jae had a huge say in that though, getting the crowds to side with the opposing team. Like the commentators inferred, he's a huge star with lots of power. And an angry Yunho is pretty sexy but scary, I'm glad Jae didn't back down. Anyways, as hockey season is now in session in the US it parallels nicely to this story! I loved it! :D

Edited at 2013-01-30 08:24 am (UTC)

So many wins in this chapter. So many.

I swear I started cackling when Yunho pinned Jae against the wall lol. And omg he's so hot when he's mad o___O Love this chapter~ Can't wait to see how the world reacts to their relationship lol. :P I bet their kissing photos will be all over the web xD

OMFG! WHIMPERING OVER ANGRY YUNHO! SO MUCH FEELS!

Holy crap....
My brain just died............ how fucking hot is that?! The best of both worlds right there and I'm just one of the spectators in awe, screaming in my head how I'm being played at so many emotions displayed here. Oh gawd. The world is sexy with this hockey player and rockstar. I super love jj's interaction with the team. It shows that he's also trying to get along with the people around yunho. That picture you used as yunho's charity con pic... I errr.. don't know how jaejoong survived looking that

But then again...I've been replaying that two lines of Maze from his fanmeeting cause it was just HEAVENLY.

Omg!! All the drama! N yes! Angry yunho is much too sexy!

i was right, you definitely do not disappoint! thanks for this! ^____^ and omg you are friends with little passions, another fave fanfic writer of mine..:)

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