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Ice [13]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: Jaejoongieeeeeeeee… Ugh. I’m having trouble writing because all I see in my head is Jaejoong and nobody else. Well, ok with Yunho but I can’t write a story with just them. Ok maybe I can but not this story. Ahhhhhhh and if there are any ice hockey enthusiasts reading this, please forgive me OTL And I threw away like over 2,000 words because I was seriously unhappy with it. I’m still not quite happy but if I sit on this any longer, you’ll be waiting another week for an update and I really can’t have that, can I? ;-)

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin and the pretty edit of Jaejoong that you'll find here was done by valicehoney ;-)  

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Can I ask for more? ; ____ ;
LoL xD
Can the two of them just get married or something? So lovely <3

Thanks for updating :3
Andddd yeah I love JJ in Maze too :3

yesterday i didnt really listen to that maze song coz he was just saying gibberish at first...but then I heard him sing them..omg it was even better than two/three years ago /flails
THIS FIC I couldnt breathe. that kiss on ice, with the hundreds of spectators /screams what I would give to witness them just ooze with love
once again, my feels are all on the floor
thanks for the update! ^^

Edited at 2013-01-30 06:10 am (UTC)

i read it during my lunch. it's just like i was suddenly drop into that game being one of thousands spectators. Holding my breath when the enemy tried to beat Min. Smiling and blushing like crazy when Yun kissed Jae. laughing ard when the comentator trie to report and confirm that YunJae are in relationship. i was smiling when Jae hugged Kangin and also threatened Min and the boys. indeed this fic has sooo many feelings and characters .... i almost can imagine their friendship the brotherhood. .... can't wait for next chap. thank you ^^ <333333

HI ^^ i probably have been a silent reader....but heck at this moment, I'm literally at the edge of my sit wriggling around waiting on what is gonna happen next. Please do update quick~~~ the drama and suspense is eating me up!!! (=^^=)(m) meowwww~

Yay, my coffee has arrived.
Now my withdrawal synthoms can stop ^^b

I will comment later.

I read this chap three times before I write this comment...hehehe

Why did u have sooooooooooooooo many yunho's delicious pics???
Yunjae really like to show off their intimate,and nobody make a protest...and please,they should admit that they're really possessive toward each other...

About the news,why the news still asked?of course it will be marriage made by heaven,they just don't know jae well,maybe he's a bitchy freak but actually he's really adorable!!!!

This chapter is daebak!!!!! Too much awesome in one chapter! Too much!


'...moaning over angry Yunho..." OH YES!!!!!!!
I know I probably say this about every chapter, but I really feel like I'm watching what's going on and even feeling every emotion that they feel... After I read every chapter I feel very satisfied, not like I don't want to read more cause I do, but I feel like I can wait cause I had plenty. The feeling after you eat your favorite dessert. haha I don't know how else to explain it. This probably happens cause you put so much into each chapter! In other words, I love it! :)

this fic is too good to handle

The match was so thrilling. I'm still brooding over the fact that Kenta is still alive. Jae put down his Hero cloak with the team quicker than I thought. That's a reliefs, I'd hate reading about Yunho and his teammates eating each other throat. Somehow I feel like Ice is coming to its end, well, there's no party that lasts forever. Yunjae still have Seunhyun to punish and fans to worry.
Thank you(:

Jae's maze is indeed AMAZING!! Wow such a crowded airport and brutal icehockey game kkk are everyone in stadium getting nosebleed? B-) love love love <3

Happy that both of them really love each other and understand about the other true character.
Thanks for the update :)

More!!!! I love this, the more characters the better as you write them so well xxxx

wat else can i say but <3333333 AHHHHHH!!!!! pls dun cut TT.TT i like long chpt ....or is jus me?....anyway <3333 Buti hope jae really did get his blood