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Ice [13]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Jaejoongieeeeeeeee… Ugh. I’m having trouble writing because all I see in my head is Jaejoong and nobody else. Well, ok with Yunho but I can’t write a story with just them. Ok maybe I can but not this story. Ahhhhhhh and if there are any ice hockey enthusiasts reading this, please forgive me OTL And I threw away like over 2,000 words because I was seriously unhappy with it. I’m still not quite happy but if I sit on this any longer, you’ll be waiting another week for an update and I really can’t have that, can I? ;-)

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin and the pretty edit of Jaejoong that you'll find here was done by valicehoney ;-)  



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Holy fucking freaking asdffghjkooiutddfh amazing game was that?!!!
I love blood on sports and THAT WAS THE HOTTEST KISS EVER!!
Jaejoong I though he was going to run...damn u Jae stop thinking of running always
And the team agh!!! So awesome so supportive and protective !!!
I want momentsChangmin with Yunho's sis*shy*
So many characters, bravo girl!!

This is love love FUCKING LOVE!!!
Thanks for updating ^o^ cant wait for the next!!
....
Maze.T.T even though was a little bit it melt my heart, the one and only rocker Jae<3
p.s I love the photo-messages it's pretty good for the plot too
^o^
Kissu for the Ice:-*

gahhhh~ late again. but watever. i've got more yunjae moments plus the adorkable yunnie's team mates and slight yunjae's parents hint. i'm in my own heaven despite all the media frenzy. i bet they'll try to ignore it but sooner or later it will give tolls on them. and i expect a lot from jae2 starting from now since he already brave himself to show his affection towards yunnie to the world.

p/s:
your writing has gone better. more characters, more challenge to portray their personalities. and i love them all to bits ^^V

Edited at 2013-01-30 11:06 am (UTC)

Good god! That leave me speechless and high! Fuck fuck . So Icey! Lols. Omg! If I can fast forqward the time.. XDD and sexay Yunjae is sexayy. Not only you. I moaned over angry Yunho too!! 8D

Omg omg!! I love this chapter! It'd heartwarming how jae shows his affection towards yunho's team in his own bitchy ways haha the competition scene was so well described that even though i know nuts about ice hockey could still imagine what's going on. Now the world finally knows about yunjae! And they both have support from their parents. I wonder how this is going to proceed. Hehehe

i'm so in love with yunjae character in Ice...they're just fucking amazing...the chapter in just awesome just like the rest of the chapters were...

Wow!!!!..😲...that was so intense...but I kind of expecting it to happen....and Yunho...wow boy, you surely show a different side of you to Jae now....and that was sizzling HOT 🔥


Too late for a spot, but whatever! Damn, I knew I should've stayed awake!

Only thought tt came to mind was jj is crazy!

i was at first like yunho...get a grip on jj!! but after...yay!! yunjae!!! continue ur show
i won't neeeeeeeeever mind!!!
please do

Angry!Yunho is just ksdhsakhdkahsdkahlkhdkshfkl.
OMFG THE KISS WAS GODDAMN HOT I CANNOT ;A;
I'M GOING TO KILL THOSE WHO DID THAT TO CHANGMIN D<
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE AND SORRY FOR THE CAPS.
*GOES BACK TO READ THE KISS SCENE*

I've never been glad in doing OT but because of you I am so happy right now... Jae's personality makes my head spin.. and you are indeed amazing in writing this because I've never watched an actual ice hockey game and yet I felt as if I'm in one while reading this chapter....

I want an angry Yunnie too... hope Minnie is alright...

I guess it might be better if Jae doesn't attend their games anymore! xDDD

gah!!!!!!!!!!!love2 this chapter..angry jung is so hot...kyaa!!so hot!!