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Ice [13]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: Jaejoongieeeeeeeee… Ugh. I’m having trouble writing because all I see in my head is Jaejoong and nobody else. Well, ok with Yunho but I can’t write a story with just them. Ok maybe I can but not this story. Ahhhhhhh and if there are any ice hockey enthusiasts reading this, please forgive me OTL And I threw away like over 2,000 words because I was seriously unhappy with it. I’m still not quite happy but if I sit on this any longer, you’ll be waiting another week for an update and I really can’t have that, can I? ;-)

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin and the pretty edit of Jaejoong that you'll find here was done by valicehoney ;-)  

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U-Know.. U-Know.. U-Know..

angry Yunho and bitchy Jaejoong is raaaaawrrrrrr....
poor Changmin and Yoochun.. *throws fridge to YooMin*

ohh.. and thank u for inserting MAZE into this chapter.. =)

I can keep on rereading this til tomorrow and the next day and until the next update.
DAAAAAAMN! I looooove this fic. ;__; All the fucking feels
Jaejoong is such a possessive, bitchy, bratty diva and Yunho is such a sweet, equally possessive but understanding perfect boyfriend and they ARE SO FUCKING MEANT TO BEEEEEE. ;__;
I hate those fucking articles about Jae not being worthy of Yun. </3 Buuuuut... I absolutely loved the pictures. Lol. Jae interacting with the team is so entertaining. =)) I LOVE THIS. <3 Thank you for the AWESOOOOME updaaaate. <3

Edited at 2013-01-30 01:13 pm (UTC)

This fis is turning me into a spazz ball, I'm going crazy in front of my screen XDD

That angry kiss in front the whole stadium (and all the people watching TV and the people who'll see it on the internet later XDD basically the whole world), outing themselves like this, yaaaaaaaaaaaahhahahahahaha I LOVE IT ♥ And that was SO FUCKING HOT :Q_________

They should all beat the shit out of the Nippon Cranes!!! It was thrilling to read the whole chanting scene, the whole game was awesome!

It scared me a moment when Jaejoong read the newspaper and got angry at Yunho for texting him "don't run"... Thanks the pictures for starting a new subject (much more appealing 8D). But it must hurt to read those things about you. Not good enough? What do they know?

Thanks for that update! ^^
You make us ALL moan over angry Yunho...

Huhu I accidentally switched from azerty to qwerty on my keyboard because I was too excited about it lol

Every chapter is better and even more amazing than the chapter before and I really don't understand how you do it cause this whole fanfic is perfection !
I fangirled sooooooooo much ! Jae with the team is really cute, the game was pretty intense and THAT FUCKING K I S S !!
Huuuuuuuuuuuuh ! I died a little when the chapter ended !

I can't wait for the next update, seriously this is sooooo amazing akjgfdiubgfklgd !

And I like the fact that there're so many characters cause this way, the story seems realer and Yunho is supposed to be the team captain + someboby really sweet and kind so I guess it's normal that he has a lot of friends.

this chapter is so effing sexy!!!! *A*
i love this fic because of the team-work and how everyone just seems to love each other so much!! XD

My god that intense and exhilarating to say the least! My favorite chapter so far! I mean it just killed me!

i was retardly trying to visualize the yunjae kissing.. /facepalm.
ever see a disgusting drooling nerdy caught a sight of some porn scene? well that's just practically what i looked like.
lick lick lick out of nothing in front.
you no need to re-imagine it though! :D

oh my, angry yunho
haaaaaaaaaa *fanning my self*
a whole south korean japan would know hero dating heir of Jung corp
n i dont mind that way

changmin aaaah, hope u r ok!

loling over jj hug kangin!

yeah, thank you

JaeMin is soooo loved!!! I literally miss them in real life and they both are just so adorable in the fictional world also, although Jaejoong are quite aggressively passive. My soulfighters ♡ I'm so looking forward to tgt interaction of these two. I think they must make a great I-pick-on-you-as-much-as-I-adore-you relationship xD

And damn you just turned the most dramatic hockey game ever happens in fiction history to the almost porn flick LoL not that I mind! Yunho was quite sexy radiating fury.

For some reason, this fic will reach chapter 20? Considering Seunghyun's issue and Jaejong's departure from his current agency.

I reckon I got little reactions from Coach Kim and somehow I was interested to know what he felt regarding all these chaos.

AAAARRRGGGHHHHH.....angry yunho is sexy!!!hahahah....

Aaaaaaah!!!! Love this chapter!

OMG ANGRY YUNHO /brain fried forever/

i love when they act possessively at each other!!!
and epic commentator is epic! lol

ps: i can't stop drooling at the HoMin picture, sleek hair and suit is just so ugh > <

OMGS!!!! I loved this chapter sooooo much!! >-< Hero Jaejoong can really get a crowd going huh? I felt the same as Jae when Changmin got hurt. Why not see what's happening on the ice? And I can't believe that they thought that Jae wouldn't care who won out of Yunho and Kenta. Well, I guess he would be spitting mad either way... XD

I am so glad I was alone for this chapter. OMG OMG OMG. when jae brought up the drunken changmin blowjob I was literally rolling around in hysterics. I love their clingy-ness and jealousness it makes it all so entertaining. I was freaking out towards the end of the chapter thinking maybe yunho was going to get badly hurt but no that was a WAY better ending to the chapter.