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Ice [13]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Jaejoongieeeeeeeee… Ugh. I’m having trouble writing because all I see in my head is Jaejoong and nobody else. Well, ok with Yunho but I can’t write a story with just them. Ok maybe I can but not this story. Ahhhhhhh and if there are any ice hockey enthusiasts reading this, please forgive me OTL And I threw away like over 2,000 words because I was seriously unhappy with it. I’m still not quite happy but if I sit on this any longer, you’ll be waiting another week for an update and I really can’t have that, can I? ;-)

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin and the pretty edit of Jaejoong that you'll find here was done by valicehoney ;-)  



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i wonder if there is any actual movie/drama of it, it'll be a big hit! not to mention that yunjae as being the casts.
and yes...so much characters...it really feels like would make a better for a novel than just fanfiction. really.. this is just so cool.
why do your story always get even better by every attempt of the new ones? why dont u form a fandom? i'd love to join xD

that throat slitting action made my jaw drop if only for the fact that i can totally see the man doing it in real life for yunho... the action in this chapter is cuh-ray-zyyy!!! it was like watching a movie or something! great chap author-nim!

ANGRY YUNHO :Q________

OMG that was hot. I love that Jae is getting along with the team :) and that hockey game was intense. I've never really watch ice hockey but I was totally into this as I was reading. Lol Jae suprises me with his spontaneous moves. Well everyone knows now haha I can't wait to se them win!! >:)

Thanks for the update!!<3

can i moan with you? angry yunho is just...oh god.../shivering

In this chapter YunJae are like fire and ice.
The way they protect each other.

I seriously think it's Jaejoong's fault that they are outed to the world because of his actions. And what he did on the ice rink only made it clearer that Yunho is his property.

I love how angry Yunho got aggressive with Jaejoong in the penalty box.

I am wondering though why Jaejoong felt the need to step in when Yunho clearly told him to step away.

Yunho really cares for the team and I think especially he has a soft heart for Minnie.
I'm glad that Jaejoong and the team get so well along and that Jaejoong is just as protective of them as well.

I guess this number of characters in this fic is something which cannot be avoided. After all you have a team here and it is bound that every one of them will have a role in the main character's life.

I swear Jaejoong's voice really suits singing rock.
It's amazing just to hear him sing two lines of Maze live and acapella.
The way he was trolling is so adorable.
I am seriously so glad that his first solo album was a rock genre. I was so hoping for him to sing more rock type of songs after hearing Maze.

I suddenly need some ice to nurse my nosebleed because of the pics..lol
I'm glad jae was warming up with yun's team in his own wicked and twisted ways..love how possessive he is and accidentally slip homin's drunken past..i hope changmin's not severely injured--and I wanted to see jihye's reaction regarding the incident..
I am thinking that seunghyun will create a bigger mess involving Yun and jae, just a hunch though..
I didn't really foresee that you're going to "out" them this way but looking back at jae's personality, it was really inevitable..
Waiting for the next chaptie^^

lol..write as many chapters as u want..im here to read them...XDD

This is PERFECT!!! So many feels! YunJae is taking the entertainment world by a storm! Haha! I love how Jae snuggles in Yunho's lap every chance he can get. His jealous side is adorable. The insecurities they feel are completely normal, and I think they are managing it quite well so far despite their unusual situation. This chapter is such a major win! I love your story so, so, so much! I can't wait for MORE AND MORE AND MORE!!! :3</p>

PS. Furious Yunho makes my panties wet! >


HNNNNGGG JESUS FUCKING YESSS ANGRY KISSING, ANGRY YUNHO, ANGRY JAE!
IF ONLY THEY WEREN'T IN THE ARENA WE COULDVE HAD ANGRY FUCKING!!!!
I AM ON THE BUS READING AND I WAS TRYING MY DAMNDEST NOT TO SCREAM BC ALL THE FUCKING FEELS! THOSE PICS, JAE SINGING MAZE, LOL HIM HUGGING KANGIN WHICH REMINDS ME OF HIM PRANK CALLING KANGIN IRL <3 ALL THE LOVE OMG

I can't fully express how much fun I am having with this story. I find myself gasping in shock and giggling to flat out laughing so many times. I adore the way that you are portraying all the different characters.

oh my god!!! angry yunho is hot. I can imagine that I'm standing among the crowd in that stadium.

HOT! nnnng! <3 I love every update on this fic omgds... /squeals


BRILLIANT CHAPTER!

Everything perfect. Drama, passion, intrigue. The works.

Wonderful writing.

OMG MY MIND IS LITERALLY BLOWN!!! I WAS READING THIS CHAPTER WHILE I WAS ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!! I DONT KNOW WHY BUT FOR SOME REASON IT WA JUST REALY REALLY INTENSE!! I REALLY LOVED THIs UPDATe!!!! oops i kinda just wrote in caps but this was just that good.

i'm sorry this is the first comment i'm leaving for this fic, but i've kinda been reading this all day at work instead of working. absolutely amazing! i love the pair of them with their flaws and beauty. the pair of them have been incredibly unlucky in love, whether by choice or circumstance and for them to find love with each other is really a blessing. i'm happy they both understand each other and don't expect perfection. they'll have lots of problems down the line, and i'm sure this isn't the last of seunghyun we'll hear; but i'm sure they'll be fine.