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Ice [13]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Jaejoongieeeeeeeee… Ugh. I’m having trouble writing because all I see in my head is Jaejoong and nobody else. Well, ok with Yunho but I can’t write a story with just them. Ok maybe I can but not this story. Ahhhhhhh and if there are any ice hockey enthusiasts reading this, please forgive me OTL And I threw away like over 2,000 words because I was seriously unhappy with it. I’m still not quite happy but if I sit on this any longer, you’ll be waiting another week for an update and I really can’t have that, can I? ;-)

AN2: This banner was done by taigrin and the pretty edit of Jaejoong that you'll find here was done by valicehoney ;-)  



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omg!
did they really do that?i wish i was there in that game just to watch them making out lol!XD

but i'm glad that the team accepted jae easily.i mean,with all the rumors and his attitude,i'm glad that the could see pass through all those. :)

I freaking love this! So much action in one chapter! Yayyyy!

I like the harmony between them, they really seem perfect for each other!
And it always makes me smile when I see Jae interaction with Yunho's team mates, he just fits perfectly in their circle somehow... it was priceless when his father realized how Jae seemed more effective at silencing the team than he ever was!

And the ending with Jae threatening that Japanese player was really impressive! ... Just like all the media uproar and guessing around their relationship!

I hope poor Changmin will be okay!


[Music]: Girls' Generation - Oh!

How is it that your story just gets better and better? You are amazing! Damn you! Because of you I refresh my fucking LJ app all day! I love your writing skills! I always read your chapters more than once! This is my favorite YunJae story so far! It feels like a freaking movie! Bravo *applause* \O/

OMFG! I WAS ABSENT FROM LJ FOR SOME TIME NOW AND I HAD MISSED THIS MASTERPIECE!!
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I can't even explain in words how AWED I am right now by this AWESOMELY OUTSTANDING yunjae story!
WOMAN WHY ARE U SUCH AN AWESOME AUTHOR~!? I mean all the stories I read from U (even drabbles) are so enjoyable and so witty that I just end up craving for more and more!
I love how U made Yunho, Jaejoong and the rest of the boys characters so deep yet so real... I simply LOVE ur writing and I feel so blessed with Ur fast updates~! Thank U for all the hard work and for giving me another opportunity to spazz about YunJae~! My heart melts when I picture those two together~!
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Edited at 2013-01-31 09:36 pm (UTC)

My 1st reaction was "Girl Jaejoong MADE A CAMEO!!!" rofl
The 2nd reaction : oh wow, Idk that Yunho is SK's darling. It's so sudden. Also, HERO suddenly become the bad boy. The reverse huh?
3rd reaction : Damn, that's a hot public making-out!

For me, even though there are many characters in this fic but every character has important role in the relationship between main characters here. Besides, you write about a team so many characters are needed to describe the dynamic of the team :)

i am by no means a new reader... i've just been a silent one... tho i have only read a few of your works, Sleeping Beauty included... ^^

but OMG. THIS. I CANNOT!!!

sorry... but i just had to force myself not to go crazy reading all 13 chapters of ICE. i can actually imagine every scenario you wrote, you know...

honestly, you're one of the best writers currently active right now. LOL. the way you write yunjae is unique and just... it's so easy for you to get under your readers' skins. seriously.

i love how you've portrayed each and every character in this story (and in Sleeping Beauty as well --- which btw, I LOVE IT!!! it's actually the first fic i've read of yours) and how interconnected they are with each other... especially the jungs and kims. OMG. LOL. i love kangin's and hangeng's nicknames on the ice. the destroyer and the assassin. it fits perfectly... and yoochun's character here is just LOL. micky the sneaky. LOL. omg. his character is just both annoying yet endearing at the same time... and then changmin's smartass personality and junsu's 'brightness'~ the A Team is just one big family here with coach kim as their 'dad' and yunho being the maknae captain. :D

it was a pleasure to find out how yunho and jaejoong's relationship developed with the start of this story... and i especially liked how you've just made me hate seunghyun so much. OMG. he is such an evil vile character here (i know he hasn't made a lot of appearances yet except for that one time with jaejoong) because of what he did to jessica and especially to yunho. that kind of got me curious to find out what exactly happened that made jaejoong lose his friendship with jessica...

and now, that their relationship had just been outed, what would be the outcome... what will each of them do and what will seunghyun do?

will jaejoong really kill kenta?

will changmin be ok? he landed wrongly on his ankle but you didn't elaborate much~^^ min being attacked like that had snapped yunho tho... poor min...

i hope you update again soon! and i promise to leave comments after every chapter i read~XDDDDDDD

Wow. Five pages of comments. So totally rare.

And here I am, reading this chapter for like the fourth time and STILL getting more and more out of it.

On to 14s again. And doubtless again.

You really are an awesome writer.

Yup ^_^ waaaay to many characters....but you're really, really going a great job on it! ^_^
Like, each of them has their distinct characteristics and no one is being left out in each scene....

Btw, YJ' s PDA makes me all giddy and happy ^_____^
Please let them do it more >.

Favorite line: “Personally, I’d concentrate on the fact that he called you gorgeous, and forget about the fact that he just threatened to emasculate you.” LOL I seriously laughed so hard! Poor Changmin, so embarrassing. And I can't believe they kissed in public like that! But now it's all out in the open so that's good. Angry Yunho is scary though!

Omg omg I had to comment on this chapter because now im a moaning mess at the whole aggressive yunho pinning cocky jae in public.. goodness gracious I cannot-

a violent game and the best outburst of their relationship. fear anyone who wants to harm them. their moment was sweet. ^.^

kenta just might get kicked off the team with how popular hero is.

poor changmin and yoochun. i hope it's not too bad. :(

i can't believe they're a team. they're to violent and plays dirty. how can people allow that?

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY, I DIDN'T DESAPPEAR ! KJÇOSIKDAIOJKDJAS well i'm too busy plus so lazy that i just could read this chapter (hahahaha i learned how write this, there's no 'r' in the middle hahaha) piece to piece, so it looks like i've read 5 chapters ! OKOKOLKSDAOKDASLPKDAOASK i have pretty sure i'll forget to talk about many things that killed me so much here.
Well first, i love jaejoong in this fic (in fact, i love him always and always) 'cause, DUDE HE IS A MAN. y e s his a man. SO many ficwriters who describe him like a woman but in jae skin, and i don't like it very much. other thing i love is that yunho is so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet, and their love is so, omg, so tender, and cute. All the scenes make me want read more lovely kisses, and hugs. Jae loves Yunho's lap, so kind <3 AND THIS GAME. FUCKING GOD, IF WAS ME WATCHING, (AND IF JAE WASNT THERE) I COULD JUMP IN THE ICE, AND BUFFET THIS KENTA 'TIL HE SAY THAT I WAS AWESOME -Q JSKJSAKIJSAÇOIDJIKDJA I THOUGH JAE WAS GOING TO KILL HIM, NOT DEFY YUNHO. OMG YUNJAE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS ~~
AND WHEN JAE STARTED TO CLAP HANDS, AND ALL PUBLIC STARTED TO SCREAM "U-KNOW" I ALMOST SCREAMED TOGETHER. GOD THIS FIC LOOKS LIKE SO REAL, THAT I FEEL I'M INSIDE THE STORY, YOU'RE SO AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE <3

OMG -- angry mad yunho is wow... - I am moaning too (LOL)

And oh.. MAZE ? I am so in dire need to hear him sing that in full again. Wishing still .... I LOVE JAE's voice singing that.

Yunho stares. He stares and he stares. And he swallows hard and he stares again.
jae's so pretty *O* /staring at the pic

they literally confirmed it to everybody in the stadium that they're dating. by making out. shoot. /dies

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