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Ice [14b]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae/JaeHo
Rating:NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: Btw, flat out. I had to go to work today urgently (drove 7 hours overnight), and now we have to drive 7 hours back and then we’re going away with the grandparents to their holiday home by the beach and I won’t be taking my laptop so no updates till next week probably cos we don’t get back till Wednesday. I know y’all are used to daily updates but family comes first. I’m already being a neglectful granddaughter-in-law tbh. Grandma commented that whenever she looks at me, I’m either looking at my laptop, my iPad or my iPhone TT________TT

AN2: This banner was done by atriums 



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And no, I did not read the pairing before reading. XD I wasn't surprised though. It seem to fit into the fic quite well, and I didn't mind one bit. ~~~ Number 69, ahahahahha. XD That's funny, LOL.

YES〜!This is what I call being REAL PARTNERS〜!!
I think this just shows how deeply those two belong to each other. They both receive and give love, not only in their daily life but also in bed. This is how exactly I imagine Yunho's & Jaejoong's relationship in real life. They are equal. U portrayed this very realistically and also showed Us how deeply their love runs for each other.
U made this a true 'love making' instead of simple sex with nothing in their heads but lust. I am really so glad U are such awesome writer because U make those stories alive and it's a real pleasure to read. Thank U for all the hard work and for always giving Ur all in all those stories. I really appreciate it!
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Edited at 2013-02-03 06:10 pm (UTC)

But I still need to comment. Sry for typo n internet spelling.

I love the JaeHo scene in this fic. The piercing drives me crazy! I am afraid to look it up to find out exactly how painful it would be for a man to get. Did we ever find out for sure where all jae's piercings really are? Going to picture him with this one all the time now!!!

That you are making it into a non au fic is awesome!!! I can't wait. I read planned seduction by YunJae lunatic where jae was in a graphic BL movie, and I am squealing inside because now there will be YunJae BL movie !!!!

OK ok focus on ice. Love love this setiing. So much is just perfect. The way they met despite everyonesmeddling, fates way of saying they need to be together. All the epic lines describing each side of the story that fut together in the end.

The charity performance n jihye made me cry. The parents n family in this fic makeme cry. The friend ship n teammates interactions are so fitting.

The smut is hot and amusing !!! I love that you threw in serious things n I hope seunghyun gets castrated. I don't know much about STDs, especially in guys, so I was wondering how it woiuldx spread. From the front or from the back!

I loved strong yet fragile jae,n the strong gun throughout just kills me.

Hwaiting with writing the rest of this. Looking forward to see yunhos reaction to phone sex scene (if you have one) for love in the ice ( perfect name BTW!!)

Awesome chapter ! I loved it !
i love how jaejoong get angry and worried when yunho he's playing, and I love the way you describe The game. It was very realistic, I was tensed because I could totally imagine changmin hurting and yunho throwing fists ! Can't wait to read more and I hope jaejoong will be here for yunho's next game ! Haha

Thanks for the update! Can't wait to see what's in store for our yunjae now that they out in the open. And there would yunjae moment right? Don't get me wrong. It's just I'm so used to Yunho being top all the time. Hihihi hi.

this is required a re-read! reading in a hasty and cramp environment (a.k.a office chair) was not alright!... however, this story is soooooo good that i can't contain myself to read from the first time i found you wrote it and keep checking my email for updates...

i hope you didn't get too many bad comments because it seemed like you were upset about it? i just wanna say that in my opinion, you got the jaeho dynamics just right! i'm a bigger yunjae than a jaeho fan when it comes to fics, but no matter what, in real life/a realistic relationship i find it hard to believe that they wouldn't take turns. i mean, come on. i'm pretty sure the very big majority of guys sometimes want to stick their dick in somewhere. the thing i have about jaeho fics though is that most of the time the relationship dynamics just aren't believable at all... but since yours are very much believable, it's so good!!

as for yunho, i think it'd go almost exactly like this... i mean, jaejoong's charms are so obvious it's hard to imagine yunho wouldn't agree to almost anything that guy wants xD i'm glad you made this story jaeho as well! and since yunho seems to enjoy bottoming more than jae, i guess there will be lots of jaeho action in their future as well :)

other than that.... i'm so happy they "came out" with their relationship!!! ;-; i mean.... yunho shouldn't need to be jaejoong's dirty little secret ;-; he has enough bad memories of that stuff already

i love loveeeee this XD
i love how you make jae's character, yun's character..it shows they are not flawless yet perfect for each other XD
and this chap.. kinda hot, knowing jae has his pen*s piercing..
i can't imagine how yun feel the pleasure /faints
enjoy your time with your family ^^/

HAPPIEST KID FOREVER I CAN'T EVEN COMMENT PROPERLY IM SORRY
BUT I LOVE YOU AND THIS FIC AND THAT WAS SO PERFECT IM IN JAEHO HEAVEN;;

lol. i thought they're first time would be yunho topping AND after the checkup. but jae breaks all rules. i still can't believe it was yunho begging for it. O.O

for the last three dialogues, i don't know who said them. was it yunho or jae who said the last sentence?

DEAR GOD, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH WHY ARE SO YOU AMEZING? OISJAÇIJKDAOÇIDJSA FIRST TIME WRITING JAEHO? W-WHAT? I CANT BELIEVE, 'CAUSE THIS IS MY FIRST TIME READING JAEHO AND :::::::::: THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST PERFECT SMUT I'VE EVER EVER EVER READ. JAEJOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG YOU LETTING YUNNIE SO CRAZY, I JUST LOVED IT. I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING, I'M FAINTING HERE U.U I FOLLOWED YOU ON TWITTER (GOD, AND THAT USER !) KASDÇLPODAKLÇDASJSKDA BECAUSE YOUR ARE JUST SO AMEZING, AND ONE OF MY FAVORITES FICWRITTERS. I THINK I'LL RE-READ THIS FIC LATER. THIS FIC DESERVE RECOMENDATIONSSSSSSSSSS ! My friend saw the banners of the fic, and said i should insipire in them to make one banner (because really, they're amezing, who made those are such increible :] ) and I said "OH MY GOD, DID YOU SAW THE ICE BANNERS?" and after i though "HOW SHE COULD SEE THE BANNERS AND DON'T READ THE FIC?" KJÇIDKJSÇOKJADS beacuse everytime I read a chapter I yell "OMG ICE IS SO INCREIBLE !!!!!!!" she's a fool really, i bet she will huff me for not obligate her to read this later. KJÇAOKJSADMÇOIJDIA <3

“Who said anything about me fucking you?”
man, yunho is insatiable >8) i'm more for yunjae than jaeho but somehow i find it really hot, the jaeho part *O*

thanks for sharing! <3

Yunho had not been afraid to show his unhappiness with him.
Yunho had been secure enough in his affections, trusted Jaejoong enough to
know that he won’t run if he showed him his displeasure.
Yunho had even threatened him with public humiliation.
And in between all that, Yunho had reminded him that he loves him.

this part is really really lovely. it reflects that with yunho by his side and him being able to tell jae what he did was wrong, little by little jae becomes a better person. he listens to what yunho says even though he's way younger than him. that's saying a lot :")

Oh, dear! Did we just connected the dots? For good? With Jae topping? Wow! Wow! Wow!

You made it so natural and beautiful! It's not sex, but love in there. So much love...

"I’ve waited my whole life for you" got me in tears, and then the JaeHo, and so wide-eyed at Yoochun being thrown in there, not to randomly mentioned I was having a normal convo today with friends when my reply of "connecting the dots" woukd make perfect sense but.had.to.stop.self, omg...

OMG that JaeHo doe! Ahshxjsvsydhsueusbhdkauxuxhsbhdisbeudjcbzkwhd GOSH! I really really love when Yunho are the Macho, but when Jae leads the sex, just blow my mind! JaeHo are one of the most sensual couples. And this one got a plus, THE APADRAVYA! Gawd I want to be Yunho here OTL.

SORRY for no comments before, but srsly, MY FUCKING SMARTPHONE HATES ME SO MUCH!! So... I hope this asshole let me to comment the upcoming chapters 😒😒😒

Edited at 2015-12-03 10:15 pm (UTC)