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Ice [15]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: I got derailed by my Sleeping Beauty muse… You’d think I’d have better control of my muses? But all of them are various incarnations of Jaejoong and you bloody try and control that man. It’s fucking impossible :-/ Also, totally haven’t re-read this cos I have to go to work and if I don’t post, I won’t get to till 7 hours from now lol.

AN2: This banner was done by unknowntibidip 


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omg poor jae, i didn't think his agency would just announcing something without jae's permission grrr
and i love mrs.jung here~~~ such a lovely mom XD i don't expect it's mrs.jung who the first run after jaejoong
and the last scene..what is that mean?? the haven't checked if the are 'clean' or not right? then they can't do 'it' without condom...... i think lmao

woohooo! oh gott in himmel, they're so awesome and so gonna marry each other (i wish)

Updatee kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Gosh I was waiting for this update so much
Yunho's mom is amazing indeed
And I like the part that whatever the controversy is its solved within the chapter
I'm in love with this yunjae
And thanks for the Chagmin x Jihye moments even though I want more!!
Please update soon again

Ooooh I really didn't expect such a shameless action from Jae's company, such an unfortunate situation, but at least it helped Jae to finally take this long awaited decision!

Don't hate that poor actor, he's such a crazy character, all the dramas I remember I saw him in he has similar - eccentric - roles, he's amusing! :P

And there was the part with the fan who gave Jae a lift... it just reminded me of Jae's movie, Jackal, when the crazy fan seemed to rescue Choi Hyun to later try to force him committing suicide with her.

The last part at the Jung residence was so intense with all those emotions - especially the panic attack-scene, the mother's composure impressed me so much!

Thank you for the wonderful update!


...because words can't describe how I feel right now.

Such a wonderful chapter

This was amazing. I love how certain people come into your life and they change everything for the better and help being everyone together around you even more than they were before. Jaejoong really isn't alone anymore. His family grew so much so quickly. Yunho changed Jaejoong's life for the better and brought warmth and love to his cold, protected icy heart and Jaejoong helped Yunho feel good again after all the heartache he had to endure because of such ugly people. This fic is something I look forward to everyday. Thank you for writing it. :D

while he was not aware of the upgrade of a fic.

English is not my language, so if you do not fully read your fic rules.

reading is very enjoyable and the storyline very interesting. I look forward to the next chapter

wtf is wrong with jae's agency,seriously?
i mean,yeah all business wanna make profit..but till what extent?
damn bastards.

anyway,i feel sorry for yun's sister but i hope yun and his parents would do something about it.i would be pissed if that happened to any of my siblings.i wouldn't keep quiet.

anyway,congrats on the six pages of comments!^^

loved it as always! <3 This story got *totally* stuck in my head and I keep checking back for updates all the time XD

i thought yunjae will broke up but u give us some fluff in the end...fiuuuh~
is anyone hear a bell ring?so it's mean yunjae will getting marry rite?

freaking love the story... poor Jae...

I almost about lost it when Jae was having that panic attack. I thought he would like faint 0r something tragic would happen. thank god Mrs. Jung was there and helped him out!

and aww that bathroom scene! so cute ><. i was pissed at Yunho's mom for jumping to conclusions, but then By the end she won my love again! aahhh idk if im even making any sense with this comment its just all over the place, but ya I loved the update! i can't wait till Yunjae actually connect the dots properly this time.

I... JUST...URGH....

LOVE the end though...

i was touched by the scene where yunho's mom helped jae! awwww
and ermahgerd i am sooooo ready for a yunjae wedding. just sayin~ hahaha

Just wanted to take the time to tell you how much I love, love, love "Ice."
It's been one of the best fanfics I've read, so far. The characterizations are great and the dialogue is well written.
Your hard work is greatly appreciated and I look forward to this story unfolding.