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Love In The Ice [5b]
Title: Love in the Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Non-AU, angst, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: A script for a new mini-series is left in Yunho’s apartment by his manager, and as he reads it, he becomes more and more intrigued. Unbeknownst to him, one of the leads has already been cast, and the contracts signed. When he too is cast in the project after expressing interest in the part, he gets the shock of his life when he arrives for the script reading to be faced with a person from his past. Someone that he has spent years trying to pretend never existed. How will they be able to get through filming this without killing each other? Or worse…

AN1: For the first time, people who read ICE but don’t read LITI will be missing out on something… ;-) Lol but you will see it eventually I guess so perhaps it’s a spoiler of sorts? This chapter in its entirety is also longer than any chapter in ICE so yeah… IDEK. Wordy Nikki is really too fucking wordy.

AN2: Oh and if you’re a new reader who has never read ICE, I really think you should because I will make a few references to it without actually spelling it out because the assumption is that everyone has read ICE and are familiar with the plot…


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ok. i think this chapter is brilliant and i don't know how you've manage to integrate even jaejoong's repackaged album... and OMG THAT SONG.

that's all i'm going to say on that.

i feel kind of bad for the other three tho... especially changmin. he's the one who has to play referee between yunho and jaejoong right now and well... he really needs help.

the most touching part of this chapter was changmin talking with yoosu and remembering and the red ribbons. that was just... it touched me and i was almost in tears because i was remembering all of them when they were together as five... and then it dawns on min and he knows where his hyungdeul are. it's that part where it just proves that their bond has not and will never change no matter how much time or pain passes.

i am also amazed that you're writing two fics that are related in a way at the same time... seriously... it's just awe-inspiring how you can separate the two tho you've just mentioned that you don't know if the two are still separated inside your genius mind...

i'm very eager and excited to know what else you've planned... for both stories of course~^^

and as for this one... what state will yunho and jaejoong be once changmin has found them?

update again soon!

i swear I posted a placeholder, but cudnt find it so u get a fresh one.

5b felt like it was another chapter as opposed to a continuance of the prev update, wondering how you decide on chapters - session based or content? Just an odd question , don't mind me

I like the development for min. I can't say I recall the term changdol-ah or what that means. I like the addition of kiss b, I think that's in line with the latest ice before the break up.

I am worried for jae, but something tells me he's going to like, no love it, the masochistic man. You've built it up n hidden what exactly is going to happen, so though not technically cliff hanger, we are hanging off the cliff!!!

Great writing, Hwaiting n hope you sort out your RL stuff and r ok

yoosumin interaction here makes me wanna cry ;;;;;;;; so much feels omg..

Yunjae please don't kill each other ._.

Emoshinki feels... ): the only thing that was on my mind after reading this was "what happened? What happened!!?"

Now I'm so curious as to what happened in Japan. It must have been awful with the way Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun reacted.... I hope Yunjae won't hurt each other. I really do, but I think that might be too much ask right now... Either something good comes out of this, or it just gets worse. >-

Yeonhee Hee and changmin make a funny pair.

Joongki and ah in is oblivious to each other. Man. When will they notice??

There was a spoiler for Ice!!

I wonder how very very very closed off the love scene is gonna be. Them and some cameras?

I see that yoosumin are slowly mending and bonding especially between junsu and changmin. Changmin sounded most harsh on junsu the most.

I hope changmin finds them before others do.

And the cover for the repackaged album...wow. I only thought of it as why only love, not yunho only love but it could be anything. But putting it like that make sense. O.O

It is a very intelligent game of words. Y can be interpreted as the first letter of Yunho's name, but the pronounciation of the letter itself is like why.
So, we can take the Y like: Yunho, why? or Why, Yunho? as well.

OMG! (again, as promissed)
I think I have a fucking converter within my brains. When I read, I SEE everything. It's like you made a YunJae making film about the drama they have to make in your fic. I practically see everything.

As I understand, Jae is playing a very dangereous game here. I hope he is not searching for revenge before Yunho gives him (finally) the chance to explain himself.
The game seems to be out of control already.