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Love In The Ice [6]
YJ06
beeswaxing
Title: Love in the Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Non-AU, angst, fluff, romance
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: A script for a new mini-series is left in Yunho’s apartment by his manager, and as he reads it, he becomes more and more intrigued. Unbeknownst to him, one of the leads has already been cast, and the contracts signed. When he too is cast in the project after expressing interest in the part, he gets the shock of his life when he arrives for the script reading to be faced with a person from his past. Someone that he has spent years trying to pretend never existed. How will they be able to get through filming this without killing each other? Or worse…

AN1: SHORT CHAPTER IS SHORT!!!!!!! REALLY SHORT! >>___________>> And we all do really fucking stupid things sometimes so cut him some slack, ok? Don’t hate him for it because sadly, as rational as I am, I have done completely irrational things because of my husband. Not this scenario, but crazy enough for people to question my sanity.

AN2: Oh and if you’re a new reader who has never read ICE, I really think you should because I will make a few references to it without actually spelling it out because the assumption is that everyone has read ICE and are familiar with the plot…

YH01

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Yes, it was short, but I really liked it, liked how Yunho didn't behave the way Jaejoong expected he will react to the provocation, liked how he made Jaejoong admit at the end that he just didn't want to be the one who cave in first - especially how he was the one who laid down the rules between them, and also I liked him confessing that he still loved Yunho!

I can't wait for the next chapter, but I'm also very excited about the Ice updates too!

i'm going to miss your spazzing :( . keep your healthy and your happiness.

fiuhhhh i love the last lines .... you re always be my angel

i seriously did....call me a sadist or masochist...i just love the hurt they both cause each other despite deep in love...because i believe that only those who love you would hurt you so yeahhh..this got to be my favorite chapter and i've already read it trice..XDDD
sooo loved it...

Looking at a few comments I may be the only one who felt this way...
But I'm siding with jae. Of course I can't be sure its not my jae bias speaking. But really, yunho is overreacting IMO. You've drawn him as a jealous posessive one, but so is jae. And jae wasn't given that much of a chance to explain. Yunho doesn't even know jae was jealous of ah in. Irrationally so.
I mean jae has had two of his I love u's practically thrown back at him. Jae has more reason (imo) to be insecure. To not want to give in, in risk of getting crushed beyond repair, if he isnt already from how yunho left him before. I don't see why/how yunho can jump to conclusions about who the song was about to begin with.
There is still confusion about Japan, did he sex him up *cough* so good, or did he hit him? I thought the former but I can't tell why the big fuss then. Marks go away as long as it doesn't damage him long term, it'd just be helps rough bedroom time... So confusion, yes.

I wasn't near tears in thius one. The rest yes. This update, unfortunately, no. But I love u for updating.
Thx for writing

it's alright because i love the way you lie, i love the way you lie hehehe yunjae is love even if they are suffering acckk >_< maybe i'm a masochist i tried to run but i dont wanna leave?? lmao i can't help but sing rihanna's song hahaha

They are so broken in this~~
Kiss B was really a bit rated song when I read the lyrics back

ermagad...the dramatic tension in this one, all that yoyo-ing back and forth. I'm dying for the two to just kiss and make up. Totally looking forward to them filming their intimate scenes in the drama. :O

*bawlmyeyescriedsohard ;;_;; thank you for update!hwaiting with your work (:

All I'm thinking about is how much I don't want you to end ICE. TT_TT</p>

This chapter is full of some deep shit that only YJ can mash up. I'm mindblown by everything. I need a breather. Be back later.


gosh they are both so broken here T.T Yunho is really hurt thinking Jae had another man, or at least thinking Jae did this just to hurt him. he is too hurt to trust Jae right now, so sad. I don't know that I have a "side" I'm on, both I guess. Jae has always been insecure, and Yunho knows that. Jae wasn't saying much here, but maybe he's just confused? He wanted to be "friends" and now he's pushing Yunho like he wants to be lovers... I feel for both of them. thanks for the update!

Edited at 2013-03-15 03:18 pm (UTC)

omo....jae is yunho weakness!!!
jae don't treat ur man like tat!!

our poor yunjae~ T^T
why, why, why...? :c

gah! these two should just be honest if all they're going to do is hurt themselves and each other with denial and pride. now honesty won't even be trusted. what a messss.

oh okay, I was wondering where you went D: I hope life gets less crazy D:
but ;__________; omg..... sobs this is so dramatic and intense.... was on the edge of my seat tbh ;; argh their relationship is all twisted up and they need to get it sorted out T___T oh gosh I really love how you created the tone, I think we all felt the different emotions D:
OTL OTL they really can't stay friends.... THEY NEED TO TALK D8 a nice long conversation...

I can really feel the emoshinki in my kicking in from all these feels T.T Poor Jae, he really doesn't know what to do...And Yunho bearing the brunt of all his actions. I hope they can resolve this issue, but I really love complicated and intense relationships that are laden with sexual tension so this is perfect xD