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Ice [18]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: I freaking wrote this in less than four hours and forgot to eat. Mistakes are all mine, and rambling and everything. I don't know how this is going to go cos hunger pangs!!!!! God... I haven't written this is awhile so please be kind. I miss them so much though you don't even know. I know a lot of you prefer Love In The Ice but I prefer Ice...

AN2: This banner was done by unknowntibidip


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Truthfully, my first love is the Jungs (Sleeping Beauty), follow by Ice & then LITI. How can ICE be second to LITI? You have to read the original first. Nothing beats the surprises when you read the it the first time. What i like about LITI besides the drama/angst & sexiness is recalling those scenes from Ice. LOL you have to enjoy Ice first in order to fully appreciate LITI.

Love Mrs Jung here. No one would have guess that Mrs Jung will be the one to understand Jae best. Caught me by surprise, which is GOOD! I love how she can relate to Jae cause it does gives Jae strength. Jae is just a little insecure about himself & Mrs Jung is has just the right pushiness and experience to handle him. LOL can't imagine which side Mrs Jung will take if YJ have a big fight :)

Oh god.. I can't believe that i can't read another chapter ): i'll wait anciously for the update (: now you'll have to Now you'll have endure me forever. HAHAHAH i'm seriously thinking to start to read Love In The Ice, and after sleeping beauty >< what do you think ? I REAALY NEED A BRAIN TIME BRAKE. anything better than Yunjae *-*
This chapter was like you said "a life lesson" haha you've described so well, that it seems you have through these before. And that's what make you so increible, everything you writte seems so real and at the same time, soo beautiful to be real ... things that just beeswaxing can do. HAHAHAHHA jaejoong you've made the right thing coming back to Yunho. You're inseparable. You need eachother. <3 YOUR AWESOME, AND I'LL NEVER STOP SAYING THIS, THANKS FOR THE AMAZING STORY THAT YOU CREATE, I THINK ICE IS MY FAVORITE ONE, FROM ALL THAT I EVER READ <3 fightinggggggggg ~~

goshhh i dont even know what to say for this chappie...
its got so many hope in here...
altho i think i can be being safely hopeful with no regrets...
n thanks to yunho's mom for keep n help jae to keep his sanity...

will look forward for the next update <3

I'm so happy that they made-up! I honestly thought that the whole situation would Yunho would turn out for the worse, but luckily I was wrong! :D Even though Yunho is not the least happy with the situation, at least he understands Jae a bit better. I fully understand Jae.

And yes, this chapter was indeed the "Chapter of Life Lessons" for me as well. Mrs. Jung sure has been through a lot of valuable experiences she can share to her kids.

I really liked this chapter! :D

i think it's my first time to not read your update immediately, my lecture is killing me T^T
i like the way you desceribe yunho's mother and can't help but to imagine Kim Sung Ryung > <
and those selca is perfectly fit with the story, especially yunho's expression...

Really, he has lived in that bog of eternal stench for 15 years.

Really, he has lived in that bog of eternal stench for 15 years.


I'll make you a prince. The Prince of the Land of Stench!



Now I love mama Jung! She is not only wise but also loving. Her life taught her how to deal with life struggles. All she wants now is to help her son Jae go through his battle with Hero and make Jae understand and admit he is both Hero and Kim Jaejoong and make them coexist peacefully. She wants make him discover his strenght and use it to help him stand for his dreams... and for his love.

Edited at 2013-10-21 11:41 am (UTC)

'A lawyer can make the irrational sound rational.'

This sounds sooo cool! I'm not a lawyer but when I'm working in the future, hopefully my boss will be like Mrs Jung

'A simple smile made me go from wanting to fire half the accounting department to buying them lunch the next day and giving them the opportunity to air their grievances so that I can work on fixing the problem.'

Such a cool story... makes me wanna go Yunjae fighting!

"But what is your air though? How do you breathe?" THIS and all the lessons, ahh♡

"Jaejoong, I hope you know how lucky you are. I seriously hope you do for god’s sake…" yeah, I hope the same Jaejoong is such a lucky bastard(? OMG OMG OMGGGGGGGG~~~~~

I'm so very sensitive right now cuz I'm suffering several PMS so, please forgive me, me and my strange-and-randomly-overreacted-full-of-feels comments OTL my hormones are playing around like a little brats in kindergarten at their free time

So, I love the way you made up the Mrs Jung character. She's so wise, and so far, one of my most favorites characters here. She sounds like my grandfather, and that fact makes me love here more.
And this one specially: If you can do it, why say try?

You're so good, and at least this one is a fanfic, you put it in so much "Life Lessons" as you said before, for who wants or need a little push on the right way, or a little advice. As me right now.