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Ice [22b]
YJ06
beeswaxing
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…


AN1: I wrote quite a bit of this at work... PLEASE FEEL SORRY FOR ME.

AN2: All credit to whoever made the edit included in this fic :O

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I cried when yunho realised that jae left. i've got nothing else to say other than yunho is really really patient. shit, let me just sit somewhere and cry because this is kinda painful.

I NEED A BLOOD DONOR..AB BLOOD TYPE...
Soooooo hot...*fangirl mode*
Author-shii...this is why panty liners are always out of stock :)

I know this sounds sadistic/mean, but i hope something happens to YH when Jae is gone and then he feels super guilty about it..and then it's JJ's turn to suffer and try to get YH's trust back....it can't always be one way because then the relationship isn't one worth rooting for...at the moment, YH deserves someone better and JJ needs to prove that he's worth it (can't just be all about the sex solving their problems...*gasp*).

i miss commenting on ice !!!
i believe jae has a solid reason, i'm one who does that too...and i swear, them being together is beutiful but that last paragraph dear...waw!!!

I don't know what to think anymore. What is life but a concert gone array and hot sex to make up for it only to lead to a broken mirror?

How are you able to write something like this at work? hsihlhihxfhijfng. I shall enjoy the opportunity to gush my feelings out to you. It is too much to trouble to do it by any other mean. I still don't know why you initially disabled them, but I'm okay with it either way.

"Yunho tugs his tank top up and over his head"
^ FUCKING HELL JUNG YUNHO. I REALLY REALLY WANT YOU ON TOP OF ME RIGHT NOW!!
AND JAE... OH GOD JAE!! HOW CAN YOU BE THIS WICKED?! GOD YOU ARE SUCH A... I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN..
I was imagining Yunho's stare when I read #LITI something sbout the moment that Yunho glares at everyone in the room and his glare onyl meant one word: "MINE"
Oh dear God please forgive me for I have sins because this fucking pair named YunJae is totally ruining my life and sanity right this instant..

"And the entire arena gasps as he tears it, ripping the sweater easily, exposing Hero Jaejoong’s milky white skin, as he continues to rap."
^ ARE THEY GONNA BE FUCKING ON THE STAGE?! OMFG someone take a fancam!!! WE CANNOT MISS THIS!!! LMAO


“Mine, Hero Jaejoong.”
^ I'AM SO DONE RIGHT NOW... SO FUCKING DONE I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO BREATH ANYMORE... OMFG I NEED A MOMENT TO RELIVE MY LIFE... AND I'AM NOT EVEN FINISHED THIS CHAPTER BUT OH DEAR LORD I NEED A BREATHER... and WTF, Yunho is MAAAAAAAAD :O

TT_______TT
I know Jae has his own reason for leaving Yunho but.... it just fucking hurts... why can't he just tell Yunho about it before he go so that Yunho will know he's coming back?
”I am not fucking leaving you.”
Jae.... come back soon.... please... I just need you.... Please.... TT____TT
Yunho needs you... he's always in deep shit without you....

Looking forward to the next chapters~~~ TT____TT)/


P.S. the banner just killed me... and I'm sure a lot of people just died looking at it... LOL

just drop since i promised to drop a few words.

I think, you just left me wrung out. God, I feel so much for Yunho. No matter how patient you are, there will always be a time that it becomes so tiring. Regardless if Jae has a solid reason, the hurt was there already. Another seed of insecurity was added already.

*sigh* Jae, the end does not justify the means. You gotta learn your lesson, you gotta learn. You're lucky that Yunho is Yunho. Otherwise... aigoo. My heart hurts. TT_TT

I was finding it difficult to concentrate with the actual plot sliding downwards and all the smexy hot stuff floating...Not that i'm complainig( Fuck im not YJS if i complain) ...
But yeah i was waiting for this update cause the whole Jae hiding things from yunho was getting on my nerves..so altogether this is the 3 rd time he left his lover with nothing but a piece of paper expecting him to trust..and trust yunho does which is soo romantic in a abnormal way for me...I find with a note that the love of my life has left me for the third time with no single explanation and asking me to trust..?? Even if i wait...what about the agony till the so-called lover comes back..True the agony is from both sides but to be left out wihtout even knowing the reason???..But then again i have remind myself that we are dealing with Hero and jaejoong and which is why Yunho is the only one who soley understand both his lover's personalities..
But gaaaaaaaaaahhh.........how would hero feel if yunho did the same thing..i just feel it's so unfair to be left in dark no matter how safe it is to remain unnoticed of all the happenings..
I'm sad for Yunho( I'm Yunho biased...)...TT_TT

this chapter is all sort of mixed emotions. i think i'm one of those people who don't like jae right now because of him running away again. tho we don't know what's the purpose of this action but i think a little consideration of yunho's feeling would be great. i really admired how patient and how big his love for jae to understand him and all his actions. tho i have to say i admired them both since jae is confident that yunho will still accept him despite everything. but hopefully this will not happen again, pleaseeee. talking is still the best way to solve problems and discussing it to your partner since love is a two way street.
anyways, your update is always been anticipated and you always put your readers on emotional turmoil which means you are doing a great job in it. thank you.

Edited at 2013-05-29 04:54 pm (UTC)

Damn while reading some of the comments I can see why you have disabled them...crazy people. Just enjoy the fanfic!!!!

So, sad that Jae believes he's alone, but yeah his mentality makes sense to me in a twisted way. :( Makes me want Yunho to be able to plant in him a sense togetherness. Just something that will make Jae feel like he does not have to deal with all of this alone. The day that happens is when their relationship will truly be solidified.

Your chapters are great. You are a great author. Don't let stupid readers get in your way, cuz I don't think we all thank you enough for the wonderful stories you have provided us with and how fast too. XD

I wonder what happened this time!
Although I really enjoyed how cunningly Jae distracted Yunho I still can't agree with his ways of trying to solve everything alone!

They just decided to move in together which made me think he will at least make an effort to consider dealing with things differently from now on but he still behaves as if he had nobody to lean on, suddenly disappears without any explanation! It's just so frustrating! He better have a good excuse for his impossible behaviour because I'm very disappointed in him right now!

Thank you for this wonderful chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

TRUST....blind trust....that Yunho has to do for Jae....trust him to come back to him.

Too bad Jae can't tell Yunho what he is doing. Have to wait and see what happen next.

Ahhh... i just luv the smexy scene *really wish i could marry faster ;>* And anal beads?! You make my day so much brighter *and i have to read this at the office coz i really cant wait no more!*.The pic of sexy Yunho and a vixen jaejoong really is a treat. So this story will end at 25 chapter? I'll wait patienly for your Love In The Ice then..