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Ice [22b]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: I wrote quite a bit of this at work... PLEASE FEEL SORRY FOR ME.

AN2: All credit to whoever made the edit included in this fic :O


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I swear I am beginning to sweat with each new chapter since chapter 20, (I think) as the sexual tension and passion between YunJae is melting me.

Jaejoong really reminds me of Runaway Bride.
Seriously, I think it takes great faith, believe and trust on Yunho's part to believe and trust that Jaejoong will return him.
Jaejoong really doesn't have a good track record.

I find although Jaejoong seems like the one using sex to solve their problems or to stop their arguments, I feel like Yunho does the same thing but he is subtle and a tease.
Yunho's way of doing it is not as blatant as Jaejoong.

I'm curious what Jae means by sorry. But I hope Yunho will trust him no matter what happen.

Okay, now I think I want YunHo to give Jae hell because it's definitely what he is doing with YunHo... I think I just want YunHo to leave Jae the way Jae left him. I'm so mad at him right now...
I really don't know how you're going to do to reconcile me with JaeJoong... ><

BUT, I love this chapter, like all the others chapters and fics you wrote. I love the way you write, and, GOD, just with your words you manage to make me so angry/sad/mad/pleased.. And a lot of other things... Good job!

I'm so sorry if I made a lot of mistake, but I tried to speak out my thoughts...

Thank you for sharing it. And I hope to read you soon ^^
Gambatte for your next chapter!

Ran ♥

Ran? Ran? The Ran whose edit I used in ch22a??? Sorry if I got the wrong person but IDK who to credit OTL

And I understood you perfectly, don't worry ;-)

I thought reading LITI would make me ready for Kiss B performance but...ehh.

I totally understand Jaejoong, I'm kinda like that too and I love Yunho for trusting him.

I was happy though, and this chapter shattered my mood into a thousand peaces *sigh*

Still, thanks for this update :*

tsk! clearly jae2 deserves more spankings from yunnie for leaving him like that for the 2nd time. poor yunnie; have to guess most of his boyfriend's actions and reasoning all the time. not that i oppose for jae having secrets and that he doesn't tell yunnie about his plan. but trust, patience and tolerance could run dry too. hope jae2 could do something before yunnie decide it's enough.

Oh goooooooooooood I think I have a guess about the dilemma Jae has ;)

i love how much yunho loves him!
he's growing into a less simple all black or white character!
he (a fictional character) makes me admire what love makes you do...
i'm really wondering what Jaejoong plan is about!
i'm sure nothing trivial would have made him get away from yunho..
can't wait to know more!
and thanks again for such a perfect update!
hwaiting on more!

OH MY GOD I SPOTTED IN YOUR DRABBLE NIKKI I'M SO SORRY ;;;;; JDBVFIUSEBG OTL I wasn't sure about the commenting thing..... OTL
um but ;~; commenting about this chapter... erm
so like halfway through Jae's plan to leave to LA and think for a while reminded me of you.. you always talk about how you run away from issues and it made me kind of sad for Jae but still, everyone has a different way to deal with things :c so I won't criticize lol and I hope Jaejoong can figure out everything... and poor Yunho oh gosh ;;; but I'm excited to see the end result anyway! also, the entire concert was just lovely *____* I LOVED IT! Kiss B was just omG... kjdbhi8useho so epic hahaha I loved the way you described it~ super intense ; v;

I just worried that yh will ever get tired with this runaway project of jj.. hope jj can be more open to yunho about what stressing him.... run away from problem won't do good...

I need to find someone to distract first aish... anyway Jae is like a vendo machine - always hot & cold, if I am Yunnie I'm gonna go crazy too.. Even though I love ICE too much I think I wanted then to get settled already too coz I think my heart hurts every time Yunho gets hurt... This is a very long chapter thank you very much...

Ooo~ an update!
Wasn't sure rlwhether to comment but since there are so many~
Firstly damn this is hot~ yunjae are so unf on stage...

Though... Jae is real sneaky... it makes me feel sorry for yunho, cause although I want them to end happy, realistically that blind faith yunho shows when jae runs/leaves is bound to wane... as well as slightly annoying. Jaejoong doesn't let yunho in as i would've thought he would by now but as pointed out jae has nostly relied on himself for a long time, so it probably all makes sense whatever his plan is... to him anyways...

I kinda wish that jae could get a taste of his own medicine; though since he seems to be doing what he thinks is right to help, I dunno. ..
Maybe jae needs some junsu insight~?

after reading this chapter, i've made a conclussion that i don't care anymore whether this story will have a happy / sad ending. This is epic! And it should end in a grandeous angsty way whatever you have in mind. I love you...

I'm all sad now, poor Yunho T_T. I think I'm going to combust from all the suspense! Great chapter!

the part that i've been waiting for and wow was that awesome. ok i was actually imagining that entire part in my head and it gave me goosebumps... LOL

anyway, i was really hoping that jaejoong would try and explain but then... he didn't and distractions happened and well... jaejoong is gone yet again.

what the actual fuck really happened for him to just leave yunho without an actual rational explanation? but then again, hero jaejoong was never the rational type. so i wasn't supposed to be expecting as much.

i gotta give yunho props for being so... forgiving. you really can see that he really loves jaejoong and believes and trusts him implicitly. i admire that about him. there's only so many people who've got that kind of characteristic. *sighs*

so the drama's going to be over soon? kinda wondering what mama jung's reaction will be once she finally finds out the whole truth about yunho's and seunghyun's (the bastard) relationship aside from extorting money from him...

update again soon!

Aside from those hot stuff i'm just extremely proud and happy for jaejoong's act of showing a part of himself during the performance. I was confused at first about yunho's anger but daaamn that was hot. Even jaejoong got too distracted to sing. And it's about time yunho tries to believe in jaejoong's decisions. Because if yunho continues to be insecure about jae's choices they will never get to accomplish anything properly. /sighs the things they do for love.