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Ice [22b]
Title: Ice
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, fluff, romance, mild angst, drama
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here

Summary: Yunho knows ice very well. He is the youngest team captain in the history of the best professional hockey team in South Korea, bringing his teammates to glory time and time again. But a little something has been missing lately, a spark that everyone has grown to recognise from the young man. His teammates know exactly what’s wrong but he refuses to acknowledge it. Jaejoong is much too young to be this cynical and jaded. At least, that’s what his parents say, but what do they know? They love their only son and only want him to be happy despite not agreeing with his rock star lifestyle. When the 29 year old finds himself in rehab after a sort of accidental overdose, his tearful parents give him an ultimatum. Now he has to figure out what to do with the ball of ice that is his heart…

AN1: I wrote quite a bit of this at work... PLEASE FEEL SORRY FOR ME.

AN2: All credit to whoever made the edit included in this fic :O


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Thanks for the hard work like always~! m( _ _)m

Jae being alone so long that I think he forgot how to be together.
Yunho love him enough to forgive him. Just want Jae to trust Yunho.

I wish I'm in there screaming with Jihye at the concert. YunJae together means most beautiful and sexiest scene in life.

*crying (sob, sob, sob)

why did you make this story so great, make me anxious everytime i read the chapter...i think i'll be crazy waiting for the next chapter...:P

i think this story is a piece of art, i love this too much...
i started feeling to not want to end this story...><

*can't stop crying...

even though jae might of been right if he were to explain things to yunho after everything is settled, he won't get rid of the feeling of betrayal, untrustworthiness, hurt that he left with yunho for years to come and maybe forever. he might be happy in the end but on quiet nights, it's gonna come back to haunt him. yunho will be thinking if jae is gonna up and go somewhere again.

what jae is gonna do, i don't think it was the best option to be doing. jae says sorry too much to yunho that's it's losing its meaning. from what jae says about him being the root of everything, it's partially true. he's blaming himself for it and causing it himself.

i'm not happy with jae right now. may he be remembering that heavy feeling for the rest of his life. yunho's gonna have a breaking point soon and he might just end it. even though the touches from the rock star entices him.

Jae has his own reason to leave.. Well.. Poor Yunho.. He just love Jae so much~

AWESOME update as always thanks for your perfect stories always , i hope i could understand JJ's personality more , why he is leaving like that again? poor yun , i can't wait for the update i want to know sooo badly what happen in jae's head ??

Great chapter!! WOW The relation between Yunho and Jaejoong is really intense. I really love Jaejoong here, his reactions are so unpredictable it always makes me go crazy...

This is my first time commenting on your fic (sorry I'm a silent reader) though I've read all of your updates and I really love everything you wrote. You're a great author.
Thank you for the update!

Edited at 2013-05-31 11:17 pm (UTC)

to love someone is to accept them the way they are.good or bad.
i guess yunho just has to do a lot of waiting to make this relationship works.wait till jae has enough courage to speak up his fears every single time he's hit with insecurities or whatever that bothers him.being older than yunho might make him think that he could resolve his problems himself.plus, that has always been his personality anyway.yunho being younger than him is not helping much i guess../sigh

*gasp* that edited pic at the beginning of this part is fucking perfect *o*

I don't get it why jae left yunho. Again. .___. What's the reason this time?

Well I am pretty new for LJ and found your LJ accidentally :-)
At first I only read one shots then a couple weeks ago I found SB and found myself reading each chapter non stop :-)
Since then I tried to read all your stories though some of them don't fit my liking....Sorry
Ice and SB are definitely the most favourite ones for me and I am craving to read more of SB one shots and the cross over between two stories. Reading Ice has made my emotions up and down. The plots are awesome author ssi :-)

In some parts I never understand Jae but I guess I know how it feels like 'after being alone for quite long time then at some points a person should adapt "togetherness" it might take times to adapt"

Oh oh I guess I write comment too long :-)
Looking forward to reading your new awesome stories author ssi :-)
Thanx :-)

This complicated YunJae/JaeHo relationship is a little too much for my brains right now. I really don't understand Jae anymore.
I wonder if this trip to LA (not knowing exactly when he will come back!!) is related to Seunghyun... I have a feeling... A bad one. I hope I'm wrong.
But poor Yunho is giving himself totally to Jae. And Jae doesn't trust Yunho and keeps secretss from him. I don't like this.

What is jaejoong planning to do? Hehe, both of them are too dynamic/happening~ Hmm, that picture of yunho's figure... :)

Thank you for writing these chapters!

okay..this is my 3rd time to read ice..
and until this time i still don't get it the meaning of "TP"..
i guess i'm such an innocent girl despite my old age #hufff T.T

Edited at 2014-08-15 01:29 pm (UTC)

Need a YunJae stage *^*

All.the.feels, everywhere!

Not again...
/runs to the next chapter/