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One Night in Busan [3]
Title: One Night in Busan
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Genre: AU, Fluff, Romance
Important: This is AU but HoMin are TVXQ and JYJ never existed. Basically the only non-AU thing about it. EVERYTHING about this fic is super freaking AU… I just can’t get BLOND BLOND BLOND out of my fucking head. Also, characters may be a little OOC but it’s fiction and AU and just roll with it, ok?
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. Please don't kill me.

Summary: It was meant to be a one time thing, and it takes Yunho a while to realize that a one time thing for him means exactly that.

AN: I admit defeat... I tried... I admit defeat. If you're observant enough, you know why i'm admitting defeat.


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kekeke i knew it...
i knew this was gonna happen when i read the 2nd chapter since the plot was too awesome for a two-shot....
and the best thing about this?
i am actually too happy that is longer hehehehe
i love this!
and ofcourse it is all blond jaejae's fault.
all his freakin fault...

I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this new story of yours, I like the concept with their sudden marriage on a wild night barely knowing each other more than a few hours, and of course I'm really glad it will turn out a little bit longer than how you originally planned it!

Thank you for this wonderful chapter, I really liked how effortlessly Jae won even the slightly jealous Heechul's! And I'm really curious whether Jae will have any chance to tell the truth about ending the marriage and everything! : D

Looks like this is going to be a mini chapter fic.

The way they both tempt and tease each other is so hot.

As much as they want to deny and step away from the attraction towards each other, they seem to be moving towards it.It's like there is this gravitation between them that cannot and will not be denied.

I wish you good luck and all the best in Korean.

So close and yet so far to Jaejoong oppa. ^^

I'm so excited this is going to be longer than 3 chapters! I'm really enjoying it so far c:

i told ya Nicki! you will never finish your fic as your plan to.. LOL

oh honestly i really love how you wrote a hint of MinJae! reeeaaalllyyy love it!

PS : i think you need to changes the title into "Paradise" LOL, just an advice *grin*

Edited at 2013-11-01 07:08 pm (UTC)

lol...yaayy, no more 3 chapter thingy, we have a real chaptered fic *dances in joy
i just knew it...jaejoong's past, inner turmoil, insecurities, and trust issue is just too complicated for this fic to be resolved in 3 chapters. and i'm not even talking about yunho's shattered future plan, boa's possible bitchfit, company involvement, and annulment debate yet. or even the real, non-flashback smut (that would take one full chapter for sure). there's just too many unresolved issues in this fic..
oh gods, lets just see how many chapters you ended up with nikki-san...just rest assured, the more chapters you give, the happier your readers will be xD
thank you so much for writing this in your spare time and sharing it with us. your updates always make my day ^^
have a good time in south korea! <3

i love this fic !!!
thanks for the update !!
have a great time in korea !!!
too tired from work to write anything
but i love the way you write so much girl , well done ^o^

it's more than 3 parts. hohoho! your muse is playing with you but who doesn't want a blond teenager jae anyway? i love his blondness now but i can also imagine this jae as the one during O days. he was just qpwojfphodif;odsivb;o! then as much as he is hot right now. <3

Will you be watching his concert today? i hope you won't faint if you did.

OMG, the photo just killed me!
PS. Heechul is so much fun in this fic :)

Your readers have snatched victory from the arms of defeat. I read the chapter with a stupid happy grin on my face and then I got to the authors notes...now I'm laughing out loud, plus I'm thinking how in the world are you going to keep your muses under control when you're that close to Jaejoon's aura!

I just love you more..

this one will more than 3 chapter??? Yay!!! \^0^/
changmin got his favorite umma already.... fufufu
Jung Jaejoong such a temptation that Jung Yunho will go insane and lost his mind... >\\\<

Enjoy your trip (even if it's for business)! And I really do wish you could meet Jaejoong in the airport!

I really like Heechul here. Jaejoong sure knows how to pull out the blond here. He looks so fine!
I'm happy you changed it into a chaptered story. It's really good. :)

Love your Jaejoong this time around.

And Heechul!

I knew you wouldn't be able to keep it to two or three parts. That's a good reason to love your writing. There always seems to be more.
You integrated Paradise into this so perfectly! I wonder if you did that with some of the others songs? WWW is the perfect album to write about in Ice. Ooooh.
This fic is fabulous!