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One Night in Busan [4]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: One Night in Busan
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Within 10 chapters
Genre: AU, Fluff, Romance
Important: This is AU but HoMin are TVXQ and JYJ never existed. Basically the only non-AU thing about it. EVERYTHING about this fic is super freaking AU… I just can’t get BLOND BLOND BLOND out of my fucking head. Also, characters may be a little OOC but it’s fiction and AU and just roll with it, ok?
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. Please don't kill me.

Summary: It was meant to be a one time thing, and it takes Yunho a while to realize that a one time thing for him means exactly that.

AN: So uh… Yunho went to Busan smiling, came back smug, wearing clothes that honestly don’t belong to him if you really think about it… Call me delusional, I don’t actually care anymore because shipping is fun and my ship is sailing off into the sunset ;-) ONE NIGHT IN BUSAN… Literally… bastard is fucking with my feelings ;;


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WOW
The weather in my country is already hot. But this chapter sure adds many more degree to it.
(*fanning face)

Great job, Nikki. I think this is the hottest NC scene you've ever write.
XD

And get well soon.
I know how suck the flu is.
Have a nice rest...

Wohoo, voyeurism. Can I sign up for the next session?

You said you can't write smut well,but what is this?
You pratically made me fainted!!
I bet changmin and heechul can't sleep well for a couple days.they will replay it even in their dream.

Yunjae's smut so well,really hot like hell XD

OMG that's so cute xD (lol idk if 'cute' is the right word...) I actually raised my eyebrows at that line -- "sliding home" -- it's really .. I can't identify where it is in the realms of sexy, awkward, sweet, romantic, weird, and awkward. LOL.

I love the realistic touch Yunho's awkwardness in sex gave this chapter. And how Jaejoong still enjoys it even if Yunho's inexperienced (in gay intercourse) <3

wow yunjae make love always sooooooo hot

omg. you and your notes. waaaaa~

go away mental images! hahahaha! youa nd your sex life eonnie. omg

i think jaejoong got me dizzy. omg that last part. WHAT A FIERCE CAT ERRR angel err i don't know!

all i can say is that, amazing writings as always and damn sexy blonde Joongie is... unfffff!

BRAIN DEAD.
dead dead dead beautifully urghhhhhh
jaejoong you angel of devil ugh idk anymoar i dontttttt knowwwwhhh
who am i who are you
im in state of incoherent mess >->o
absolutely fucking love this. all of this
i cannot give proper comment im sorry my brain is really dead kthxbai

I can not help laughing, it's a funny scene as CM and HC see them in the act.HAHAHAHAHA
jaejoong like nothing, sassy >_

Not that being sick is fun, but thank you flu meds.

And the voyeur part was too funny.