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One Night in Busan [7c]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: One Night in Busan
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Within 10 chapters
Genre: AU, Fluff, Romance
Important: This is AU but HoMin are TVXQ and JYJ never existed. Basically the only non-AU thing about it. EVERYTHING about this fic is super freaking AU… I just can’t get BLOND BLOND BLOND out of my fucking head. Also, characters may be a little OOC but it’s fiction and AU and just roll with it, ok?
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. Please don't kill me.

Summary: It was meant to be a one time thing, and it takes Yunho a while to realize that a one time thing for him means exactly that.

AN: 19k words of madness that is ch7…

ONIB7c


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Seriously, you and your writing is just too much of a distraction to my work...I really cannot think of anything right now but yunjaeXX.

I hope it will not affect my work tomorrow when I clock in, now I cannot look at a bath tub without think of Jae on yunbear's lap.

Sigh, I really love this series and I am kind of torn between chapter 7 is almost nearing the end and the fact that it has three parts. Prolonging the torture and wondering what is really going to happen in the end.

I am rambling, thank you to making me into a rambling mess
zain


This whole chapter had me in tears...so beautiful and...REAL!

Your supremely intelligent Heechul takes my breath away. Talk about an industry veteran and true friend.

I have to quote an earlier comment (p_basya2) and agree wholeheartedly:

"you make me forget what's real and what's fiction"

It's not often that a fanfic can achieve the suspension of disbelief that is the heart of all good story-telling.

So looking forward to more.




I hope you'll forgive me, but I just reread all three parts of C7, and they just gave more and more.

You have packed more excellent writing and true emotion into this one update that most fanfiction has in a full run from C1 to finish.

Aish!

hmmm i like this whole you need changmins approval thing. i love their conversation XD

Nikki there is absolutely no way I will stop reading this story, honestly speaking I fell in love a little bit more after reading this chapter . Good work :)

Edited at 2013-11-17 09:13 pm (UTC)

oh come on nikki how can we stop reading when this is so beautiful me dont care if it is yunjae or yunjaemin its your own story so you are the boss but know that i would never stop reading
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although i am yunjae fan but if the pairing change to yunjaemin i will still like it cause its comes from u so yeah.

thanks for writing and sharing with us love u nikki♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♡♥♡♥♡♡♥♡♥

I don't think any of us are leaving. This keeps getting better and better. I'm so glad it didn't stop at 3 parts or w/e it was originally, it would have been a shame.

Oh God! yunjaemin??..spazz..spazz..That would be just ssdgjjklgds...

.i actually felt this pang in my heart reading this chapter...idk...i feel really bad for jaejoong cos of his background and he's always 'threatened' about playing with yunho but can't they also see from his point of view too? his insecurity about yunho's feelings...ah its sad..

after this chapter the story for me became a very rare one were I would not mind MinYunJae treeasome. But on the other hand I hope they stay as they are. Hope to see Chun and Junsu too

I am loving this story!!! But there is one thing that is bothering me... And it's that we don't know a single thing about Jaejoong in this story except that he is from Busan. Like what about his family? (If he has any.) He is 18, and was working as an usher for TVXQ! one time, but is he a student? What did he do for a living? (If he didn't live with his family or had a family to take care of him at all.) It just seems like Jaejoong isn't really .... I don't know...

He is supposed to be a part and an important part of the story, but his STORY doesn't appear to be important at all.

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, and your probably just leaving that stuff for later in the story but I just wanted to point it out. Was really bothering me, I really love the story though!

Just feel like it's difficult to feel anything for Jae if there isn't anything about him that I can hold on to.

<3<3<3 Keep on writing!!!

Brilliant, that was priceless!!!
Now I'm the one beaming, loved it!!!
Thanks!!!

drunk jaejoong is adorable jaejoong. i'm glad you pointed out some very important issues here. yes yunho loves jaejoong but there are real life obstacles that they must overcome and it just can't be solved by sex.

belated happy birthday!

As long as you keep writing it i wont stop reading haha it's interesting! I would really love to read some homin/yunjae drama!

I absolutely love this fic and especially Changmin so thank you ^^ and HWAITING ;)

are these going to be yunjaemin fic? hahaha this yunjaemin moment so adorbs <3 Jaejoong getting all the soft spot from everyone around yh. changmin is not a exception.... XD this is so good... keep writing bb~

Stop reading?!?! Bb give yourself some more credit :( I for one absolutely loved this. Like this three part chapter is my fav so far. I loved seeing everyone be more vulnerable. And the ending with Jae and min was just perfect. So adorably perfect. Cant wait for the next chapter. Since the beginning of this fic I have been a dedicated reader and each chapter never ceases to keep me coming back for more :)