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One Night in Busan [7c]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: One Night in Busan
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Within 10 chapters
Genre: AU, Fluff, Romance
Important: This is AU but HoMin are TVXQ and JYJ never existed. Basically the only non-AU thing about it. EVERYTHING about this fic is super freaking AU… I just can’t get BLOND BLOND BLOND out of my fucking head. Also, characters may be a little OOC but it’s fiction and AU and just roll with it, ok?
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. Please don't kill me.

Summary: It was meant to be a one time thing, and it takes Yunho a while to realize that a one time thing for him means exactly that.

AN: 19k words of madness that is ch7…

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I luv this story.. you paint the characters and their relationships so beautifully! Thank you~~~

Edited at 2013-11-18 01:57 pm (UTC)

After a long time I'm here ... ~
but I followed all your updates ... and again you catch me with this ff! *-*
It's different, very original and that's what I like about. You're amazing!!!
Thanks! ^-^ ~


LOL this goes beyond my imagination. Thought maybe Jae will suck up to Changmin with food. This is SOOOO much better. Minnie is hooked hahaha... Got to say that this is tough competition for whomever Minnie chooses later. Jae only needs to hook Yunho & Minnie, Minnie's partner will have to hook YJ & Minnie - poor thing!

I do love the euphemism ; girlfriends, wife & husband! It really adds character to this fic.
Wonder how things will turn out in the morning when Jae wakes ...up

oh my~ this is what i said about ur story is unpredictable,,
really, i did not see this coming hahahaha,,
yunjaemin,,cute~!! >////<
i like the way min n jae communicated,,
so deep and heartwarming,,

i know its late but HAPPY BIRTHDAY~!!!!^^
stay healthy and always be happy with ur beloved in ur life,,^^

Jung Yunho is a lucky bastard indeed..

I think part c was my favourite, the whole MinJae interaction and how Heechul told things Yunho he was completely unaware of till now and also this strange sleepover in the married couple's bed which makes me really excited! I wonder whether they will be brave enough to give a try to such a relationship or HoMin won't risk the ten years what spent together as band mates, best friends and everything else.

But part b with the HoMin-scene at their private room, the whole atmosphere, that serious talk with those surprising news Changmin shared with Yunho was also really heart-warming.

Thank you for the wonderful chapter, I like this story so much and really envy your vivid imagination! Please don't let those annoying comments you mentioned limit your creativity!

Omg!!! HoMin relationship is just so kyaaaaa~~~

Omg this is toooooo sweet! Even though I'm a total YJshipper and I will never think of Homin That way, but it must be quite obvious how much Changmin must have meant to Yunho after all these time. Changmin, the one that has been there since the very start, the one who stayed when everybody left, the one that has been there when Yunho's at his lowest. I think that their bond is really strong and deep in a way that they are practically just One. It's a kind of love that can't even be put it words.

And I'm so happy to see that Jaejoong sees this too, he respected the relationship between these two. I really love your writings man. It's so

Perfect! You depicted their relationship so well. I love you author-shii! Will be looking forward to how this story progress! ^^

This. Got just this. I love HoMin and JaeMin feel of all this. And if the pairing switches to any of those combinations you won't see me complaining. /insert flailing here/ I love this chapter.

first time reading yunjaemin love triangle story...but i like this story... hehehe ^____^

Edited at 2013-11-21 05:02 pm (UTC)

I panicked when I saw the AN and I logged in right away. I would never stop reading! I'm sorry I've been silent lately. I'm still struggling with my new job. You must have noticed that I usually leave lengthy comments on your stories. That's the least I can do as a loyal reader. I promise I'll leave comments on ONIB once I read the chapters thoroughly. Hwaiting unnie! And belated happy birthday! <3

Awww... Changminnie and Jaejoongie...
You're such a lucky person, Yunho. Not many people manage to get a wife and husband together. And likely those two will get along splendidly in the future.

I hope there will be more JaeMin scenes in the future. But in the purely platonic way please. Just please don't turn ONiB to threesome. XDDDDD

But I will be waiting for YunJaeMin story in your next story, Nikki.
XDDDD

I am loving the direction this chapter is taking and no way in hell could I stop reading after this! This part has definitely addressed a real issue and although the outcome was unexpected... damn I am enjoying it soooo much. Keep at it! Love your newest fic!

This is so sweet. I love the whole scene with Changmin and Jaejoong. lol, Yunho is so whipped *evil laughter* XD

Thank you for writing! This story is fun to read ^^