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One Night in Busan [8b]
YJ01
beeswaxing
Title: One Night in Busan
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Only god knows at this point thanks to JaeMin
Genre: AU, Fluff, Romance
Important: This is AU but HoMin are TVXQ and JYJ never existed. Basically the only non-AU thing about it. EVERYTHING about this fic is super freaking AU… I just can’t get BLOND BLOND BLOND out of my fucking head. Also, characters may be a little OOC but it’s fiction and AU and just roll with it, ok?
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. Please don't kill me.

Summary: It was meant to be a one time thing, and it takes Yunho a while to realize that a one time thing for him means exactly that.

AN: Wrote all of this while in the company of other people during long ass fucking meetings so there’s probably a million errors or whatever not to mention I spent most of this chapter arguing with Jaejoong in my head. I think I’m losing my mind. Please be kind about any mistakes etc.




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I don't blame Jae for being confused cuz I myself is confused in Homin's relationship. I don't ship Homin and I cringed when it comes to them being together cuz I don't see Min being Ho's wife in any form..only Jae suits the role perfectly.

Anyway, as long as Yunho keeps on stressing that he romantically loves only Jae...I'm just happy.

I am crying happy tears. yunjae at the end is so cute and endearing. I am glad yunho was not mad and that he's handling all the surprises JJ's throwing at him this well. He's seeing what Jaejoong is for, a mere 18 year old trying to fit in a world he's never ventured in before. Poor min though, shocked out of his skin. But am sure there's nothing that jj's cooking can't cure. At the end of your last update I got a li'l scared with where's this story is going but then I said to myself you wouldn't marr something so beautiful as yunjae. You painted them from the very beginning as something destined and I hold onto that. I am so glad now. This update made me so happy. I love yunjae and your writing makes me happy. Especially days like this when things are not going well, I read something nice and I start my day allover again with a smile

Hmm.... You and Jae in a fight? My money's on you ;-) Thanks for the update!

stop reading in the part of the buttplug tingy to breathe and yelled “NO” and I startled my partner in bed.!!!I'm in the brick of crying tho I already prepared myself
for what you have in mind and I nevet thought that I can hold my breath for a minute...whoooa!!! I'm into cardiac arrest I need a lifesaver...I don't know if what I'm saying make sense at all... You scared me tbh and yet I continue reading..This is sooooo good I don't think I can overcome my emotion right now...

I LOVED this! Your analysis of all the youtube videos was superb. The "threesome" in bed scene was amazing. Yunho's handling of Jae after Changmin left the bedroom was amazing. No wonder he's leadershii.
And Changmin's crashing interruption at the end makes it clear where he stands.

This threesome is going to work!

Wonderful writing.


hehe I just so happy to read your update.. thankyouu~ this chapter really, I don't know, my heart just can't keep calm, it's like crazy from worried, to hurt, to confused, to hope, but it's funny too.. << really can't describe it.. LOL

Your Jaejoong muse is confusing me.
I'm so confused as to what the baka boy is thinking and feeling.
It's like Yunho has turn his world upside down.

Lucky for Yunho, he has Changmin to keep him ground.
But Jaejoong, he has to figure out things for himself.

I am surprise that Changmin as so few words regarding Jaejoong's stupid action.

Thank for up date :D


OwO ... I read everything again ~ ...
*---* I loved your update ♥ .. however I have some interest in another couple that isn't yunjae ewe
I'm not Jaemin's follower ... I only read fanfics yunjae ... only yunjae!... but as I said earlier ... HOMIN is calling my attention!! ... HOMIN! ... No Jaemin!!!... I can say that you're the only one who has achieved it! ... so I'll go read yunjae u-u ... cause i'm worried XDD
Thanksss!!! :333

I just love how yunho handled the whole situation! Even the way he spoke! It was very touching! :D i cant blame jaejoong for all the negative thoughts going about in his head, im hoping they will start working on forever soon~~~ <3

AWESOMEEEE! This is so sweet *_*

i think this is sweet. LOL. i might have gone crazy tho. but jaejoong's plan had somehow worked and he had gotten his answer. there is no denying the love between changmin and yunho but that's a different kind of love. yunho really does love jaejoong because he is the only one outside of their industry who does not care at all. like yunho explained to jaejoong, i hope that jaejoong really gives yunho the time to get to know him until they can get to forever. :)

your Muse is not broken

Ha ha I think this chapter is fine!!! Okay it is good. I think the adult conversation is long overdue, after all they tend to fuck more than they talk. Too much emotions flying around.

Can't wait for more updates
Zain

it's funny how every chapter of onib makes me cry for jae. maybe i relate too well with him in terms of abandonment issue.
he's crazy as hell with all those crazy ideas in his head. but i don't blame him. he's young, & life is not being fair to him. homin package is not being fair to him. i was cheering for him at the part where he was going to leave yunho, anyone can sue me for that. it's better than being sandwiched between homin & forced to share your spouse.
i think when u love someone, u won't have any space left in ur heart for anyone else...that's why i hate threesome, it's too emotionally impossible. so..thank u for not giving me one, i guess. and thank u, for making everything ok in the end.

i love 3-somes but im so happy that it turned out this way because i couldnt see it working well any other way. thank you for this! <3

poor JJ baby~! good thing Yunho is so good! <3